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Stranded: a romantic musing

Ok, in celebration of my 51st birthday, which is the 5th of November,  I'm holding a contest, and the premise is; you are somehow stranded on a remote tropical Island with ONE other person. Now, this person can be a spouse, lover, friend, AP poet, whomever…just make it exciting and poetic.

 

Additionally, to make things more interesting, choose three ‘found’ items from the list below that you think would be of use to the both of you and annotate your choices in the author notes please.

 

Oh, and one last thing, collaborations are fine as well.

 

Items found on the beach:

  
  1. Collected  poetic works of ( you choose the poet)
  2. Case of champagne
  3. 100 yards of fine red silk
  4. A Polynesian cook book
  5. A fine brass hair brush
  6. A jar of bright red body paint
  7. A snow globe
  8. A box of Christmas tree ornaments
  9. A blank, leather bound diary (with pen and ink of course)
  10. A bright yellow umbrella
  11. Large trunk with old windup record player and records (you choose music)
  12. A guitar.  

All poetic styles welcome, but know that I’m looking for rich visuals, metaphor and sensuality.

 

 

Rules: 1. No photos, paint with words, simple backgrounds and borders are ok.

            2. Show, don't tell.

            3. Don't overuse adjectives.

            4. Spell check.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on November 20, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 2000, Silver: 1000, Bronze: 500, Honorable mention: 5 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you all for the heartfelt entries and for sharing your wonderful imaginations. It is good to escape periodically into our dreams if but for just a brief respite anyway. I enjoyed all the pieces and found it rather challenging to make my decisions. Honorable mentions are in no particular order, as they all moved me. Again, thanks the effort and for participating.

    Sincerely,
    MJ Donnelly.

Contest Winners

  1. Kye wakes at the break of day,
    his fine lady Ra by his side,
    by Topaze 51 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 5 6:51 AM 2008. In Contest, Nature, Love, Life, Thoughts
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4763397, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  3. by Harrisham Minhas 73 lines, 15 comments, on Nov 13 6:24 AM 2008. In Adult, Love, Personal, Sensual
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. by Lyndon 46 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 5 8:37 AM 2008. In Contemporary, Life, Love, Nature, Thoughts, Love Song, Solitary environment
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. I awakened feeling debilitated,
    defenseless, and exposed.
    by Aimee Hill 62 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 5 6:28 AM 2008. In Contest, Personal, Love
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4746293, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  7. by Margaret Denham 75 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 6 9:51 AM 2008. In Thoughts, Personal, Sensual, Sweet Dreams, Contest, Fantasy
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. I awake to the soft sound
    of slender fingers playing the strings
    by Sue Cardwell 42 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 17 10:05 AM 2008. In Free Verse, Love, Thoughts
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 5, 2008
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    Cool idea MJ Dammit.. where is my muse!!!! lol


  • Harrisham Minhas
    November 5, 2008
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    Wonderful contest.




  • chilali
    November 5, 2008
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    Great contest! Bookmarked! I shall try. I'm not promising though


  • luna-midnight gold member
    November 5, 2008
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    cool


  • MonAmourEternel
    November 5, 2008
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    Happy birthday to you ....my dear M.J. Donnelly.

    With lots of Love and affection,
    Bin


  • trekkergirl
    November 5, 2008
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    I have a poem called castaway that is about a person stranded. It is a pre-write tho so I can't post it here. Though if you go to my page you could read it. Or if you want I could post it here for you to read. It was actually printed in a fanzine.


  • daviscth
    November 5, 2008
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    HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!

    I hope your day is wonderful.


    • MJ Donnelly gold member
      November 5, 2008
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      Thanks hun! Yeah, I'm at work right now, but will be of duty in a few hours to start a 6 day break.


  • lunarlunacy
    November 5, 2008
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    LOL oh what a kewl contest MJ. the items to choose are easy but the first part..... hmmmmmm

  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    November 5, 2008
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    Oh my, the waters they are a churning, in poetic feeding frenzy!


  • tara wilson gold member
    November 5, 2008
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    happy birthday, Micheal..


  • Glenn
    November 5, 2008
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    ohffffffffffff

    Y u’ll people don’t allow per-writers?
    Those are not the poems ……………….?

  • Bel Ange silver member
    November 5, 2008
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    wonderful contest hun, maybe a bit to complex for me to wrap my brain around right now though. my muse has been on strike lately so I sacked it and I'm still looking for a replacement.


  • adsaige
    November 5, 2008
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    Oh, I so have to enter...Of course it might be an epic...and my young choice might be embarrassed! BOOKMARKED!

  • Harrisham Minhas
    November 6, 2008
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    Happy Birthday!






  • HomeGrown
    November 7, 2008
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    Huh?

    I don't get it. You want me to be stranded on an island, with only one other person, and you leave me champagne? WTF ever happened to RUM?! Any chance of a last moment reconsideration? Please?! I can soooooooooo work with Rum!

    HG


  • Avendesora Dreamer
    November 8, 2008
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    i would love to enter, but i cant think right now....be back later!


  • SandraMVeinot
    November 11, 2008
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    sounds like you should get alot of romantic writes;MJ


  • Harrisham Minhas
    November 21, 2008
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    Thank you so much for the wonderful Bronze Trophy.
    I am pleased that you enjoyed my poem.

    Thanks for hosting this contest.

    Harrisham Minhas

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