I actually had a completely differet idea for this contest but i was listening to jordin sparks-god loves ugly and got this idea.
I want a poem about how you see yourself,not how others see you but your own self image whether it has to do with your body, your personality or your beauty tell me who you see when you look in the mirror.Tell me what you dont like about yourself or tell me what you do like about yourself.
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If i dont get more then 10 entries i will delete this contest.
I like metaphors,imagery and raw emotion.
Im low on points so if you can donate any i would be very grateful.
Right now i only want fresh writes but if i dont get enough i will change it so prewrites are allowed
Points will be added gradually as i receive more entries.
I want a poem about how you see yourself,not how others see you but your own self image whether it has to do with your body, your personality or your beauty tell me who you see when you look in the mirror.Tell me what you dont like about yourself or tell me what you do like about yourself.
Rule
Ap Name in authors notes
Notes
If i dont get more then 10 entries i will delete this contest.
I like metaphors,imagery and raw emotion.
Im low on points so if you can donate any i would be very grateful.
Right now i only want fresh writes but if i dont get enough i will change it so prewrites are allowed
Points will be added gradually as i receive more entries.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on December 31, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Thank you all for entering im sorry it took me so long to judge i loved each and every entry.Honorable mention is in no order.
Contest Winners
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I hate the way my thoughts peck away at my brain
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I scowl at the words that others whisper below baited breath,
For I know that they wait with claws ready at their fingertips,by Panicked-Puppet-xXx 23 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 27 1:19 AM 2008. In Dark, Self Harm, Cutting, Sad, Pain, Contest, Thoughts, Insults, Beauty, Life, Hate
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When others look they say a fairy
My glance catches a skeleton• Viewed by judge. [remove]
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by honorable mention 23 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 2 6:34 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Its amazing what grandmas see when they look upon their grand children .And they are so wise to what to do with what ever problem comes y• Viewed by judge.
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My reflection follows me
Car window’s wink at me tauntingly
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I'm a plump little Mama
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the child quiet in the back of the class
not speeking a wordby Dark Prince Chaos 61 lines, on Nov 4 5:50 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
Hmm I don't know what I think yet...• Viewed by judge.
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Waking up every day.
Wishing to be pretty and skinny.by BlAcKAmythest AnG3l 10 lines, on Nov 4 6:59 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
When I look in a mirror, myself I don't see
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I see blue eyes starring back at me
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He walks down the road,
searching for any sign of compassion.by breatheforthepast 35 lines, on Sep 27 7:48 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Im Not A Girl
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of dying in the coldby SwimForBetterDays. 23 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 22 5:24 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
i look in the mirror
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what my mirrors reflection shows
differs within each dayby blackened vains 48 lines, on Nov 11 8:54 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
by starving-to-survive 80 lines, 11 comments, on Dec 4 3:54 PM 2008. In Abuse, Adult, Pain, self hate, self loath• Viewed by judge.
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looking in the mirror, hating what i see,
this discusting thing, that i call me.by nobodys-girl 10 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 26 11:03 AM 2008. In Personal• Viewed by judge. -
Within these eyes of mine,
I see a person.Someone who canby PsychoAnalysis 23 lines, on Dec 26 8:02 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
Who am I?
Do I have any right to invent the answer?• Viewed by judge. -
"Mirror, mirrow on the wall,
Who is the fairest of them all?"by chasitylee 31 lines, on Dec 26 5:44 PM 2008. In Sad• Viewed by judge. -
I am a Wolf, Strong alone,
yet stronger in packsby Risingmoon 54 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 26 4:13 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
by Truth-in-Chaos 37 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 26 12:47 PM 2008. In Personal• Viewed by judge.
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I see lines and aging eyes
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I'm the shimmer in your drinking glass
the amber light dancing in Transparency• Viewed by judge. -
No mirrors or reflections,
I have my imperfections,by HowardsDaughter 18 lines, on Dec 13 11:47 AM 2008. In Personal• Viewed by judge. -
I dip the brush in an attempt to
imitate perfectionby blue ampersand 34 lines, on Dec 11 11:16 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
I see a pretty girl,
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Mirror mirror on the wall,
where do you get off.by Jaffa- 39 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 13 1:55 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
I the end I am fragile
They say "Be yourself"by petalblue2 39 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 11 12:22 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
Deffinently not even close to my best.by This Is My Story 38 lines, on Nov 4 4:22 PM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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First sight differs from the norm
First see beauty like a stormby pumpykin 23 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 3 10:44 PM 2008. In self-image• Viewed by judge.
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You've got the prewrite open even if you didn't mean to dear.
~Anne~
Oops you changed it , never mind.
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great contest idea! if my muse was here i would totally write something new for this but unfortunately its not. anyways good luck with it

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oh wow, i suck at getting things written in time. lol. well, good luck/congratulations to everyone else ♥
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the contest isnt over yet i forget to change the date when i first opened it it should go on for another week or two
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Damnit, I wish I'd found this sooner. I've been feeling, for a lack of better words, disgusting these days; you know, ugly, fat, and worthless, and on top of that, I suck at poetry too
*sigh* I'll see what I can pull outta my ass in 4 hours...
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im going to reopen this and probably judge it around new years
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Maybe I'll enter then, if I can manage to not suck at writing by then
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Thanks for silver! and congrats to the other winners!
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Thank you so much, I’m glad you enjoyed my heart’s labor, I would also like to congratulate the winners and other fine poets for participating as well.
Sincerely,
MJ Donnelly.
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