This is for the Scars that will never heal;The hearts that will never mend;The people who will never be the same!
Option 1:
Write about love. I want it descriptive, very descriptive.Give me imagery. Make me feel the emotion within the poem. RAW EMOTION!
Option 2:
Write me about someone breaking your heart. This is my favourite option for sure. I'd love a good cry right now. Give me loads of emotion. I want the whole story.
Option 3:
What do you see when you look in the mirror. Write about who you see looking back at you every day. Is it the person you want to be or is it someone else? Either way i'd love to know how other people feel about themselves. Lots of imagery.
Option 4:
Choose a song by: My chemical romance,Simple plan, Nickle-back,Fall out boy, Pink or Go:Audio. and write about what that song tells you.. What do the lyrics mean to you? These are all bands that i love so i hope it to be good and no trashing their songs or i will D Q you
I will comment on all of the poems so even if you don't win you will get a comment on your poem?
I believe that background matters a lot so try and make it one that fits the poem.
BTW: i love love love love love Dirty Pretty poetry so you have a better chance of winning if you submit me some of that
Rules:
(ewe i hate this)
1: No Sticky Caps please, only because it makes it hard to read.
2:You can use swearwords i believe that i'm old enough now but please Don't just throw in a lot of random-swearwords, If i don't think they fit i will ask you to take it out.
3: I don't mind free-verse or rhyme but i do prefer rhyme as long as it's good and not really forced.
4: No erotica. I know i'm not old enough to see that.
5: Most importantly have a lot of fun with it and make sure it's something you like!
Please put your name in your authors notes and put **Heartbroken-Headcase** to show that you have read and understood the rules.
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IF YOU DON'T PUT YOUR AP NAME AND *HeartbrokenHeadcase** IN YOUR AUTHOR NOTES THEN YOU HAVE NO CHANCE OF GETING INTO MY FINALISTS LIST!!!!!!
Option 1:
Write about love. I want it descriptive, very descriptive.Give me imagery. Make me feel the emotion within the poem. RAW EMOTION!
Option 2:
Write me about someone breaking your heart. This is my favourite option for sure. I'd love a good cry right now. Give me loads of emotion. I want the whole story.
Option 3:
What do you see when you look in the mirror. Write about who you see looking back at you every day. Is it the person you want to be or is it someone else? Either way i'd love to know how other people feel about themselves. Lots of imagery.
Option 4:
Choose a song by: My chemical romance,Simple plan, Nickle-back,Fall out boy, Pink or Go:Audio. and write about what that song tells you.. What do the lyrics mean to you? These are all bands that i love so i hope it to be good and no trashing their songs or i will D Q you

I will comment on all of the poems so even if you don't win you will get a comment on your poem?
I believe that background matters a lot so try and make it one that fits the poem.
BTW: i love love love love love Dirty Pretty poetry so you have a better chance of winning if you submit me some of that

Rules:
(ewe i hate this)
1: No Sticky Caps please, only because it makes it hard to read.
2:You can use swearwords i believe that i'm old enough now but please Don't just throw in a lot of random-swearwords, If i don't think they fit i will ask you to take it out.
3: I don't mind free-verse or rhyme but i do prefer rhyme as long as it's good and not really forced.
4: No erotica. I know i'm not old enough to see that.
5: Most importantly have a lot of fun with it and make sure it's something you like!
Please put your name in your authors notes and put **Heartbroken-Headcase** to show that you have read and understood the rules.
----------------------------Points will go up as i get them--------------------------------
IF YOU DON'T PUT YOUR AP NAME AND *HeartbrokenHeadcase** IN YOUR AUTHOR NOTES THEN YOU HAVE NO CHANCE OF GETING INTO MY FINALISTS LIST!!!!!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 11, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 100, Bronze: 60, Honorable mention: 10 people
- Final notes: Thank you so much to everyone in this contest. It was not an easy one to judge and i wish i could have had everyone as Gold. There were a lot of really amazing poems here and i encourage people to read them. Thank you to all the people who ever loved me and ever broke my heart for helping me to come up with this contest.
But most of all i'd like the thank the winners for giving me some truly breathtaking poetry and helping me through a sifficult two weeks. As the name says, i will love everyone who entered for ever and ever and i'm never going to forget a single piece that was entered into this contest.
I'm rambling arn't i?
So in closing i'd like to say that Poetry is the most amazing pain relief in the world and should be prescribed as a daily medication.God knows it's done wonders for me. Love you all loadsies. Also just thought i'd pop in with don't be afraid to message me with any problem i don't only do contests, i'm an agony aunt as well. So yeah Well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And thank you very much for the help.
Contest Winners
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They call me
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Why did you have to hurt me,
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by Beautiful-Mistake 32 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 24 7:52 PM 2005. In Society, Dark, Angst
Honorable mention
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when the mirror reflects back at me
what do i see• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
She is no longer able to care
I can’t imagine what happened here• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
I don't always like what I see.• Commented on by judge. [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 4724305, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Entries [37]
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She's so lonely, her soul is bare,
the way he treats her is so unfairby Garreth Rhys Bellis 10 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 27 6:10 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Take my hand awhile and hold it tightly now,
before you walk away just one more time.by Sunshine Always 13 lines, 13 comments, on Sep 27 2:08 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I dared myself boldly to take new steps,
make a new d.a.n.c.e.,by Re-invention 65 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 1 10:39 PM 2008. In Contest, Personal, Pain, Dirty Pretty
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It started with your fingers gently stroking the strings of a bass guitar
it started with another man with his hands around my waist swayiby samantha jean 34 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 28 4:39 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Sometimes I think I'm better off without a mind
I wouldn't remember or feel the pain insideby Death-Head 46 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 29 1:10 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
How we used to be, i won't forget,
how we painfully ended, i still regret.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I wonder if you could tell,
I wonder if you knew,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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When you stand in front of the mirror, you are the man you are. However the image peering back at you is the man you could be. An image ofby Dark passenger 7 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 9 12:01 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Life, Sad, Dark, Pain, Death, Anger, Emo, Hate, Suicide, Angry, War• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A starry autumn night,
Leaves of reds and oranges blowing in the cool breeze,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
skipping of a heart beat
this starts to repeatby Garreth Rhys Bellis 12 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 4 1:07 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
Unabashed and ruthless victory,
You truly show no mercy.by colie50 23 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 6 9:57 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
option 3
HeartbrokenHeadcase
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Why did you write,me
on New Years day.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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may I resv? and can I make it very personal?
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Yeah sure
Thats what it's all about i just wanna know people's feelings.
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Thanks for entering people
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to enter your contest with a prewrite called
"They Call Me Gorgeous"
I believe it fits Option3 pretty well.
if you won't allow it, then that's fine.
Thanks,
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I've changed it so that you can enter prewrites now.
Can't wait for the poem
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D.L.Princess
Thanks for that,
I hope you're not disappointed.
I wrote it a while back.
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I wasnt disapointed in the slightest. It'a a perfectly wonterful piece
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I'd like to enter to this contest later, as I have no time to write now. Would you mind messaging me about it later?
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Sure... or you could put a reserve on it if you'd like?
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IF ANYONE DECIDES TO CHANGE ANYTHING ABOUT THE POEMS PLEASE INFORM ME AND I WILL TAKE ANOTHER LOOK AND PERHAPS COMMENT AGAIN!!
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problems
i'm having trouble entering a prewrite,its perfect for this contest.
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thank you!!!
thank you so much for that gold trophy hun!
i know i haven't been on in a long while - but that's because i haven't had access to a computer.
again - thanks so much!
out of so many amazing poets I managed to snag gold.
ttys - thanks so much.
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