This would be my favoritest title EVER!!! And for all you that know me i love reading sad poems...
So here are some options...
1- Love - I would prefer sad/broken hearted love... Thats what i love reading about... but if you think you can blow me away with a happy ending one then go for it... Ill admit some people has...
2- Depression- You could write about cutting, rape, or anything that makes you depressed...
3. Write about memories that you have shared with your partner (sad or happy) I would enjoy those both.
Here are some phrases you can use in your write(please if you use them put which one in th authors box)
1- The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love someone else
2- Some of the greater things in life are unseen thats why you close your eyes when you kiss, cry, or dream...
3- The ones that you love the most are usually the ones that hurt you the most
4- When you are in Love you can't fall asleep because reality is better than your dreams
5- I want to grow old with you
WELL THERE YEAH HAVE IT... OPTIONS, OPTIONS, OPTIONS!!!!!
I want everyone to blow me away with these writes... I LOVE reading sad and broken hearted writes... Im not really sure why... I can just relate to so many of them!!!!
Ok so here are some rules that you must FOLLOW!
1- Must Rhyme (unless you are feeling that you can blow me away without rhyming) I love reading rhyming poetry... Its just my kind of thig.
2- I dont want anything to dark.... If your writing about cutting.. dont say... the world hates me im gonna cut myself for some attention... n blah blah... i was some real life telling stories!!!!
3- Write the number that you wrote about in the authors box.
Thank you everyone!!!! HAVE FUN!!!
Commenting on other poets and mine would be greatly appreciated.... (Not Required)
So here are some options...
1- Love - I would prefer sad/broken hearted love... Thats what i love reading about... but if you think you can blow me away with a happy ending one then go for it... Ill admit some people has...
2- Depression- You could write about cutting, rape, or anything that makes you depressed...
3. Write about memories that you have shared with your partner (sad or happy) I would enjoy those both.
Here are some phrases you can use in your write(please if you use them put which one in th authors box)
1- The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love someone else
2- Some of the greater things in life are unseen thats why you close your eyes when you kiss, cry, or dream...
3- The ones that you love the most are usually the ones that hurt you the most
4- When you are in Love you can't fall asleep because reality is better than your dreams
5- I want to grow old with you
WELL THERE YEAH HAVE IT... OPTIONS, OPTIONS, OPTIONS!!!!!
I want everyone to blow me away with these writes... I LOVE reading sad and broken hearted writes... Im not really sure why... I can just relate to so many of them!!!!
Ok so here are some rules that you must FOLLOW!
1- Must Rhyme (unless you are feeling that you can blow me away without rhyming) I love reading rhyming poetry... Its just my kind of thig.
2- I dont want anything to dark.... If your writing about cutting.. dont say... the world hates me im gonna cut myself for some attention... n blah blah... i was some real life telling stories!!!!
3- Write the number that you wrote about in the authors box.
Thank you everyone!!!! HAVE FUN!!!
Commenting on other poets and mine would be greatly appreciated.... (Not Required)
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 18, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 75, Bronze: 30, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: WOW!!! This was an amazing contest!!! You all did a very, very great job writing these writes!!! Im really sorry that it had took so long... So many things have been going on lately...
CONGRADULATIONS TO ALL THE WINNERS...KEEP UP THE AWESOME WRITING EVERYONE!!!
Shannon*Leah
Contest Winners
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Ever cried all ur tears...till u swam in ur shirt?by Emotional-wreck 27 lines, 48 comments, on Jul 12 7:48 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Dark, My life, Personal, Depression
Gold trophy winner
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Reading the quote
"Trying to forgetby fake-or-real-smile 23 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 27 8:26 AM 2008. In Personal, Sad, Love
Bronze trophy winner
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I loved you the day we met
I'll love you till I dieby bluecollarlove 23 lines, 16 comments, on Mar 20 4:21 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I sit and I wait
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The troubled love of a young teenager
Too young in fact to see the pathby MegsterAugust96 14 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 19 7:56 PM 2008. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
To awaken to your voice is as to me
hearing beautiful song of the birds of dawn.by lunarlunacy 20 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 20 6:49 PM 2008. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
I was not good enough for you,
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Why do I cry?
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I let my heart slip, It fell into the dust.by eternitydemon 8 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 17 1:33 AM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Sad, Pain, Other, My own style, Lost in thought, Sadness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It’s a world more perfect than my own
My own…by Emo-Taco 42 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 4 10:56 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
How we used to be, i won't forget,
how we painfully ended, i still regret.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
There he sits, my wooden man, as perfect as can be;
A handsome face and strong body! I’m awed; I sigh, softly.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Before you I was happy
Lonesome but it's trueby Jaffa- 18 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 3 3:10 PM 2008. In heartbreak3• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Who could have known one glance
by Carly Pop 14 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 2 4:08 AM 2008
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My poem doesn't rhyme, but I'm hoping it is good enough.

