I want new favorites
and i'm sure
you want comments.
So lets make a deal.
Enter a prewrite!
If I like it
I will comment.
If I don't
i'll delete it.
-You may enter again,
fair enough?
ONE OBVIOUS RULE.
-Name in Authors Comments Please.
SOME HINTS
-I love imagery, metaphors, similies and personification.
if your poem does't tick atleast 2 boxes, well just don't enter it!
-I don't like epics, rhyme, blood.
ElectricBloom
and i'm sure
you want comments.
So lets make a deal.
Enter a prewrite!
If I like it
I will comment.
If I don't
i'll delete it.
-You may enter again,
fair enough?
ONE OBVIOUS RULE.
-Name in Authors Comments Please.
SOME HINTS
-I love imagery, metaphors, similies and personification.
if your poem does't tick atleast 2 boxes, well just don't enter it!
-I don't like epics, rhyme, blood.
ElectricBloom
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 23, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Wow.
Where to start?
Well, I'm sorry it took me so long to judge!
I'm in the middle of exams, so lifes abit hectic!
I gave up on my ONE rule, as so many people didn't follow it - reminders were annoying and I didn't want to delete most of the entries!!
I didn't know you could only have 5 HMs now! I wish I could give more. There are lots more poets deserving them!!
My favorites list is going to grow - quite dramatically. And just because you're not in the Finalists list doesn't mean I wont favorite you!! I need to go and read more of your work!
Thank you.
A very successful contest.
ElectricBloom
Contest Winners
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It stood tall like a dead tree,
ancient axes buried in its faces...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
You can tell by the way he counts out his fare
that he never carries cash-by Floorboards 34 lines, 48 comments, on Sep 27 10:24 AM 2008. In Society, Humor
Silver trophy winner
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He sits alone, a man condemned
His final hour ticking by• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Shadows painting death
upon an ordinary evening.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
The loops winded over each other
connecting at all the ends• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 2987848, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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DEATH OF A BROKEN PLANETby robert davidson 46 lines, 47 comments, on Sep 13 8:43 PM 2008. In Contemporary, Life, environment, Nature• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by silverscent 14 lines, 11 comments, on Oct 7 4:26 AM 2008
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [30]
1 - 30 of 30
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The kiss of the wind
upon my cheekby Judith Chandler 13 lines, 10 comments, on Oct 15 2:59 PM 2008. In Contest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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A hidden past lingers
Behind closed doors called eyes.by swimmeroks 13 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 21 10:38 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
sitting by the mesmerizing sea
hair blowing in the breeze• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Static disruption
a crackling distraction• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It’s the sight of you, the scent of you
Oh, my body just knows when you’re near• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
He said he’s only
five feet under,by coloringmysenses 25 lines, 11 comments, on Oct 9 7:13 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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by FleetingImage 44 lines, 18 comments, on Oct 10 3:25 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She was born on Earth
But she feels she belongs• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i am but an empty vessel
Born to hold the colors this world would have me bear.
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by Dangerousparable 27 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 19 5:27 AM 2008. In Contemporary, Adult, Life, Society, Sad, Personal, Spiritual, Thoughts, Government• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A morning mist hangs o'er the earth,
Dappled-grey between the trees,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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wow. when you say no rhyming, that knocks out a lot.
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It doesn't say No Rhyming.
It says I don't like rhyme.
Feel free to enter rhyme if you wish.
x
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I didn't know you don't like rhyme? hum. well hope ya get a lot of good ones ^_^
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hmm..
I do like rhyme if it's done well.
but most rhyme on here is forced, kills flow and destroys line breaks and just in general is really painful to read =/
^.^ x
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Thanks very much for the silver!
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