I'm alone......are you?

I want poems on being alone.

After a break up,

alone after a death,

anything.

How does it feel?

How broken are you?


I want PAIN AND LOTS OF IT! I'm not picky, but heed my rules

1. no excessice swearing. Get your point across and thats it.

2. no sex erotica that doesn't fit. Keep it PG

3. Put "Mylee" in the AN so I know you read this.

4. Enter as many times as you want and HAVE FUN!



I want TONS of people to enter, but I would love if.....entered!


climax (bc he is just that amazing)
masroor
forever.is.too.long
songofsilence
brokenbeyondrepair
midnight dreamer
tawk
docbill
bob fox
goodknightpoet
my shame-your fame
flotsam jetsam
lowercase prelude
oldschoolhero
mister random
lotus mama
zeek16
bosiarbooger
rose angel

and tons more!!! PLEASE ENTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


broken and bruised,
Mylee

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on November 25, 2008
• Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 1 people
• Final notes:
  THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for entering my contest!!!
  
  My deeptest aplogizes on my judging being late. I got more entries that i thought i ever would! wow! I did not comment on every poem, but loved em all, so please dont get angry with me! You all are talented!!!!
  
  Mucho lovo,
  Mylee

Contest Winners

1. Ragdoll

   by AutumnsFlame 22 lines, 17 comments, on Nov 6 5:25 PM 2008
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4750813, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
3. [ We were one ]

   We were one
   Then I am none

   by docbill 12 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 6 10:16 PM 2008
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
4. A Green and Grassy Hill

   Would it be all right my darling
   if I promised to be still

   by Rakerman1 32 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 31 11:09 AM 2005. In Sad

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [103]

• What’s Left

  Broken plate on the floor.
  I swear

  by docbill 27 lines, 9 comments, on Oct 27 9:47 PM 2008

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• Another Sunrise

  Just another night
  shifting into day.

  by docbill 32 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 26 10:54 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• [ I long for the touch ]

  I long for the touch
  of you that will not

  by docbill 25 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 7 9:57 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• I Ache for You

  by GoodKnightPoet 31 lines, 3 comments, on May 23 10:09 PM 2008. In Sad, Adult

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Telling of My Pain

  I ALWAYS HATED THE LITTLE THING
  THE ONE THAT MADE YOU ALMOST SEEM

  by checkers12 63 lines, 3 comments, on May 5 11:11 PM 2008. In Pain, Personal

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• If I Ran Away

  If I ran away
  how many people would stay

  by checkers12 28 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 16 1:47 PM 2008. In Sad...Personal...Pain

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Coronary Mirage

  She said she loved me
  And I loved her

  by Cosmic Musketeer 42 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 6 6:54 PM 2008

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• When?

  I know staring at the phone
  doesn’t make it ring.

  by docbill 21 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 6 10:40 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge.
• Disapointment and Second Chances

  I tired so hard to fix things
  I tried so hard to change you

  by blondevamp 136 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 5 11:30 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• I Just Don't Know

  I care about you more than i should
  More than i thought i ever would

  by blondevamp 145 lines, 15 comments, on Oct 26 9:08 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• On Again, Off Again

  On again
  Off again

  by blondevamp 14 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 20 7:13 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Drawn Curtains

  Selfish
  So many times I've drawn the curtains

  by Bob Fox 35 lines, 28 comments, on Aug 15 3:38 AM 2007. In Thoughts

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• Hopeless Imagination

  It seems one again I've fallen into the pit
  and the wicked corrupter has broken me

  by Bob Fox 40 lines, 38 comments, on Dec 27 4:52 PM 2007. In Personal, Pain

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• lonely speaks silent.

