your soul beats on a platter

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on November 23, 2008
• Rewards: Gold: 800, Silver: 100, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 2 people
• Final notes:
  Thank you for your entries and I apologize for the delay in judging.

Contest Winners

1. slice of recollection.

   by iverbthenoun 38 lines, 13 comments, on Nov 11 10:12 PM 2008
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
2. bus stop

   by the atlantic 64 lines, 16 comments, on Nov 8 3:37 PM 2008. In Personal
   Silver trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4751719, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4751051, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
5. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4752629, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

Entries [13]

• Gold Plated Alloys

  Gold plated alloys,
  simmering symmetry

  by tanzanite 29 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 6 10:31 PM 2008. In Angst, Contest, Pain, Society, Thoughts

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• From the Start, We Finished

  Your soul beats on a platter
  serve it up

  by Waking Darkness 23 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 7 2:53 AM 2008. In Personal, Life, Love

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• The Jedi

  He carried a world splitting
  particle beam.

  by SsshVoices 15 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 7 8:26 AM 2008. In Dark, Love

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• Sky Hunger

  The Nile drips from our mouths
  in hunger for a feast of birds.

  by TheCorrodedBreed 12 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 7 9:11 AM 2008

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• Meanderings at 2am Friday morning before bed

  by zochit2me 54 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 7 12:24 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Weird, insomnia

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• Irrerevance

  Nickel sitting on the edge of the coffee table
  

  by ellafonte 30 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 8 8:34 PM 2008

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• Quintessential Repast

  I feed from the dish of discontent
  the food turned moldy and rancid

  by sunoir 5 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 9 11:59 PM 2008. In Spiritual, Contest

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• Between hell and a heartbeat

  Slowly I caress the tight curve of your lip
  a dream held between sulphur and midnight.

  by NomDePlume 16 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 10 6:05 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge.

Comments

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  the atlantic
  November 6, 2008
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  mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.
  
  really a day?
• • Melissa Gayle
    November 7, 2008
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    nah, a couple of days.
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  Danny Beatty
  November 6, 2008
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  I don't have one of those, but i have got a couple of platters ... so can I pretend I have a soul, and write about what that must be like, if its beating on a platter ?
  
  
  
  
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  notorious
  November 7, 2008
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  Where do you think of these kick-ass ideas?
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  just rob
  November 7, 2008
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  I just re-read the rules. I tried to remove mine from the contest, 'cause of the pics, but couldn't find a remove from contest tab. So feel free to remove or DQ it. Sorry...
• • Melissa Gayle
    November 7, 2008
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    don't you worry your pretty little heart, it stays because i yike it.
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  iverbthenoun
  November 23, 2008
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  OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love me now.... i do i do THANKS CHU!!!