Prompt contest... 16 entries; 16 lines or less

prompt; encased in denial

16 entries

16 lines or less

creative, imagery, metaphor, poetic devices...

write me something wonderful & amazing poets;

please do not reply to comments until after contest

HM's added as needed, lol

hope to close soon

image by Wish I Was at flickr

Contest is Over

Contest was judged on November 19, 2008
Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100
Final notes:
Many thanks all. Some fantastic takes on the prompt. Which had me add 3 HMs.
So congratulations to all.

The Gold is just amazing. Tremendous imagery that reads like a movie.

Silver and Bronze are ver worthy writes.

Many thanks for entering! Was a tough contest to judge.
Be well and be blessed,
Mouser

Contest Winners

Through A Father's Eyes

by mysticstorm 33 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 4 9:34 AM 2008
Gold trophy winner

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Suspended Animation

Ice wraps me close,
a frigid cocoon

by Judith Chandler 19 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 4 2:16 PM 2008. In Contest
Silver trophy winner

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hollow this, empty that

we dip ourselves in lies and then sit out in the cold,
so we can no longer feel it devour truth within our bones.

by Tigris 19 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 4 5:21 AM 2008. In Life
Bronze trophy winner

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Answers

by Black Narcissus 24 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 4 12:14 AM 2008. In Spiritual, Thoughts

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There should have been 5;

by ElectricBloom 23 lines, 13 comments, on Nov 16 1:54 PM 2008

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You Can't Crack My Armor While I'm In My Happy Place

by just weak hands 13 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 5 11:32 AM 2008. In Contest

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Entries [12]

1 - 12 of 12

i miss you

Your were more than my world
I miss you more than the desert does rain

by jeffro211 13 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 7 12:17 AM 2008. In Love, Life, Pain

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Death's Trial

Frozen in solitude, forsaken by hope
Encased in denial, forgotten by life

by Peachy 15 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 6 7:57 AM 2008. In Dark, Sad, Death

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Shrouded .. with contradictions

shrouded with contradiction
wandering days of yester clouding minds

by Stardust-luvr 29 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 4 6:49 AM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Contest, Life, Other

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Left Behind

by rainyday woman 19 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 4 12:01 AM 2008. In Contest, Contemporary, Life, Love

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Frozen in Time

Frozen, my life in suspended animation,
feel like an apparition of who I am;

by Kathleen a Nazarene 23 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 3 11:54 PM 2008. In Contest, Dark, Life, Pain, Sad, Thoughts, Longing, Depression, Loss, Self

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Locked Up Tight

It's like a locks been put on my brain
It's going to drive me downright insane

by skull8686 25 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 3 11:19 PM 2008

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Atrus
November 4, 2008
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Oh wow, great picture.
just weak hands
November 17, 2008
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I revised my poem ! I'm sorry it's so late >.> Time... doesn't fare well with this girl xD
mysticstorm
November 20, 2008
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Thank you for the honor of Gold...congrat's to all!
mystic