  Sitting alone in the dark once again.
  wearing only blankets and tears.

  by Sick Sunshine 28 lines, on Nov 7 1:55 AM 2008. In sad personal thoughts

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• Silence..Alone

  One day I came to school, laughing.2
  But I realized I was laughing alone,3

  by Writing0Freedom 49 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 21 9:17 AM 2008

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• Forbidden To Break

  currently working on this

  by delightfulmess 35 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 3 2:21 PM 2008. In Sad, Personal, Love, Life, Pain

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• From my Pillow

  by rainyday woman 32 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 21 7:36 AM 2007. In Sad, Personal, Thoughts

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Recipe for a Breakdown

  take major re-occurring depression
  mix in some panic disorder until confused

  by stitched-heart 7 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 30 2:22 PM 2008. In pain

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• If they already left, you can't really let go

  "Maybe part of loving is learning to let go" rang in my mind. I always understood that if you loved someone you were supposed to let them g

  by Writing0Freedom 47 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 9 11:00 PM 2008

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• Ice Princess

  She feels lonely most of the time
  It hurts to feel, and it can burn so much that she fears she might melt
  

  by migit212 15 lines, 6 comments, on May 27 10:47 PM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Sad, Dark, Pain, Society, My own style, Sadness, Depression

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Use Me

  Lie,
  make me cry.

  by VanGoghNights 19 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 7 6:20 PM 2008. In Sad, Pain, Dark

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• the Carcass Twist

  into dark daylight fades
  so i pull the blinds and close the shades

  by pelo801 41 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 10 9:05 PM 2006. In Hope, Personal

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Hidden Wraith

  There are bars on the window that I’m looking through.
  I put them there.

  by Still Anonymous 54 lines, 16 comments, on May 29 10:56 AM 2008. In Angst, Life, Personal, Shyness

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• The Lone Wolf

  by Still Anonymous 45 lines, 13 comments, on Jul 4 7:57 PM 2008. In Angst, Sad, Dark, Weird, Metaphor, Nature

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• Failure

  by KyleBerg 17 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 1 12:36 AM 2008. In Love

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• Janka Kupala: MY COMPANION (translation)

  by Vera Rich 16 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 7 12:34 AM 2008

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• Two parts of me one is with u..

  Don't you know she died with you on that terrible day,
  Don't you know I miss her as much as I miss you this way.

  by Internal Struggle 22 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 13 10:31 AM 2008. In Depressed, Loss, Dedication, My life, Longing, Sadness, Love, Pain

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• d.i.s.c.o.n.n.e.c.t.e.d

  Feeling disconnected from the world
  When I pick up the phone and all I get is a "out of service" tone

  by Lonely Christina 17 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 25 6:16 PM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Love, Life, Thoughts, Depressed

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• Deadly music- silenced voices

  The song of suicide steals too many hearts
  Bleeding and broken from the impact of constant non verbal abuse

  by Writing0Freedom 31 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 27 11:48 PM 2008

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• Who Is She

  If they told you on that very day when away you went...
  About me being with someone else and some moments I've spent.

  by Climax 70 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 3 1:35 AM 2008. In Sad, Pain, Longing, Sadness, Depression, Lost, Love, Depressed, Broken, Hearts

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• Puppet

  by sable beautiful 57 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 7 1:18 AM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Sad

  • Viewed by judge.
• Losing someone

  Dedicated to all of my friends who have already left.

  by treelhs 10 lines, 22 comments, on Jul 24 2:46 AM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Sad

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• ~*~Remember me~*~

  I may not say I love you in a thousand of words,
  or say anything different that you haven't heard,

  by Rele anmwe 42 lines, 53 comments, on Oct 5 1:52 PM 2008

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• Dark

  I’ve been so alone in this world of mine.
  In this world it’s so dark and cold.

  by Bloody Corpse 5 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 7 4:53 PM 2008

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• he said forever, but now i'm undone

  by lowercase prelude 21 lines, 11 comments, on Aug 11 9:46 PM 2008

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• Longing for the Past

  Last night I called your name,
  But you weren't there.

  by Gods Child 18 lines, 2 comments, on May 25 1:19 PM 2005. In Sad

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• stuck here waiting

  Waiting for something that will never come
  You left me on my own, through messages on the computer

  by Lonely Christina 23 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 3 11:06 AM 2008

