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This is a PIF from Sensual Angels and Kiwigirljacks contest I won so... here I am

 

 

I want something completely outside the box with this one - I know what the picture is so please do not explain it to me. If you want to publish these pieces in the future they have to be able to stand on their own w/o the picture.

 

 

Rules:

1. 50 -70 words

2. Strong metaphors and imagery are a plus

3. No typing like a two (YeAr Old) if we are here on this site we are past that.

 

Use whatever poetic devises you want to pen me something briliant. This contest will be open til 9:00 Est

 

 

Best of luck fellow poets  

Please credit the artist : My lost jewels By Floranda on Deviant art

 

Here is my attempt:

 

Serene Orchestrations

 

Jeweled diamonds entertain rhinestone strands,

encompassed by mornings first dew.

Breathe deep the exhilarating morning air,

rejuvenating dulled senses  back to life.

 

Cleansing impurities, filling lungs,

with heavens inspirational zephyr.

Pure tears of nature coagulate,

upon leaves of colored spectrum's,

as morning melodies echo through out,

misty breezes, awakening slumbering souls,

from a serene peacefulness.

 

Credit to :  Fourtyninereasons for this background

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on November 3, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 1 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you to every one who entered - all were worthy of trophies sorry I did not have enough to give out bless everyone for taking the time to enter it took so long to judge because everyone's was so good

Contest Winners

  1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4699180, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  2. Web of Tears
    And keep me together stop me falling apart
    For all the years, our love - a web of tears
    by XxGoldenxXDawnxX 25 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 20 8:20 AM 2008. In Contest, Fantasy, Love, Personal, Sad, Spiritual, Thoughts
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Simplicity
    Panacea pearls
    strewn in sagacious strands
    by penman 21 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 21 11:57 AM 2008. In Other
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Absorption ( HM )
    Embellished dreams,
    crystallised in the sanctuary of mind.
    by Reptile Lady 15 lines, 11 comments, on Oct 19 5:12 PM 2008. In Love, Life, Pain, Personal
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • XxGoldenxXDawnxX
    November 3, 2008
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    Thank you for the silver!!!


  • penman gold member
    November 3, 2008
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    Thank you for the bronze. Congratulations to all the winners.


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    November 4, 2008
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    Thank you so much for the gold trophy. Congratulations to all. Thanks for hosting and judging