write me a poem from the heart.
i'm very undecided about how i feel right now, so i'd really prefer poems along the line of heartbreak or being in a confusion situation. as the one i'm in. message me if you want to know what it is. otherwise, just write a poem that isn't all lovey dovey and has emotion and strong imagery & metaphors to it, but if you can write me an upbeat poem about maybe getting over somebody, i would love to read it :]
what i'm basically looking for:
[x]-emotions
[x]-over 20 lines; short poems aren't my thing, unless it's a quickie.
[x]-metaphors&imagery
[x]-free verse preferred, rhyme ONLY if you can pull it off. prose, too. whichever you like.
[x]-effort.
i'm giving away a lot of points here, so i expect some amazing poems. other than that, go for it. reserve if you want, but pleasepleasepleaseee come back and finish.
good luck
& have fun (:
♥xxManduh
i'm very undecided about how i feel right now, so i'd really prefer poems along the line of heartbreak or being in a confusion situation. as the one i'm in. message me if you want to know what it is. otherwise, just write a poem that isn't all lovey dovey and has emotion and strong imagery & metaphors to it, but if you can write me an upbeat poem about maybe getting over somebody, i would love to read it :]
what i'm basically looking for:
[x]-emotions
[x]-over 20 lines; short poems aren't my thing, unless it's a quickie.
[x]-metaphors&imagery
[x]-free verse preferred, rhyme ONLY if you can pull it off. prose, too. whichever you like.
[x]-effort.
i'm giving away a lot of points here, so i expect some amazing poems. other than that, go for it. reserve if you want, but pleasepleasepleaseee come back and finish.
good luck
& have fun (:
♥xxManduh
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 27, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 1000, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 15 people
- Final notes: Amazing, guys. Simply amazing. ♥
Contest Winners
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He said I was always like tanzanite,
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I planted soap into my pores
hoping time would push your kisses from my lips,• Commented on by judge. [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4753285, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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So here I'm standing once again
with face up to the mirror.by The Rainbows Mind 34 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 29 9:05 PM 2008. In life, self, inspiration, thoughts, rhyme
Honorable mention
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she sat in the back seat,
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by Black Narcissus 34 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 30 3:11 AM 2008. In Love, Thoughts, Contest Honorable mention
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Always be yourself and should you meet a young man if he doesnt show respect and be the gentleman be nice but walk on by . Let not any ma• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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I watched you walk away today
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our kiss and make up
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The sun pools down from the sky,
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I wake up,
With a loud bang on my doorby B-Simplicity 34 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 29 11:59 PM 2008. In Life• Commented on by judge. -
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I knew it wouldn't...by Shantell 17 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 7 8:22 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
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“We don’t do emotional things do we?”by fake-or-real-smile 24 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 8 3:06 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
I picked all the pieces
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Come on baby,
roll the dice one last timeby Livingemptyspaces 30 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 11 12:09 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
storms a brewing and heavy showers hit full speedclouds become scattered as the lightening strikesfinalization that I'm not the one you needthrough turmoil's and sorrow, I saw some dislikes• Commented on by judge.
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You thought you'd sown all my buttons
that they were a perfect kind of fitby 2lullabyhaven 28 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 22 2:36 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
She lays in bed,
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My shoulders are beginning to rock, questioning the purpose and strength to keep reaching, I know you have better things to do.by rexreglisdesomni 0 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 22 4:48 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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I've definitely had my share of heartbreak and confusing situations. I'll try to write something for this. I've been busy and haven't written anything lately but hopefully that will change.
I'm here if you want to talk doll. Message me anytime.
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thanks doll :] that means a hellova lot<3 seriouslyyy.
i just might take you up on that sometime ;]
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no problem hun
&& you should
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i definitely will, love.
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Ill try to write something since im going through a really confusing and complicated relationship right now but i was wondering how many times can we enter?
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good :] i hope you do enter. & you can enter as many times as you likeee<3
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I edited Vanilla Oxygen
sorry it wasn't completely ready when I entered it
i believe it is now
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I may ebnter this I am going through a confusing and hard situation I have a perfect pre write for this too damn it lol ^-^ I'll see what I can do
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And come talk to me anytime x
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I will have to think and come back... this is totally a contest for me.... and I'm sorry you have to go through that.... I wouldn't wish this heartbreak hell on anyone...
Good Luck with the contest.. ill be back.
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Its a gd idea for a conest but a sham you cant add Prewritten poems. i have so many witch i think would fit well in to this conest but i can not enter as there are all prewritten.
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great idea for a contest! i was in the midst of writing a poem and thought it would fit good here. hope you like
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