i have several of these.
so of course, i am looking for prewrites.
no haiku or 5 line poems.
no 100+ line epics, i'm not in the mood.
no shitty emo/dp.
rhyme is accepted.
however, i'm not going to lie,
i'm pretty prejudiced against it.
that is because most rhyming poetry
on this site is terrible.
i won't dq anything,
but i am not promising comments this contest.
i am sure i will have a ton of really crappy entries.
try to prove me wrong.
anything with more than 5-7 comments
no matter how wonderful
I WILL NOT CONSIDER.
this is the entire point of the contest.
so of course, i am looking for prewrites.
no haiku or 5 line poems.
no 100+ line epics, i'm not in the mood.
no shitty emo/dp.
rhyme is accepted.
however, i'm not going to lie,
i'm pretty prejudiced against it.
that is because most rhyming poetry
on this site is terrible.
i won't dq anything,
but i am not promising comments this contest.
i am sure i will have a ton of really crappy entries.
try to prove me wrong.
anything with more than 5-7 comments
no matter how wonderful
I WILL NOT CONSIDER.
this is the entire point of the contest.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 9, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100
- Final notes: Bleh. Lots of... not high quality pieces in this contest. I enjoyed several, but I probably won't host another contest like this.
Anything I commented with 3 applause I enjoyed. Check out my other contest if you want,
palomas negras [black doves]
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2426227
Contest Winners
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by 245Trioxin 26 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 20 5:50 PM 2008. In Personal, sad, pang, loneliness, metphor, my own style
Silver trophy winner
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Entries [35]
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Privileged men sit in ivy league classes.
earn sheep skin passesby word20dragon 21 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 31 12:15 PM 2008. In Contemporary• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
This I know isn't my best but I just wanted to put something new out there. So here you go.by redrumdog31 16 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 17 1:41 PM 2008. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Judith Chandler 36 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 14 6:37 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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On again
Off againby blondevamp 14 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 20 7:13 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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There he sits, my wooden man, as perfect as can be;
A handsome face and strong body! I’m awed; I sigh, softly.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The trees conspire in company
To cut the power to our house;by patrick20traveler 18 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 12 2:55 AM 2008. In Nature• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Down to old England town rode a clown, to help quell the crimes of the times
There he brought laughter to many, too weak to speak their mby spideracer 114 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 18 11:27 PM 2008. In Nursery rhyme, Sadness, Humanity, Death, Society• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The sun on my face
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Oh, if I could run free with the wild horses
I'd run and I would keep going and never stop.by Writing0Freedom 17 lines, on Sep 28 8:50 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
my feelins about a special someoneby burningchild 24 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 31 5:20 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A single spark drips from each petal
of the Electric Orchid.by lunarlunacy 17 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 13 9:45 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A solitary drop of sweat rolls down his face,
As he raises his hand at an almost stationary pace,by Cloudwalker 20 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 28 12:25 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
everyone is playing a part.
A lie fabricated by time.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You come to me in the dead of night.
Just a slight breeze to show your here.by pyscho harley quinn 19 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 3 7:33 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A hidden past lingers
Behind closed doors called eyes.by swimmeroks 13 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 21 10:38 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I really do hate no one Love's all i can hold inby Kiryuuofloveandhate 24 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 27 3:29 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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How far will this little bridge take me? Never have I known a safer path than this,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I’ll forge my vengeance
Like a burning epidemic
I’ll sever the hingesby Emo-Taco 23 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 31 1:13 PM 2006• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Comments
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I don't know what you're looking for
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anything you thought was fantastic but never got noticed by anyone
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I have something with six comments due to discussions, but the comments are only mine a two other people's so I hope it's fine.
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yep, definitely ok
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But what is to stop someone simply deleting comments?
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that would be pretty pathetic
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indeed, so theyprobably wouldn't be all that good a poet, i'm sure our gracious host could tell =P
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i guess i just have to trust them,
and hopefully not too many people are assholes
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But surely most people delete comments they feel are inappropriate - or on occasion, ignorant - like the one I once had criticizing a villanelle for having "too many repeats in it" - which is rather like criticizing an apple pie for having apples in it!
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eh, well i can see your point, but i think that most poems with a lot of talent don't have many inappropriate comments....
and if someone is desperate enough to delete their own comments in order to try to win a contest with a multitude of entries then... well that's their issue not mine
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the prewrite selector needs a view option
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or too much alliteration
pies should be baked on site
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I added As i sit here if u want to kno who it is
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crappy entries
Y eyel haf yu no that I nevur right bad prerites nor of any such !!!
an the dawgs that bark like trees fli like kites ... thad waz a pom I rodt awile bak an its nawt crapi ut awl ... ya know?
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i no wat ur sayin!! ppl just gota stop h8in juss like entr sumthin n hopuflly the judje likes it, cuz i gota say most ppl here hav no idea wat real quailty is
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I entered something
I am not invested in -
yuppers
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ummm ... what if it won a gold but got only one comment? ... i have some of those an an what bout thuh one that got 400 comments on my cell phone but none on the site here or the one that was my masterpeece magnol opus sort a and !!! ???
but only won nine golds and nobody ever commented ... an an i wouldn't remove it from a contest and eraise the darn stupid, moronic comments which I never get
eh?
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I have to say there's a lot of terrible free verse too

I never enter contests like these, in case you read my rhyme and tell me it's terrible! Or my free verse for that matter
Good luck
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Thank you so much for the bronze and congrats to the other winners.
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Thanks alot for gold, I really appreciate it, congrats to all the other winners as well
sorry moquispear =o
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