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Hey Jude! # 139 Hosted for Allpoetry by Winklings

Take a look at the lyrics here and write something on a similar theme or write a parody.

HEY JUDE - THE BEATLES

Hey, Jude, don't make it bad
Take a sad song and make it better
Remember to let her into your heart
Then you can start to make it better

Hey, Jude, don't be afraid
You were made to go out and get her
The minute you let her under your skin
Then you begin to make it better.

And any time you feel the pain, hey, Jude, refrain
Don't carry the world upon your shoulders
Well don't you know that its a fool who plays it cool
By making his world a little colder

Hey, Jude! Don't let her down
You have found her, now go and get her
Remember, to let her into your heart
Then you can start to make it better.

So let it out and let it in, hey, Jude, begin
You're waiting for someone to perform with
And don't you know that it's just you, hey, Jude,
You'll do, the movement you need is on your shoulder

Hey, Jude, don't make it bad
Take a sad song and make it better
Remember to let her into your heart
Then you can start to make it better

 

 

This contest is being judged by CitrineSunrise and cricketjeff.  Thank you for your patience. 

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on November 19, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 1000, Silver: 500, Bronze: 250, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    I'm sorry that you waited so long for this contest to be judged. We agreed on the winners and would like to congratulate all of the entrants.

Contest Winners

  1. by MargaretG 33 lines, 26 comments, on Oct 21 2:23 PM 2008. In Humor, Life, Parody
    Gold trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4716109, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4705849, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  4. I'm nude, so what's the beef?
    by MyrddinEmrys 33 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 22 10:58 AM 2008. In Humor, Thoughts, Parody
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  5. Hey, Jude, another anniversary
    With memories I am grateful to have
    by Scrunter 25 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 22 5:33 PM 2008. In Contest, Personal, Sad, Love, Friendship, Dedication, Loss
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]

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  • wohadreambig
    October 22, 2008
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    Awesome contest! Hey Jude is such a great song! I will see what i can come up with.


  • MargaretG
    November 17, 2008
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    Closed for judging on November 4

    Not viewed by judge. Many of us wrote original work for this contest, have you forgotten your part?


  • MyrddinEmrys silver member
    November 20, 2008
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    Thanks for the "mention"

    I had fun responding tothe challange.

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