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• So far away

  You never said this would be easy
  This separation, these weeks apart

  by lilacgold 11 lines, on Nov 7 4:24 PM 2008

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• Shreds

  (1312) For all those blind heartbreakers out there! I've learnt my lesson and now it's too late for me to move on

  by Danzy007 23 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 4 1:25 AM 2008. In Angst, Pain, Personal, Sad, Dark, Teen issues, Loss, Freewrite

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• realities cold sharp jaws

  I dream about you nightly.
  romantic..intimate lucid dreams.

  by Sick Sunshine 23 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 28 1:52 PM 2008. In personal thoughts

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• Walls of Blades (You are Not Welcome)

  Carelessly spoiling away beneath the walls
  Of my cathredral. I await your return.

  by Cimbolic 61 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 7 11:50 PM 2008. In Freewrite, Pain, Contest, Society, Abuse, Longing, Anger, Angry

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• Trinkets of a Barren Angel

  Trinkets of a Barren Angel
  
  Once velvet comfort now soaked in despair

  by Noosetongue 38 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 7 2:41 PM 2008. In love, dark

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• Lament

  by Shadowsong 42 lines, 6 comments, on May 22 10:44 PM 2006. In Sad

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• Aching Heart

  This loneliness inside of me is stronger day by day,
  The emptiness within is eating hope away.

  by Shadowsong 19 lines, 18 comments, on Oct 17 11:01 PM 2003. In Personal, Other, Hope

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• Scattered Memories

  We started out with nothing.
  It was just you and I.

  by Gods Child 18 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 8 8:47 AM 2008. In Sad

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• Endless Nights

  My eyes start to water,
  and i start to cry,
  your face comes to mind,

  by simplexsins 40 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 19 6:22 PM 2008. In pain, alone, sad, dark, thoughts, other

  • Viewed by judge.
• Scars Were Made to Heal

  by simplexsins 35 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 15 2:49 PM 2008. In pain, sad, life, love, other, dark, emo, mistakes, heart, scars

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• Shadow

  I’m a shadow of a shadow
  A waif in this place

  by AngeTombe 64 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 11 8:52 PM 2008. In Love, Lyrics, Thoughts, Personal, Sad

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• The Living Dead Heart

  A locket that locks through my dry heart
  Just cracking through the floor
  An evanescent organ

  by migit212 28 lines, on Sep 23 9:32 AM 2008. In Sad, Pain, Sadness, Depression, Lost love, Emo, Freewrite, Teen issues

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• October

  What a sad October this has turned out to be
  What a lonely night to sit out and think
  

  by migit212 19 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 8 8:48 AM 2008. In Sad, Pain, Longing, Sadness, Depression, Lost love, Dedication, Depressed

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• Emo Shit

  Cut yourself to the core
  It's the red beauty of not loving yourself anymore
  

  by migit212 15 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 13 4:11 PM 2008. In Emo, Freewrite, Sad, Dark, Pain, Angst, My own style, Sadness, Depression, Anger

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• I Don't Know How To Explain

  She observes me with feelings That capture my own
  What a constant battle
  Surrounded by an atmosphere of insanity

  by migit212 9 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 21 12:39 AM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Sad, Lost in thought, My life, Sadness, Depression, Personal.

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• Too Priceless for Titles

  The one that sliced my brain in a thousand pieces
  The one that furiously striked me against real love
  

  by migit212 24 lines, 3 comments, on May 27 11:30 PM 2008. In Love, Personal, Thoughts, Sad, Pain, Hope, Angst, Lost in thought, My life, Longing

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• The Desperate Song

  You, a lighthouse in the open sea
  That after the shipwreck of our hearts, you escaped
  

  by migit212 44 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 12 9:55 AM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Sad, Pain, Angst, Death, Lost in thought, My life, Longing, Emo

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• Pipes of Broken Dreams

  There is no tomorrow with her
  Just a yesterday behind fire gates
  

  by migit212 16 lines, on Jun 21 12:25 AM 2008. In Lost love, Dedication, Depression, Sadness, Lost in thought, Sad, Thoughts, Personal

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• Among The Ruins

  I walk in fields of dreams,
  They are shattered and forsaken.

