I want you to take something. It could be an object, a person, an event, a season, a song, anything. I want you to write about it like you've never written before. Make me feel what you feel or see what you see. Bring it to life like never before.
If I feel like you didn't put enough effort into your write I'll have no problem removing it without warning.
I'm allowing prewrites but only if they meet the criteria.
In your authors notes tell me what the poem is about and why you wrote it.
Gold - 1000
Silver - 900
Bronze - 800
No honorable mentions kids, sorry.
Good luck!
If I feel like you didn't put enough effort into your write I'll have no problem removing it without warning.
I'm allowing prewrites but only if they meet the criteria.
In your authors notes tell me what the poem is about and why you wrote it.
Gold - 1000
Silver - 900
Bronze - 800
No honorable mentions kids, sorry.
Good luck!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 3, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 1000, Silver: 900, Bronze: 800
- Final notes: Sorry this took so long I had too mnay amazing entries to go through. I picked the ones that kept getting to me even after reading them over and over again. I think you should all take a second and view a poem or two that I put in the finalists section because all those write are completely mind blowing.
Thank you all so much for entering!!!
Contest Winners
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Gently the earth breathed and a breeze it blew
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When morning comes no one will say a word
Of what I saw and though I heard• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Well Autumn's here again old lad,
the leaves are turning gold.by Sunshine Always 43 lines, 11 comments, on Aug 30 1:13 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Hide behind your mask,
secrets meant to last,by SaviDropKick.Oi. 71 lines, 24 comments, on Oct 13 5:33 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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Hidden among my every move• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I'm changing you
You're changing me
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this is just something I thought up after listining to Scars from Papa Roachby hunnybunny01 23 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 4 10:49 AM 2006. In sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The person standing before
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The End of Every Bleeding soul
Confides in the veil of a black holeby Anu-Nataraj 17 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 17 12:21 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I waited
For over three hoursby SomethingPoetic 27 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 1 3:35 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Wish i could have known you Too bad you were heaven sentby SomethingPoetic 21 lines, 4 comments, on May 3 12:14 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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three pins
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"Mocking like scars from carpet burns you acquired as a child..."• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A Letter To Angst
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Tribute to those still running an
by Writing0Freedom 42 lines, 34 comments, on Sep 11 11:32 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
All that i ever wanted
was a cottage by the sea• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I won't do this again
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I kiss your hands and I marvel• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I loved you for so long,
It was years ago,by Irish-rain 37 lines, 12 comments, on Sep 4 3:28 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by BeautifulFlame 65 lines, 32 comments, on Oct 21 2:12 AM 2008. In Adult, Personal, Anger, Sadness, Pain, Freedom, Break the circle• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I don't think you're understanding the seriousness of the words I'm saying
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Today is my birthday
Crown me King and take me way.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Room 206- It is so dark,
and just a "little" too cold.by Whispered Devotions 139 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 16 9:10 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
The Texture of your lips
When it brushes over mine
the sound of the car runningby darkchemgirl 44 lines, 12 comments, on Oct 7 1:36 PM 2008. In Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The blood runs from my eyes
And pour out on the• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I need to believe that it wasn't for not
That the powerful pleasures that I patientily fought• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Why do you cry,
when i am not around?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I shall remember your face like Michelangelo his angels
gazing from painted heavens in bittersweet farewells,by Carly Pop 18 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 27 8:26 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
I'm endlessly seeking a high
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I sit here remembering happier times
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Oh black mask neurotic mess of fear mongering
deluge. . . have you come back once again to danceby marc creamore 80 lines, 24 comments, on Sep 11 1:51 PM 2008. In Pain, Society, Horror, Historical• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Your lullaby is whispered in the wind
Your song is replayed• Viewed by judge. -
She hides under her bed
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She was born on Earth
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Baby you know I love you,
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My tears tell a story,
My tears tell of pain,by Faithinlove 23 lines, on Oct 27 2:06 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
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Be Honest, give me some feedback. I wrote this poem a while back, it was in my old All poetry site. Many people seemed to enjoy this one.by writingismycure 152 lines, on Aug 25 6:09 AM 2007. In Spritual. Thoughts. Love. Sad.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Instead of trying to help her
You showed her the path to her doomby Le Fille Morte 58 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 30 5:21 PM 2008. In angst, eating disorder, anorexia, bluimia, pain, life, hurt, personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Our song plays on the radio,
your eyes they start to closeby Voodoo Eyes 70 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 1 6:14 PM 2005. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I placed artificial flowers where the marker would soon be erected, and realized that the flowers, not being real, symbolized our relationsby Girl-Interrupted 18 lines, 14 comments, on Oct 22 2:08 PM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Sad, Dark, Weird, Angst, My own style, Death, My life, Loss
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Only voices surround me as the cold touch upon my hand, warmsby jbbrandi 33 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 21 2:47 AM 2008. In schizophrenia, other, odd, different, dark, interesting, through different eyes• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The Selchies Song past lives
this was a persistent dream, it was repetitive over a period of weeks, I could see all the details, the sled , the man on the horse, the wolf skins, the ocean , it was not until I wrote the poem, that the dream stopped, ThenI met the man on the horse, go figure -
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I love it when things like that happen. Gives life more magic
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I'll try and give you something fresh sweetums.
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You never told me about this contest.

I shall try and write something for you!
I have to make it brilliant so I won't let you down

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LOL I figured you'd find it sooner or later
Can't wait to see what ya got!
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Hmm
I don't know if this fits into your options, but can I write about a dream that I had last night?
It's bugging me to hell and I need to let it all out!
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LOL go for it
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I entered a bloody prewrite!

I want to do something new for you, but I find it hard to write.
Nevertheless I am still going to try. Sorry if I don't enter it in time.
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in enterd a poem but i dont know if its in there because it isnt showing can you please let me know
its called ' A sweet goodnight'
so sorry about your loss i hope it will help
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Yup I found it you entered
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thanks for the gold. =)
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