I want your darkest of dark poetry.

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on November 21, 2008
• Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 350, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 3 people
• Final notes:
  I want to say that I liked everyones entries, I'm sorry if I didn't get to comment them all, but thank you to everyone who entered! You all had amazing writes.
  ~Chelsey.

Contest Winners

1. Polluted Psyche

   Broken,
   only delusions fill them now.
   

   by Poetic Tasha 46 lines, 27 comments, on Jan 26 5:06 PM 2008. In Contest, Dark, Personal, Pain, noguest, Thoughts
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
2. Mommy, I don’t want you to die

   She said to me
   Mommy, I don’t want you to die
   As the tears welled up

   by Donchaquestionme 62 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 9 1:33 PM 2008. In Love, Sad, Personal, Pain, Contest
   Silver trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
3. Under Duress.

   by Walking Oxymoron 33 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 16 10:22 PM 2008. In Abuse, Adult, Angst, Pain, Personal, Sad, Contest, Dark
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
4. Bleach on Stone

   I said to her that I
   only used bleach

   by heaven all alone 28 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 17 10:18 PM 2008
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [29]

• Dead End

  Everyone is singing
  A maddening drone.

  by Dangerousparable 9 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 8 1:53 AM 2008. In Dark, Contest, Personal

  • Commented on by judge.
• I can't forgive

  I can't forgive myself
  For letting you go

  by Isolatedsouls17 138 lines, 19 comments, on Nov 8 3:54 PM 2008. In Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Dark, Contest, Society, Nature

  • Commented on by judge.
• Bad Life

  You are an awful person,
  flowers droop when you're around,

  by Poetess12 33 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 8 4:27 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge.
• blood moon

  lost in thoughts
  ripping at the edge

  by suran setsume 16 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 8 7:02 PM 2008. In dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• Daddy Please Stop...

  “Why do you do this to me?
  What did I do?"

  by tsukiyo 43 lines, 17 comments, on Nov 7 8:03 PM 2008. In Abuse, Angst, Pain, Personal, Other

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Four in the Morning

  by Vera Rich 53 lines, 64 comments, on Feb 26 8:34 AM 2006. In Dark

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• plague rat

  by stasis 16 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 31 11:21 PM 2008. In Personal, contemporary, thoughts, weird, society, life, other

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• The Four Poems Of The Compass

  A butterfly settles on the nameless Dome
  And cries aloud to call his Satyr's

  by Justin3 70 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 9 4:36 AM 2008. In Prose-poetry

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Rapists

  rapists are the theifs of the night
  lurking in shadows and behind corners

  by cheekycharlie 15 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 19 5:28 AM 2008. In Abuse, Other, Pain, Personal, Dark, Sad

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Casualty of Love

  Your words were the explosion
  That sprayed the shrapnel into my head.

  by stitched-heart 16 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 7 8:13 AM 2008. In Pain, Sad, Dark, Love, Personal

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Time Ran Out (Story Of Suicide)

  I- HER
  7. Hearts are like broken threads they can only be tied back by other threads –Me (Dramalady)

  by HereComesTheSun 219 lines, 34 comments, on Jun 20 1:20 PM. In Sad, Dark, Pain, Life, Hope, Death, Lost love, Message, Suicide, Teen issues

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• The Last Thing I Remember

  I hate it when it rains at night,
  Because that usually means Thunder and Lightning,

  by T.Mas 39 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 9 1:26 PM 2008. In Life, Sad, Pain

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Excruciatingly Unforgettable

  Addictive poison flowing through my body
  Toxic venom destructively numbing my mind

  by Peachy 15 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 5 1:54 AM 2008. In Pain, Thoughts, Life, Death, Sad, Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Razor Addiction

  These razors will be my death This sweet addiction...nothing can compare

  by Dragon24 19 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 3 10:44 AM 2008

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Last Moments

  The clock is ticking
  Tick tock tick tock

  by Ell13 33 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 19 8:17 AM 2008. In Execution, Pain, Dark, Sad, Personal

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Fuck this world

  by Guerrero 8 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 6 4:50 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Life

  Hearts ripped in two,
  The world,

  by Brandt.. 12 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 16 2:05 AM 2008. In Pain

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Stained

  see me shatter
  see me in pain

  by BKgal18 22 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 16 12:40 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Little One (plz read)

  by Dragon Of Darkness 33 lines, on Jun 28 1:53 PM 2007. In Adult, Abuse, Pain, Sad, Suicide, Loss, Personal., Depression, Death

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Black Cat (To Keith, Eye for an Eye)

  Vengeance should never be written; the emotions remain in those words forever, and regret for having written them, too.
  
  Option 2 for con

  by Dave Martin 69 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 8 9:17 AM 2005. In Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Violin Vampyr Vibrato

  The bow danced...
  to the ancient gypsy beat

  by Dark Otter 56 lines, 43 comments, on Jul 18 2:46 PM 2008. In Dark, Fantasy, Sad, Weird

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• My Suicide Note

  All the time I cry,
  But no one See's,

  by XfaceXdownX 24 lines, 28 comments, on Feb 10 7:47 PM 2005. In Other

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Burnt Asunder

  by FallingSideways 34 lines, 13 comments, on Oct 21 12:17 PM 2008. In Angst, Thoughts, Personal

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Hearts Burst Into Fire

  Sometimes the worst thing is a broken heart,
  Duh it's gonna hurt, maybe even depart.

  by XxXxEmoxXxX 18 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 20 7:05 AM 2008

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Sense Of No Belonging..

  The loss of feeling
  

  by xXxlabeledxbadlyxXx 82 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 19 9:57 PM 2008. In Dark, Life, Pain

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

Comments

• By me, right now

  Adding your comment:
• U.g.l.y.
  November 8, 2008
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  Meh, remind me another day to join this one. My writer's block enjoys putting me down.
• Vera Rich
  November 8, 2008
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  If you change your mind and allow "prewritten" entries, please let me know!
• • 
    Chelse-Oh
    November 8, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    I'm allowing prewritten poems now, so please feel free to join.
• 
  cheekycharlie
  November 8, 2008
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  i would enter if u allowed prewritten coz mine r all lyk this nd i cnt think of no more x
• • Chelse-Oh
    November 8, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    It's okay now I'm allowing prewrites.
• 
  Donchaquestionme
  November 22, 2008
  Edit | Reply
  Thank you very much Chelsey for the silver, this was a wonderful contest you had presented.

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