  by Zenda-Lokki 16 lines, 9 comments, on May 9 8:31 AM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Sad, Pain, Other, Sadness, My life, Lost in thought

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• I'm Fine

  Love is only some sense
  Of the absence of sense,

  by abeautifuldisaster 31 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 30 2:30 PM 2008. In Lyrics, Life, Personal

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• Dying

  while i stood there fighting
  you laid there dying

  by Guerrero 15 lines, on Nov 14 10:23 AM 2008

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Even if

  hollow..
  that spot that you once filled

  by Guerrero 21 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 14 10:29 AM 2008

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• In her beautiful dreams

  Spine of the man contently lain upon the flesh of the earth
  Warm tears from passing gray clouds blessed this fair skinned creature

  by Rajia 45 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 12 3:34 AM 2008. In Sad, Love, Lost love, Longing, Sadness, Contest

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• Shadows on the Sheet.

  by Bazza 26 lines, 27 comments, on Jan 5 2:05 AM 2008

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Focus

  by docbill 13 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 10 9:30 PM 2008

  • Viewed by judge.
• The Room

  I feel an absolute vacancy,
  as I lie there on the birchwood floor.

  by Sinisterapple 78 lines, on Nov 10 2:19 PM 2008. In Dark, Pain, Sad, Thoughts

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• Alone

  Mother, Father and Brother,
  Are removed from my life.

  by kyle052411 18 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 8 6:15 PM 2008

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• Love Letter To India

  Taunted? A subsidiary of the man I am
  Hearkens languished words from airmails ,

  by Titus 183 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 10 9:45 AM 2008. In Love, Thoughts

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• was I enough?

  soaking in my skin like acid.
  I can't feel anything anymore

  by Sick Sunshine 17 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 27 1:21 PM 2008

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• "you and me against the world baby..."

  breathing harder, faster..
  anxiety fills my body

  by Sick Sunshine 23 lines, on Oct 25 2:42 PM 2008. In thoughts

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• Inside and outside 2

  the baby
  screams in a pram -

  by Zvrhlik 2 lines, 15 comments, on Sep 17 2:30 AM 2008. In Life, Society, Contemporary, Children, Family, Haiku

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• Without you there is no-one

  by Shenton 23 lines, 2 comments, on May 19 9:32 AM 2008

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• Daylight Dread

  Angels dance in the wind whipped night
  Tapping on my window in leaf dappled light

  by Maninblack 23 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 9 7:07 AM 2008. In Personal, Sad

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• I talk to myself to heal

  How do you know how I feel?
  When my lips are sewn up and sealed?

  by Internal Struggle 25 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 15 12:12 PM 2008. In Sad, Dark, Longing, Sadness, Lost love, Emo, Love

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• GoodBye

  Joe when I met you, you taught me to fly,
  But you gave me the consequences without me asking why

  by Internal Struggle 15 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 15 11:06 AM 2008. In Sad, Death, My life, Longing, Loss, Personal., Love, Dedication

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite

Comments

• By me, right now

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• 
  checkers12
  November 6, 2008
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  Mylee
• Writing0Freedom
  November 6, 2008
  Edit | Reply
  What about a prose piece about being alone after a death?
• • 
    movedon
    November 6, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    I must say I'm intrigued. Feel free to enter! Just PLEASE read the rules carefully. For some reason, not many people do!
• Writing0Freedom
  November 6, 2008
  Edit | Reply
  I was taking it out as you commented. I decided I wasn't sure if it was about being alone enough- its about hatred and isolation.
• 
  docbill
  November 6, 2008
  Edit | Reply
  See Hon, you’re never really alone, no matter how sad and lonely you feel.
• 
  Climax
  November 7, 2008
  Edit | Reply
  Wow... I'm not in the list.
  
  How unexpected.
  
• 
  Zenda-Lokki
  November 18, 2008
  Edit | Reply
  mylee x
  
  Sorry forgot to add it to AN
• 
  JustsimplyKatiee.
  November 24, 2008
  Edit | Reply
  I would enter but I stand no chance!
  x[[♥]]x
  and ♥
  Katiee.

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