hey everyone.. welcome to my contest..
okay so heres the deal..
my dog has just died, and hes was like a child that i will never have..
Heres what I want
I want you to write/ enter anything
it would be nice if you could try and cheer me up, i would really appreciate it
but as i said you can enter anything.
Rules:
no bashing others
use common sense- I am 16, there are certain things i dont want to hear..
No chat talking
nO TyPinG LikE ThIs.. i HATE IT!
just have fun
oh and while it makes it easier dont worry about spelling..i'm horribe at it..lol
P.S. that is my puppy's picture..His name is Patches
okay so heres the deal..
my dog has just died, and hes was like a child that i will never have..
Heres what I want
I want you to write/ enter anything
it would be nice if you could try and cheer me up, i would really appreciate it
but as i said you can enter anything.
Rules:
no bashing others
use common sense- I am 16, there are certain things i dont want to hear..
No chat talking
nO TyPinG LikE ThIs.. i HATE IT!
just have fun
oh and while it makes it easier dont worry about spelling..i'm horribe at it..lol
P.S. that is my puppy's picture..His name is Patches
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 24, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: okay first off i want to say im sorry for closing early but my computer at home isnt working right.. this was incredibly difficult and you all truly deserved gold.. thank you for all your help..i laughed and cried, smiled and felt the pain..you all did an amazing job and thank you for being in the contest..
Contest Winners
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A song forms-
aperfect melody.• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
Once we were together
but that is no more• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Close your eyes, time to rest,
Goodnight little flower,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
by lowercase prelude 38 lines, 12 comments, on Nov 13 6:37 PM 2008. In Life, Hope, Society
Honorable mention
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dark angel
an angel iam insideby eternalsol 14 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 8 8:49 PM 2008. In Fantasy, Dark, Spiritual Honorable mention
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The tears roll down my cheek
like tiny silver bulletsby ashley-dani 12 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 8 12:43 PM 2008. In Life, Personal, Sad, Pain, My life, Loss, Dedication, Personal.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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Petals fall from trees that
trace a gentle sombrous absence;by Jasmine Rayne 29 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 14 2:33 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
My eyes beheld a sky one night, It seems so long ago,by michael perez 9 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 10 6:41 PM 2008. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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All alone I sit in the night. No one to talk to, no one in sight.by michael perez 18 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 18 8:28 AM 2008. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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This is about me and my boyfriend when I got hit by a semi. damn drunk driver.by StarOfDreams23 33 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 4 9:13 PM 2008. In everything, Pain, Love, Life, Hope, Sad, Personal, Longing, My life, Almost-Death• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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You give me money when I cannot pay
You give me light when darkness bars my way• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
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The ding of a bell,
A soft foreign sound,by colie50 43 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 10 10:34 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I'm losing sight,
It's almost gone.by colie50 4 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 4 10:16 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
three pins
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I woke up in the morning
another day at camp• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Believe it to be possible,
While impossible to believe.by WaterWings7 32 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 25 4:45 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Beautiful eyes, beautiful face, I'm shy to talk to you.by michael perez 20 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 10 3:42 PM 2008. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You will never be alone, God is always there.by michael perez 22 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 10 2:54 PM 2008. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I started running.
The wind enveloped my hair; tangly, un-tidy.by LucyLightning 37 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 25 1:22 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Drown myself in babies tears
And smite the perverted with the fury of the raped• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The day you appeared I lost my heart To you, to love.by michael perez 14 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 11 2:02 PM 2008. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Lord send my angel to sit at the foot of my bedby michael perez 21 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 14 3:24 PM 2008. In Spiritual• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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i am a lonely soul wandering in this worldby michael perez 54 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 12 3:00 PM 2008. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The revelation of the single-minded,
that think and feel, like they were never blinded,by The Jigsaw Poet 25 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 10 4:33 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
God created man
and set him looseby patrick20traveler 7 lines, 13 comments, on Nov 14 4:59 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
New day
Begins another moment of creativityby JustinReid 19 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 14 5:51 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
right through the puddle of water
and soaked you from head to toe• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Sky Lady be my Lady...and I will take you Home, beyond the crick, beyond the big ol' rock...beyond the lands where the jubba trees grow...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Oh God! Tom is dead
And he isn't in his bed• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Sleeping child-
turn your head and sigh• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I purred so very loudly / And I rubbed around her feet / But I do not think she heard me / She was purple as a beet• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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We met forty years ago
In high school nonethelessby Invisible 2 you 101 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 17 1:11 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Read me! (Scarey... BEWARE!)
by WhiteAngelCake 24 lines, 13 comments, on Jul 13 8:04 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Castigating carriers take deeper to the streets• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I’m a little pup
It can’t be rightby judmc 50 lines, 29 comments, on Jan 6 1:15 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Due to acomputer error it is impossible to post a Pre- Write whatever the contest this has been like this for 3 days.George -
best of luck judging poet!!!!
<3
Anagha -
I'm so, so sorry
My pets are like my children to me. My dog Buckshot has cancer and just had a 5 1/2 pound tumor removed 3 weeks ago. He's doing poorly and we're struggling with him every day. I feel for you.
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BTW, Patches is beautiful. He looks like a papilion or a pap mix. Adorable!
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he was a papillion, and im sorry about your dog..i hope he does better.. im here if you ever need to talk..
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I'm sorry he died....I'll be there for you if you need me and if you want, you can email me at mississippipride92@gmail..I know that's a really long email address sorry..but still.well I have to jet out so..I guess bye sarah
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i am so sorry for your dog, he was absolutely beautiful, and it's always so aweful when stuff like this happens..... i live with several dogs, and i couldn't imagine not having them here. *sends virtual hugs*
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i just ...
want to offer my condolences about the loss of patches, being a parent of three dogs myself i can relate to the pain of losing a pet. did you know that according to surveys by the spca... 80% of pet owners concider the pet family?
and of those , 44% call them selves mom or dad..
i'd enter your contest but nothing i have could measure up...
with much love
~teddybare~
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