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Sadness and Despair

1.No erotic or bad language
2. No religion cursing
3.Something that has happened in your life.
4. At Least 5 Stanza's
5.Please in the Author's note list how you felt about this.
6.Put passion into this.
7.Most of all have fun.

NOTE IM ONLY TWELVE SO ADULT CONTENT I CANNOT READ

Contest is Over

Contest was judged on November 13, 2008
Rewards: Gold: 200, Silver: 115, Bronze: 85
Final notes:
Everyone was great and it was a hard descesion good luck in further poetry and good job writter of pet peeve you were a close 3rd

Contest Winners

Plea From a Broken Heart

I wish that I could get over you,
And no longer feel the pain.

by forever-hoping 33 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 26 2:23 PM 2008. In Sad, Personal, Pain, Spiritual, Thoughts, Life, Love
Gold trophy winner

• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Oceania

Life escapes this form you possess
Draining ignorance in an unquenchable thirst

by hqe30 23 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 30 6:50 PM 2008
Silver trophy winner

• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Blood Bath

I wonder why i cant cry.
I wonder why i cant seem to rely

by Coolcolec 17 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 27 6:00 PM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Life, Memories
Bronze trophy winner

• Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [11]

1 - 11 of 11

Forgiveness

I fear she is death
a naked lullaby

by afroqban 34 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 26 2:07 PM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Sad

• Commented on by judge.
Preying on naivety

She was pierced on that night
by the shards of his words

by blackchapter 45 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 26 3:20 PM 2008. In Pain, personal, sad, life

• Commented on by judge.
Pet Peeve

Hey, I'm for a contest! Yipee! lol

by WhiteAngelCake 20 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 26 4:59 PM 2008. In depressed, dumb

• Commented on by judge.
[ Summer was over it was now time ]

Summer was over it was now time
To move outta my comfort zone,

by xbeautifulxdisasterx 53 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 27 8:20 PM 2008

• Commented on by judge.
Past Sorrows

I've laid the past to rest,
I won't cry for yesterday,

by Poetess12 18 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 5 6:24 PM 2008

• Commented on by judge.
Don't go..

No, no, Please don't go.
I need you in my life.

by HystericalHeart 29 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 7 5:38 PM 2008. In Sad, Pain

• Commented on by judge.
Just breathe [just die]

by Forgotten Anomaly 52 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 7 10:24 PM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Sad, Pain, Dark, Sadness, Escape

• Commented on by judge.
Curtain Call

Your chalk like smile painted on wrong,
the defeated liking to a cobbled song.

by Sam-I-Am 25 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 8 5:51 PM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Weird

• Commented on by judge.

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PoetryStar2
October 26, 2008
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Rock On
Have Fun with This
PoetryStar2
October 26, 2008
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im sorry to the owner of the poem infuriation i cannot view it
Immortal Obscurity
October 26, 2008
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I wish I could write for you... One of my best friends just passed away the other day, and I've written one poem for her already; but I can't do any more, because it just doesn't feel 'real' to me just yet and my muse is shot dead. If anything good comes out of me, I'll enter it here for sure. If not, good luck with your contest.
- PoetryStar2
  November 7, 2008
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  could u please erase ur poem off my contest because i cant judge the contest unless itt is
PoetryStar2
October 27, 2008
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the owner of thors around my spine im sorry i cannot view it cause im under age so can you remove you poem so i can judge my contes
Coolcolec
October 27, 2008
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Hi
hi everyone i wish you luck
PoetryStar2
November 7, 2008
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the owner of i am the dirty little secret will u please erase it because i cant judge my contest unless you do and the same for throns around my spine