30-40 words of Brilliance #19

Prompt: my lips held his goodbye

30-40 words

As my kindred spirit Mystic says 'paint outside the lines'

Brevity and imagination are the key

Reserve welcome but for the love of all that's sacred, please complete your entry by the close of contest

If you have a problem with how I judge my contests. Don't enter. I'm sick of it!!!

Contest is Over

Contest was judged on November 1, 2008
Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50
Final notes:
Wow what a brilliant contest. I swapped 6 poems around 100 times before I was done. I could have give gold to the top three easily. thank you all so much

Contest Winners

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Departures....Gate 11.

My lips held
his last goodbye,

by artis 12 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 29 7:51 AM 2008. In Love, Pain, Sad, Thoughts
Silver trophy winner

• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Unduly Pressed Upon

Do I linger into this passing phase,

by Titus 8 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 29 7:15 AM 2008. In Fantasy, Love, Personal, Thoughts
Bronze trophy winner

• Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [10]

1 - 10 of 10

my lips held his goodbye

the words were never spoken
just another unnecessary

by solitarytear 8 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 29 6:31 AM 2008. In Love, Thoughts, Life, Sad, Spiritual, Contest, Message, Self

• Commented on by judge.
Courtship goodbye

Long voyage
he embarks

by Kiddy 13 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 29 6:47 AM 2008

• Commented on by judge.
A Kiss in the Mist

Chilly winds
Darkened skies

by ylova 17 lines, 13 comments, on Oct 29 7:12 AM 2008. In Contest, Sad, Love

• Commented on by judge.
Goodbye.

by Black Narcissus 12 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 29 11:40 AM 2008. In Pain, Contest

• Commented on by judge.
Tangible Kiss

Taste of salt lingers upon lips,
tears remain well past goodbye.

by Sandygram 12 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 29 1:53 PM 2008. In Love, Sad, Thoughts

• Commented on by judge.
rocky foundations

by Lavender Butterfly 16 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 30 3:03 AM 2008. In Angst, Thoughts

• Commented on by judge.

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Leonura
October 29, 2008
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I'm so glad that ye 'ave another contest up! I would 'ave cried if ye didn' 'ave anymore..
- AutumnGypsy
  October 29, 2008
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  enter then
- - Leonura
    October 29, 2008
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    I'll try and think of somethin' a chara.