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Take My Breath Away(Anything you Want)

Any Thing Is Fine the Only requirement I have is that whatever you enter has to take my breath away. You can enter multiple times but no more than Five.

Kristi

No rules just write whatever your heart tells you too.

Come this Weekend Friday-Sunday I wont be on. Again Until Monday sometime late. I am putting this up so I don't forget.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on October 19, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 75
  • Final notes:
    I would like to thank everyone for such a wonderful turnout. you all were awesome

Contest Winners

  1. by saddendsoul 23 lines, on Nov 30 3:08 PM 2006
    Gold trophy winner
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  2. Feet frozen in place,
    Nailed to the floor.
    by Nicada 43 lines, 99 comments, on Jun 7 12:52 PM 2008. In Abuse, Personal, Sad, Pain, Noguest
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. My pain you cannot kill
    My wounds any medicine cannot heal
    by Shuberth 20 lines, 34 comments, on Oct 9 5:14 AM 2008. In Sad, Personal, Angst, Suicide, Life, Pain, Thoughts, Depression, Angry, Goodbyes
    Bronze trophy winner
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  4. fucking take the knife and slash open at my bare flesh.
    by Candy Morphine 184 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 26 2:21 AM 2008. In AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. im giving up
    thats the simplest way it can be said
    by figment. 9 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 18 5:07 PM 2007. In Dark, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. like the first raindrop to hit the ground / a single tears drips to the floor / the violent clouds twist and turn / and it begins to pour
    by figment. 22 lines, 3 comments, on May 3 3:49 PM 2007. In Dark, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. I try to shower away this pain
    But it comes right back to me
    by Zoe2007 30 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 20 8:32 AM 2008. In Pain, Abuse, Spiritual, Sad, Personal, Thoughts, Dark, Life, Self, Family, Hate
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. suns rise
    and suns fall,
    by figment. 34 lines, 16 comments, on Oct 13 7:31 PM 2008. In Personal, Spiritual, Thoughts, Life, Nature
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  9. How did I not see through your lies when the
    Actual truth isn't hidden in your eyes and
    by Billy Badass 23 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 28 6:44 PM 2006. In Personal, Other, Dark
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  10. Am I that vision you created
    when you first had me in mind?
    by starless-knight 88 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 14 4:53 PM 2008. In Contest, Hope, Life, Love, Thoughts, Spiritual, Personal, Pain, Christian
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  11. Look for me in my shadow
    Where the sun is never found
    by Billy Badass 19 lines, 13 comments, on Sep 18 2:41 PM 2006. In Love, Dark
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  12. Impromptu acts of kindness
    Push me to the moon,
    by Trent plus pen 26 lines, 14 comments, on Jan 29 12:53 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  13. by Zoe2007 33 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 13 4:49 PM 2008. In Personal, Sad, Spiritual, Thoughts, Pain, Fantasy, Hope, Life, Love, Nature
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  14. I made my choice, I took the oath
    I stand for freedom, but I don't boast
    by Zoe2007 24 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 21 7:30 AM 2008. In Personal, Pain, Sad, Life, Love, Hope
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  15. Somewhere
    An empty church
    by a-face-in-the-crowd 20 lines, 9 comments, on May 28 11:10 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  16. by edit my world. 25 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 13 3:37 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  17. by pointlessdayz 56 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 9 5:57 PM 2008. In Other, Personal
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  18. please forgive me
    for loving you
    by char-char 6 lines, 14 comments, on Jul 13 3:35 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  19. Sweating, sweating,
    I was sweating so dry.
    by Trent plus pen 32 lines, 13 comments, on Mar 6 2:05 AM 2008. In Angst, Dark, Hope, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Society, Sad, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  20. Daddy, can't you see me?
    Can't you see that I am dying?
    by Cathartic Denouement 28 lines, 10 comments, on Sep 14 1:32 AM 2008. In Life, Sad
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  21. If i should die before i wake,
    its of the heart,
    by SaviDropKick.Oi. 15 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 27 4:03 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  22. I am nothing more than a living corpse,
    decaying out from the depths of my soul.
    by SaviDropKick.Oi. 27 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 22 3:56 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  23. So many faces that I wear
    People not knowing how I feel inside
    by hotchocolate 13 lines, 21 comments, on Oct 14 1:24 AM 2008. In Thoughts, Depression, Sadness, My own style, Other, Sad
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  24. Once upon a time as this fairytale died,
    the gravitational ghosts of the stars in your eyes,
    by SaviDropKick.Oi. 31 lines, 12 comments, on Oct 5 1:59 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  25. Hide behind your mask,
    secrets meant to last,
    by SaviDropKick.Oi. 71 lines, 24 comments, on Oct 13 5:33 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  26. by lowercase prelude 31 lines, 20 comments, on Oct 6 8:14 PM 2008. In Contest, Society, Life, Teen issues
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  27. by lost lunar 24 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 6 6:27 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  28. It's morning time,
    A faded mirror,
    by Trent plus pen 18 lines, 21 comments, on Sep 25 7:47 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  29. Oh world on fire,
    You worry me when you cry.
    by Trent plus pen 28 lines, 10 comments, on May 8 8:08 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  30. my pens shaking in my hand
    by xbeautifulxdisasterx 99 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 14 5:47 PM 2008. In Sad, Friendship, Teen issues, Teenage thinking, Sadness, Depression
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  31. You don't understand.
    You never did; now you never will.
    by Cathartic Denouement 22 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 24 1:23 PM 2008. In Angst, Personal, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  32. I thought about you today
