HEEEEEEEEEEEY!Like I'm tryin' somin new!Ok, here's how it works.
I'm going to let you write WHATEVER you want,and I'm going to judge it.I'm going to give you points for the following categories:
The title(is it catchy?)-up to 5pts.
The flow-up to 10pts.
The creativity-up to 10pts.
did they follow the rules?(I'll be cheeking)-up to 20pts.
did it rhyme?(It has to rhyme,because I love rhyme)-up to 3pts.
Did it make since?-up 3pts.
if it didn't make since,was it supposed to be that way?(Tie on to the last ?)
Was there at least ONE good thing that I liked in the poem?-up to 10pts.
And finally,
Did I like it?-up to 5pts.
Rules
No cussin' or swearin'
No *bunny*ing me or....just don't put it in your poem!kay???
Put Ladybug lands on lee in AN
I have the right to DQ you!
I will comment on everyone's poem
Nothing lengthy(like over 40 lines...the less the better.But whtever)
And you can't enter if you don't think I'm awesome...witch I am...J/K
nothing gross,I'm 12.
Follow the rules
enter as many times as you want,the more the better!
PW better fit!
I'm going to let you write WHATEVER you want,and I'm going to judge it.I'm going to give you points for the following categories:
The title(is it catchy?)-up to 5pts.
The flow-up to 10pts.
The creativity-up to 10pts.
did they follow the rules?(I'll be cheeking)-up to 20pts.
did it rhyme?(It has to rhyme,because I love rhyme)-up to 3pts.
Did it make since?-up 3pts.
if it didn't make since,was it supposed to be that way?(Tie on to the last ?)
Was there at least ONE good thing that I liked in the poem?-up to 10pts.
And finally,
Did I like it?-up to 5pts.
Rules
No cussin' or swearin'
No *bunny*ing me or....just don't put it in your poem!kay???
Put Ladybug lands on lee in AN
I have the right to DQ you!
I will comment on everyone's poem
Nothing lengthy(like over 40 lines...the less the better.But whtever)
And you can't enter if you don't think I'm awesome...witch I am...J/K
nothing gross,I'm 12.
Follow the rules
enter as many times as you want,the more the better!
PW better fit!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 30, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 400
- Final notes: I am sooooooo sorry it took so loooooooonnnngggg to judge!I wanna thank seasonings and I wanna thank everyone who entered, because they have A LOT of patients!Thnaks again, and I want to tell You I don't normally take that long, so don't be intimidated because you think i will take a long time. (I won't,you have my word)they all were wonderful, and I don't possible have enough points for all of you!Good luck in future contests!Bubye!
MNE!
Contest Winners
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Find the rhythm / Let it rhyme / Love the words / Make them mine• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I see from where I’m lying / my dreams are slowly dying / Let me go! I'm crying / Crocodile Tears• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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The stars are in her eyes,
The sunshine is in her hair.by A m b r e a 23 lines, 16 comments, on Sep 12 5:27 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [67]
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"Once you were nice and we were friends, but seriously get over it 'cause everything ends."by Autumn Rain13 27 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 21 5:39 PM 2008. In Life, Love, Dark, Sad, Lost in thought• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Wake me when you go to sleep
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Shadows sway and dance
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You're vain.
You're Head Games.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She runs away from everything she had
Run baby run here comes your hateful dadby sucks2beyou712 52 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 21 9:22 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
you were the sparkle in another's eyes,
for what they saw, was a beautiful prize.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
in the bottom of the reality
i will wait.by gotmunchies 21 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 12 3:17 AM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Life though a child's eyes,
Is one that's sweet and innocent.by Lost in a Dreamstar 41 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 5 7:57 AM 2008. In Life, Weird, My own style, Happy, Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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A hazy lament to a quick mistaken death
Memories I stole from the spiraling depths of my mindless dreams.by Joey-Joey-Joe 26 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 4 4:54 PM 2008. In Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I dream of you here by my side
But awake I feel deceived,by blackchapter 18 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 27 10:53 AM 2008. In love, life, fantasy, nature, sad, loneliness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Spin around with your shoes offby lunagirl15 20 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 2 8:01 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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cloud enthralling / soft let go / winter calling / silent falling / flakes of snow• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Though once it soared through open skies / Forgotten, lonely, now it lies / A fallen feather• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You give me money when I cannot pay
You give me light when darkness bars my way• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Insanity strikes discordant in my mind,
Madness twirls to the rhythm in time.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
No-one ever seems to pry When there are tears of laughterby Kitch 16 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 11 3:44 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I was awoken suddenly
somebody telling me to get my shoes onby Xxnightmare21xx 39 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 7 6:52 PM 2008. In personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It changes leaves on trees
It will never cease• Commented on by judge. -
Sights and sounds, senses surround A maze of delights set out to enticeby Kitch 9 lines, 9 comments, on Oct 28 1:46 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Rain is pouring, pounding, tumbling down
Smashing, splashing, on the ground• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
three pins
on a clothesline -• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I look in a puddle and what do I see,
Another girl's face, staring at me,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Pretty ballerina dance
Dressed in pink and lace• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I did not cry,
the day he died,by LannieM 30 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 17 7:26 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
in the bush
a singing nightingale -• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Can't you see me writing on my wall?
It's all out here for you to see.by JaycobKay 30 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 2 4:42 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i loved once upon a time,
far far awayby Mosesthelastsamurai 27 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 3 11:53 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I have a friend
That has come to her wits end• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I’m going on vacation. / It’s over when I land. / Wake me when we get there. / But talking now is banned.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I never said I wasn't happy.
I'm glad you are,by SecretPsychology 23 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 10 12:10 PM 2008. In Personal., Teen issues, Lost love, Sad, Pain, Life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Feet stuck
to polished wood~• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
He begged me to take him back
I said no, he pressedby xbeautifulxdisasterx 6 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 2 5:48 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I purred so very loudly / And I rubbed around her feet / But I do not think she heard me / She was purple as a beet• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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once upon a midnight dreary
the weak came homeby Guerrero 9 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 31 4:38 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by alandriel1138 6 lines, 17 comments, on Oct 20 7:54 AM 2005. In Humor• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by xbeautifulxdisasterx 23 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 21 3:08 PM 2008. In Lyrics, Contest, Friendship, My life, Freewrite• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My heart is broken, beaten to the ground;
I have no one to hold when your not around.by SecretPsychology 11 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 3 12:06 PM 2008. In Angst, Other, Pain, Personal, Sad, Love, Longing, Teen issues, Lost love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Seeing through skinny girls with a deadly obsession
Pain pierces the tears pouring from my heartby Writing0Freedom 15 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 12 11:28 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
So many secrets
So many lies• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
So I'll just kiss your lips and say good night,
While I dream of you in another life.by SoundofMadness 45 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 2 11:03 PM 2008. In love, relationships, feelings, lyrics• Commented on by judge.
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What the hell does bunnying you mean??
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Filters cuss words...
it means anytime you use a cuss word it will replace it with the word "Bunny" for children (or those under 18 I think)
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So there's no point to entering a poem that doesn't rhyme, then?
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If it's worth somethin',then what the heck?
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love your idea!!!!!!! but does it have to rhyme??? i really dont want to.....
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nah,for you nah.
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hey MeNoEmo i will help ya do this contest, would you let me(you have to edit ur contest and make so I callobrate this contest i think!)
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YES OMG THANK YOU!
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When does the judging begin?
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Thank you for the bronze!!!
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