Let me feel your heartbreak so I can get rid of mine.
That's it.
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That's it.
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Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 10, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Thank you so much for all your heartfelt entries.I was especially impressed with the intensity of the poems from many contributors under 18 years old. Great stuff everyone!
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Contest Winners
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Wind whips the robes of the raven black priest
As he waves from the grave through asphalt sleet• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4592377, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Yet still here you stand in front of me,
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You said, "I'll be there"
But where are you now?by tsukiyo 24 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 1 1:06 PM 2008. In love, romance, angst, depression, unrequited love, personal
Honorable mention
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Door adjacent
Your hair is tousledby ConjurerCaptainTam 17 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 3 3:45 PM 2008. In Sad, Life, Jelousy Honorable mention
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Bronze trophy winner
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I love you and always will, I love you not for the thrill...by stella rose 26 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 16 2:14 AM 2008. In Personal, Sad, Love, Self, Dedication, Longing, My life, Pain, Hope• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Time seems to pass like eternity,
I watched the petals of the rose wither,by Life20sucks 18 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 29 4:57 AM 2008. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
if only for a moment,
i thought we could keep going,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Stay with me ’til morning
Just like yesterdayby thewhitesettler 28 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 1 11:26 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Whenever I see your happy face, / A tsunami occurs in my heart. / But it dies down in my heart, / Cause there is someone behind your happin• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I placed artificial flowers where the marker would soon be erected, and realized that the flowers, not being real, symbolized our relationsby Girl-Interrupted 18 lines, 14 comments, on Oct 22 2:08 PM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Sad, Dark, Weird, Angst, My own style, Death, My life, Loss
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Oh let us drag the fish of hopefulness
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A young girl
the youngest of three kids• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The end of my dream the end of my life,
My world crumbles as i fall on my knife,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Those words that used to make
My teenage heart beat faster.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I swore I was old, a million years ago
you appeared before meby Closer 15 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 8 5:41 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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i'd get rid of the pre-writes... otherwise you'll get a lot of crap writes.... from experience
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I'm used to it. It will auto close at 100 entries.
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well, g'luck *hands you crap-deflecting-shield*
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Hey some prewrites are actually very good and fitting for the contests, don't judge it's not nice
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Actually if you look at my previous contests, I had two that were for pre-writes only! I personally cannot be inspired for a contest, I can only write poetry when I am moved to....
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I'm not judging. I know that some are good and fitting. But sadly, many entered are not appropriate.
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To each their own, but just because something is a pre-write doesn't mean it is crap. I have hosted contests and given high awards to pre-writes...
I'm just saying.
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lol..i like that song..
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I might enter..
Not sure yet
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