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Emo's endless tears

Ok I want something that will make me cry and want to cut, I want something that relates to emo, I want something really really sad! I don't care how you do it, Just make me cry! Ok and I don't care how bloody you make it!

Rules
-You have to make it really sad
-You have to make it relate to emo
-It has to be more than 10 lines
-It can not be over 40 lines
-I can take a poem out of the contest, if I feel it does not fit the prompt
-You can have sensuality in it, just don't take to far!
-Make me feel like I am the one going through everything!
-Have fun!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on November 30, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 400
  • Final notes:
    Well, well, this was everything and more than I had expected! The poems given in were great! I loved all of them, and unfortunetly I only got to choose three winners. The three top poems I choose, I really did think they diserved an award. Thanks for entering my contest, and I hope life gets better for everyone! O,_o secerts don't make freinds, only broken hearts.....

Contest Winners

  1. But you are gone
    The sun rises burning sensitive eyes
    It brings only the promise
    by annesall235 30 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 16 3:33 PM 2008. In Pain, Dark, Love, Death
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. bLISSFUL eNDING
    The words they whisper in my ear
    Cut my heart like a million fragments of broken glass.
    by Rib-Cage-92 21 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 18 11:03 AM 2008. In Sad, Pain, Dark, Emo, Depressed, Suicide, Romance
    Silver trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  3. Stained
    see me shatter
    see me in pain
    by BKgal18 22 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 16 12:40 PM 2008
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. xXx...A Death Sentence...xXx
    Lifeless body,
    Soaken through,
    by Panicked-Puppet-xXx 39 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 16 12:01 PM 2008. In Pain, Dark, Angst, Emo, Cutting, Suicide, Bullied, Abuse, Sad
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  5. You're Better Off
    Too much pain,
    too much emptiness,
    by trueasagrayrose 29 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 17 5:49 PM 2008. In Pain, Dark, Lost Love, Emo, Sad, Angst
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  6. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4780117, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  7. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4780265, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  8. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4780229, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  9. Never
    by LarryATilander 21 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 16 11:52 AM 2008
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  10. Annebelle
    As i lay here numb with pain,
    I hear you laugh faintly in the distance.
    by Horrific Hollis 27 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 16 1:37 PM 2008. In Pain, sorrow, sad, emo, torture
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  11. Feel Guilty?
    by Walking Oxymoron 17 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 16 8:06 PM 2008. In Angst, Pain, Personal, Contest
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  12. You should have seen this coming
    You should have seen this coming
    She was always alone never knowing what to do
    by lonleygirl 33 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 22 11:08 PM 2008
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  13. Am I Emo?
    Scared of the reflection everytime I look into the mirror
    Hating the person that I have become to be
    by DinkyDiver 21 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 16 10:56 PM 2008. In Angst, Contest, Personal
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  14. Reflections of a sick girl
    Dark, a memoir of despair

    Edited so that it is less lines!
    by bellatrix27 27 lines, on Nov 17 9:38 PM 2008
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  15. Searcher
    by Eternally Fallen 31 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 19 7:04 PM 2008. In Sad, Personal
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  16. Last Farewell
    I run my fingers across my face
    The heat of my hands burning my skin
    by Raptur3 19 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 21 6:07 PM 2008
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  17. The Bloody Hell that we are
    watching a wound fade into a scar
    only fades the bloody hell that we are
    by BrittlesSkittles 27 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 29 3:32 PM 2008. In Pain, Sad, Thoughts, Life, Dark
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  18. Drunken suicide
    by xxhere4ubabyxx 27 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 29 4:13 PM 2008. In pain, abuse, adult, drinking, drunk, life, death, suicide, emo
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  19. Screaming
    Spoken Word. Lie. Fool.
    Same excuses. Same Shit.
    by isengardosgiliath 33 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 30 2:30 AM 2008. In Angst, Sad, Dark, Love, Pain
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]

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  • Anu-Nataraj
    November 16, 2008
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    mine is 68 lines
    D=
    should i remove it from the contest friend??????

    Anagha


  • nancy drew
    November 16, 2008
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    aww, you don't want something to make you cut, dear


  • bellatrix27
    November 17, 2008
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    oops too long, sorry!

    sorry. my poem was more than 40 lines. not sure how to delete my poem from this