Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

depleted dreams and other things...


-No religion bashing or anything close.
-No rhyme
-No centered entries
-Nothing vulgar, or horrific
-You may enter once per prompt
-OR combine prompts
-If you enter more than once put your name in the author notes.


So, there are some phrases that stay stuck in my mind. I play with them a few different ways, and never seem to catch what I feel. So, I am going to list the phrases, and you are to take them where you will; within the rules, of course.


The phrases are:

~Soft and Stinging

~heard it deeper than ears

~I shut out the sun

~fingerprinted skin

~the rain of man



Some other options:

-Don't presume the passion
burning inside isn't willing
to light you on fire
and feed relentless flames.

-I am in you, skin-deep
penetrating thickness
of heart and palms;
my heart, your palms.

-I am everything I am
because you cup
my heart in your palm,
and listen to love
beating against the odds.

-I wish I was wrapped in you
like before. When fingertips
formed skin tighter to bones
and shivers never ceased.

-I heard the birds. Sang you
a song of brokenness
and black and blue holes in
my soul. It is 11:11
and maybe if I make a wish
you will come true.



That should be plenty, but if not, check out my other contests.





Pic Credit: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v239/schemer4u/glittergirl.gif

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on November 19, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 400
  • Final notes:
    hugs

Contest Winners

  1. by MuddyKing 50 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 15 11:53 PM 2008. In Contemporary, Life
    Gold trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4779155, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4779673, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

Entries [3]

Add a comment

    : Comment:

Comments


  • Death of the Author
    November 16, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    -I am everything I am
    because you cup
    my heart in your palm,
    and listen to love
    beating against the odds. - <3