This contest is dedicated to my dear sister and the piece of shit who threw it all away ...I find it so hard to believe that when you love someone with all your heart and soul, that they can simply just up and walk away one day; like everything you had together, all you worked for, FOUGHT for ... meant n o t h i n g.
If you know me, you know a bit about why I may think like this.
My contest last year was very difficult for me;
to admit what was happening, and face it.
~You ALL helped me in your own ways.~
++++Now, I want poems TO the deceiver!++++ Have you been hurt? Ripped at the seams? Where love once warmed your skin,
does the bitter cold ACHE beneath the bone?
Tell me; give me your pain, anger, & disgust for those pathetic excuses for a human being that dragged you through the depths.
PRE-WRITES ALLOWED ONLY IF THEY FIT or will be removed!
This can be a letter-esque piece, I just want it to be directed to the filth who sliver in their demise...
.... WHAT COMES AROUND GOES AROUND ....
If you bash me or any other contestants here, you will be removed and placed on ignore!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 13, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: I know it took me a while to judge this - but I wanted to be fair and give it time. I went through the top few many times, because there was something about all these that just struck me, and it seemed to be a bit of something different every time. Thank you ALL!!! I added the poems that stood out to me in the finalists list - and if I could give more HM's there would be a couple more there. Thanks again & take care!
Contest Winners
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The door slams
again.by Bean Sidhe 51 lines, 13 comments, on Jun 26 7:14 PM 2008. In Ex Husband Poetry, Pain, Personal, Thoughts
Bronze trophy winner
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by poet2angels 52 lines, 30 comments, on Jun 18 10:12 AM 2007. In lyrics, love, dark
Honorable mention
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crying a river levy walls breaking
searching for the exact dayby nevadapoet 80 lines, 30 comments, on Oct 17 7:12 PM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Pain, Contest, My own style, Lost in thought, Sadness, Depressed Honorable mention
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Your Dagger of Trust -
has deceivingly slit open my heart.by lunarlunacy 10 lines, 13 comments, on Oct 1 8:05 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
"Oh. You hurt me so. How can I stand such pain?"by Lemure S. Knox 19 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 15 3:29 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Broken, prosthetic heart,
you took my emotions and ripped them apart.by Touch of Osiris 28 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 27 4:41 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
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This one person made me think
that we would be freinds for etrnityby GothicEmoKid 11 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 14 10:57 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
So here i am
sitting here feelingby Jade.Butterfly 42 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 22 7:01 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Pain, Angry, My own style, Friendship, Life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
What do I do?
What can I say?by x0charlie-redhead0x 22 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 8 11:50 PM 2008. In Angst, Pain, Personal, Sad, My own style, Lost love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
you said you loved me / i thought it was true / but now im the one thats sad and blue / you tore my hart wide open / when i heard you say wby saddendsoul 19 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 22 11:21 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Your words are dribble.
Truthless, unoriginal dribble.by Hirestel 36 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 20 2:28 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Rants and Lies; Honesty and Tears / Ears attended, / Yet heart refused, / Such is the fate, / Of your convincing lies, unmasked. / Liar! /by BeautifulFlame 40 lines, 26 comments, on Jun 23 9:10 PM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Depressed, Anger, Escape, Collaboration• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I wake up every morning
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This game is crucial and will turn you blue
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I know you better than you think,
You used to hold me and love me,by Irish-rain 20 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 2 7:02 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You were for me, a golden ocean,
My heavenly butterfly with wings,by Ebbing.X.Discreetly 34 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 16 5:04 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Pain, Angst, Contemporary, Hurt, Love, Life, Sad, Inspirational, Emotional• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Once like a great big fool I was taken in by you.by charmander13 22 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 22 10:02 PM 2008. In Lies, truth, life, reality, fantasy, trust, betrayal, manipulation, realization• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I love you, my dear, always have, always will”
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Holy crap!!! I may have to enter this one for sure!! I'm so sick of it myself!!!
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I would love to have you here my dear!!! Don't hold anything back!!!
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Both my exes were lying cheating SOBs!!!! grrrr... I could go another vent.. already done one yesterday lol
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If it fits here I will allow it with permission
... But if you want a fresh rant you are welcome!!!
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Fresh rants are good too
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Pre-writes are open, one slipped in!!
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There's a really good ska song with these words in the title.
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If you find it, leave the link!
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yOFkcj4iDvM - Song
Lyrics:
"A moment of silence, please, for those who never get the chance
They show up to the party, but they're never asked to dance
The losers, the liars, the bastards, the thieves
The cynicists, the pessimists, and those that don't believe in nothing
I never met a loser that I didn't see eye-to-eye with, I declare
I stare into your eyes
But you look right past me into the air
What's it like to stand in your shoes?
To have never felt the belt of somebody's abuse?
I take the bottle and I tip it to all my heroes that have passed
Alas, you have left us, but your stories they will last
Uninspired by the recruiting call
Independent we stand
Independent we fall"
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Thank you - I like that - cool song!
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Yes
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:-/ no PW & yet one got in? bummer...i think a few of us here already vented & have lotsa steam still left on our pages...
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one did get in didn't it!?
Alright - I will allow them - but they must fit lol!
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Cool! Can we enter more than one? My wife has at least 2 she could enter!
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Just one for now - just so no fussing if one poet gets in two places lol... But I do so hope you both enter!!!
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Okie dokie, I just put mine in & Lisa will add hers in a lil bit (we are using one puter).
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Sounds groovy lol!!!
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And anyone who would like to help judge, instead of write or enter - let me know!!!
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You don't know me so you might not want to let me judge but I'd love to help judge. I don't have time to write something for it because I missed a week of school ( I didn't cut class, I was in Italy for a wedding) and need to catch up for that though I know what its like to have your world be ripped apart by someone you trusted. So I'd be happy to help judge
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My sis means the world to me, and she and I both had our husbands up and run away for lust's sake... If you can commit to reading all the entries and commenting (short is fine), and telling me your insights - you are welcome to co-judge!
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Wow, I'm sorry you and your sister had to deal with that. Thats awful and obviously they weren't good enough for you. No one should have to go through that.
I can get on at least every other day and read and comment. I'd love to help. How do I become a co judge? Do you want me to talk to you first before I comment on anything or..?
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I am looking for assassins. Anyone out there. 
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I got your back, ALWAYS!!!!
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you rock, Sis
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Thank you my dear!!! This is for all of us - who have been taken for a fool ...
Love you!!!
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Hmmm, my kind of contest
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Thank you for the Silver & congrats to the winners
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Yeah but sometimes the angsty ones just stand out there more lol! Thanks again!
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It definitely allowed me to vent...
Welcome lol now on to happier themes!
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TY Sis for hosting this great contest...I think many needed it....TY for the great comment and HM
Congrats to Ken whoo hoo!!! my ap daughter darkwell, the other winners and all who entered and were able to vent!
Lynda;f
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