This is a contest for all the hurt, for all the unloved, and for all the broken.
IF YOU ARE NOT SERIOUSLY ONE OF THESE PLEASE DONT ENTER
Im hurting right now,ALOT,I'm not coping...at all. I'm not even sure I can pull through this one.
I want to feel someone elses pain for a while. I want to know if i can help someone else indifferent of the fact that Im not sure I can help myself.
I dont care if you write free verse or ryhme or even chant (god forbid) i dont care if its a letter song or speech. I just want honesty.
If your hurting, if you know what its like to feel broken and bent,to feel pain beyond understanding and to snap. If you doubt your sanity sometimes, if you dont think you can go on, Im asking you,begging you,please enter.
Entries can have anything to do with any kind of pain sadness betrayal sad love suicide lost love brokeness darkness ect ect. please specify in the authors notes.
i dont want to know about the light at the end of the tunnel if its corny and unbelieveable but if you think you can show me real hope please do.
no sticky caps
try to use adequate gramma
If you want a prompt here
"And from the depths of despair emerges only the most persistent and broken of people, those who perished were weak and lucky....those who emerge are strong and lucky....those who are stuck bound for all eternity....they.....they are the strong, the weak, the persistent, the broken and the hopeless all wrapped up in one......they are............the lost." Quote By Errin Hellingrath 9-11-08 6:39 pm
IF YOU ARE NOT SERIOUSLY ONE OF THESE PLEASE DONT ENTER
Im hurting right now,ALOT,I'm not coping...at all. I'm not even sure I can pull through this one.
I want to feel someone elses pain for a while. I want to know if i can help someone else indifferent of the fact that Im not sure I can help myself.
I dont care if you write free verse or ryhme or even chant (god forbid) i dont care if its a letter song or speech. I just want honesty.
If your hurting, if you know what its like to feel broken and bent,to feel pain beyond understanding and to snap. If you doubt your sanity sometimes, if you dont think you can go on, Im asking you,begging you,please enter.
Entries can have anything to do with any kind of pain sadness betrayal sad love suicide lost love brokeness darkness ect ect. please specify in the authors notes.
i dont want to know about the light at the end of the tunnel if its corny and unbelieveable but if you think you can show me real hope please do.
no sticky caps
try to use adequate gramma
If you want a prompt here
"And from the depths of despair emerges only the most persistent and broken of people, those who perished were weak and lucky....those who emerge are strong and lucky....those who are stuck bound for all eternity....they.....they are the strong, the weak, the persistent, the broken and the hopeless all wrapped up in one......they are............the lost." Quote By Errin Hellingrath 9-11-08 6:39 pm
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on December 3, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 150, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: i loved this!!! so many enteries!!!! wow! it was unbelievably hard to choose but i did my best well done to all especially the finalists and winners great work u should check out eachothers entrys xo
Contest Winners
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You need to start going to church is what you said
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Mikayla was just that: Mikayla
she wasn't perfect, but then again who is?
by xo-bailee-xo 34 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 13 7:14 PM 2008. In Sad, Teen issues, Suicide, Depressed, Depression
Honorable mention
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I’d give up everything in this lonely world
If only to have another chance to liveby IcySpearQueen 36 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 27 7:42 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Happiness. Pure bliss. Overwhelmin Joy.