    and I faltered at your words
    by Voodoo Eyes 19 lines, 14 comments, on Feb 7 7:38 PM 2008. In Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  33. by myriad-dark 43 lines, 12 comments, on May 20 7:50 PM 2008. In Lyrics, Life, Society, Pain, Thoughts, Memories
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  34. by myriad-dark 26 lines, 2 comments, on May 29 9:00 PM 2008. In Lyrics, Nature, Life, Spiritual, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  35. by dstreetpoet 39 lines, 14 comments, on Aug 18 7:21 PM 2008. In Lyrics, Love, Pain, Thoughts, Life
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  36. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4661941, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  37. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4603603, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  38. Quick like a band-aid
    I tear out my heart
    by brittany.geeze 39 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 15 12:35 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  39. You make me so happyyou are my reason to liveI cry tear''s of joy I have someone I want tospen
    by gdog 24 lines, 27 comments, on Apr 12 6:38 AM 2005. In Hope
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  40. Just because I had one drink too many
    Doesn't mean that you could rape me.
    by brittany.geeze 27 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 18 8:58 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  41. TaaaKe My HannD. TaAkE My Hannnd!
    You follow my every move,
    by brittany.geeze 12 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 10 11:14 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  42. Tribute to those still running an
    by Writing0Freedom 42 lines, 34 comments, on Sep 11 11:32 PM 2008
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  43. by spideracer 68 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 11 3:31 AM 2008. In Dark, Pain, Abuse, Adult, Angst
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  44. Ten years from now I know my life will be great:
    The alarm rings at a quarter to 7, urging me to get ready
    by brittany.geeze 28 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 3 3:45 PM 2008
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  45. Watching the pain cast shadows underneath your eyes
    tore me apart inside- icy blows ripped into my heart
    by Writing0Freedom 40 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 25 11:47 PM 2008
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  46. When I'm with him,
    I feel like a diamond...
    by brittany.geeze 21 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 15 9:02 PM 2008
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  47. Look closer tell me, i was wrong
    Tell me how, this victim deceived you
    by BeautifulFlame 20 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 2 7:23 AM 2008. In Contest, Life, Abuse, My life, Message, Thoughts, Other
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  48. by BeautifulFlame 24 lines, 11 comments, on Oct 16 2:47 AM 2008. In Dark, Sad, Life, Personal, Adult, Lyrics, Abuse
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  49. by BeautifulFlame 23 lines, 23 comments, on Jul 18 6:39 PM 2008. In Love, Personal, Spiritual, Romance, Contest
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  50. She placed her feet where he stood
    still feeling the warmth beneath moist sand,
    by BeautifulFlame 22 lines, 21 comments, on Jul 12 12:23 AM. In Contest, Divine, Feminine, Masculine, Metaphor, Nature, Longing, Sad, Hope
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  51. Sitting by the waters egde. / my hand slowly moves through the cool water. / Its a warm summer day yet.. / i feel so cold . / As the water
    by BeautifulFlame 95 lines, 11 comments, on Jun 15 3:33 AM. In Thoughts, Memories, Time
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  52. she thught that she was the
    only one he was doing this to for
    by saddendsoul 25 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 20 9:47 PM 2006. In Abuse
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  53. I threw a stone on a river
    and formed were many ripples
    by scenescene 33 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 9 2:22 PM 2008. In Contest, Hope, Pain
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  54. They flow like a waterfall
    in sadness and happiness alike
    by scenescene 35 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 16 4:33 AM 2008. In Hope, Humor, Contest, Thoughts
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  55. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4342253, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  56. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4655917, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  57. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2168243, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  58. leaves crack under gentle feet
    black darkness
    by jessifer1792 24 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 11 1:31 PM 2008
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  59. God you are astounding
    You keep me breathing
    by jessifer1792 64 lines, 18 comments, on Jul 23 8:52 PM 2008. In Inspirational, Love, Happiness
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  60. She sits down as the tears start falling
    Hard to breathe, her heart keeps stalling
    by jessifer1792 12 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 31 9:17 PM 2008. In Lost love, Freewrite, Longing
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  61. It's about plenty of things... It all depends on how you look at it. It uses a candle as a metaphor for how life treats us in one way, or y
    by ErictheRed 32 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 7 4:08 PM 2006. In Other
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  62. by xDemonicxAngelx 36 lines, 22 comments, on Jun 29 9:48 AM 2006. In Sad, Personal, Love
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  63. by hotaru92 41 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 15 3:37 PM 2008. In Sad, Personal, Pain, Other, Love, Life, Dark
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • starless-knight
    October 14, 2008
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    not enetering to win, enetereing to get a point accross. i was sad and feeling well, ugly worthless and awful today so I wrote something to make me feel like smiling and hopefully ur not anti christain in which case you mite smile too


  • xstephyxstephxo
    October 14, 2008
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    how do I enter

    how do I enter?


  • Shuberth
    October 19, 2008
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    WoW

    thanks!
    This makes my second trophy i ever won...
    yeah my 1st Bronze Trophy!

    Thank U!