It has always been there,by hotpinkpenguin 28 lines, 21 comments, on Sep 15 9:40 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I hate myself
For trusting you
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With every goodbye, Your heart shatters• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Im stuck underground, all I hear is my heavy breath
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Cold granite marks the spot,
luminous green grass the plot,by nightangelgale 23 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 13 11:40 AM 2008. In Sad• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
by With Broken Wings 38 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 25 12:40 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by WednesdayJade 42 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 31 9:51 PM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Depression, Suicide, Hurt, Thoughts, Noguest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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A single smile
an innocent kiss• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
i will try my hardest to get this done!• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [80]
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A habit,
An addiction,by Horrific Hollis 84 lines, 19 comments, on Sep 5 4:14 PM 2008. In Self Mutalation, life, sad, addiction, anger, depression, warning, pain, cutt• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Blooming Poet 7 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 17 8:17 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Standing on the bridge, Cold dank night,
Looking down onto the piles of litter and broken glass,by georgie 18 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 20 11:41 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
once a lover, now a faint smile
the pebble's gone for good• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I see through what many see past
I played dumb to those who had the ability to break my cast• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I can not find the words to describe
just how I truly feel inside.by catrina 63 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 13 1:09 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Life presents a dismal picture• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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With all the I feel, is there any one around.by Isybou 21 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 15 3:09 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She was pierced on that night
by the shards of his words
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Sharp flakes from a choked relationship
Strewed upon the floor, from a colorprint• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Your words were the explosion
That sprayed the shrapnel into my head.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
An angel fell from the sky,
but no one can figure out why.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My Feet-Aching
My Legs-Breaking• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
So close, yet so far away
With me, I want you to stay• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Death is a Way of Life
Caused by Nature or a Knife• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The smell of cigs are in the air...
Must be the popular thing to do this year
by JustGoWithIt 47 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 10 12:06 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Broken dishes all around
cant keep the tears from flowing down• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
This is a poem about my heart. I hope you shall find it a preety good start.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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To be apart for centuries
Knowing that you would never see each otherby darkchemgirl 17 lines, 16 comments, on Nov 7 12:49 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Lured into
foliages of sugar coated promises• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I am broken
I am thrown away• Viewed by judge. -
by Lost In Dreaming 16 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 8 7:39 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I placed artificial flowers where the marker would soon be erected, and realized that the flowers, not being real, symbolized our relationsby Girl-Interrupted 18 lines, 14 comments, on Oct 22 2:08 PM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Sad, Dark, Weird, Angst, My own style, Death, My life, Loss
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BROKEN HEARTH THAT CANNOT STOP CRYING
I OPEN MY SOULD TO YOU, I THRUST YOU.by kmelot 29 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 13 10:13 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
Today the wind still blows
in me, in my heart,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I am a native
a animal in a cageby Dead-dreams 17 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 13 10:55 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
she would hit me and spit at me,
but i still stood.by Dead-dreams 15 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 14 2:10 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I see my bruised and bloodied face looking back at me through my reflection in the puddle on the ground of my pain-filled tears. This pain that everyone says will go away is the same as a fleshwound, it closes up but there's• Commented on by judge.
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Sometimes I can't even go to bed cause when I close my eyes all I can see is you in my head not one day has gone by that you haven't crossed my mind every time I remember I cry.by With Broken Wings 20 lines, 15 comments, on Oct 11 8:03 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by With Broken Wings 50 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 4 10:11 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I cry in the dark of the night I weep in the light of the dayby With Broken Wings 20 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 20 8:20 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Everything's different
by With Broken Wings 26 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 15 4:46 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Facing the horrible truth,
Without you in my lifeby With Broken Wings 35 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 18 1:18 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
in that hospital bed she lays
noone knows if she will liveby Guerrero 34 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 15 7:48 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Guerrero 6 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 13 6:07 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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i put your picture on my phone
that way i can never start to forget youby Guerrero 32 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 14 11:44 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Hiding, deep within the depths of a black heart. I sit drowning, waiting, watching, wanting. I have no identity, I mold and i blend, so noby Simply a Memory 26 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 9 2:46 PM 2007. In Pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Someone please save me, from this pit of devastation.
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You left me here
all by my loansomeby Followthebutterfly 31 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 21 11:10 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
My feelings seperate me from the worldly norm,
and shoot me into grey clouded, sullen spewby GlassGirl 48 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 20 12:58 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
To all the children of the world who's celebration's are forever changed due to the death of a parent.
by karma-n-peace 54 lines, 19 comments, on Sep 2 12:56 AM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Sad, Pain, Angst, Death, Depression, Message, Loss• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I gave you my heart to keep
and you ripped it all to shreds.by stitched-heart 36 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 15 10:54 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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i was going to enter but it says that my poem is erotic...even though its not lol...but if you want you can still read it its titled Once more...hope you like it and i wish you well with this contest and i wish you well in healing...its always tough especially trying to mend your shattered self by your self...but belive me you'll come back stronger than ever
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i doubt it
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