secrets... What terrible things they are..eating you up inside like a parasite... I want RAW real and true! MUST BE TRUE secrets about you. Something nobody knows? Now I don't know any of you so your secrets are safe with me. I've had a lot of points and was waiting for the perfect contest idea... now I have it.. lets hear it!
Please take your time writing. I don't want shitty poem here. No offense but the last contest... there was a lot of senseless poetry... A WASTE OF WORDS... waste of my time.
(Please only serious entries only.)
RULES:
-MUST BE TRUE.
~you can have free verse or rhyming I don't really care.
~Length...not a novel unless it's worth the read ^-^
~It can be any category. I'm not picky. erotic, funny, personal, sad, happy, love... be creative. Be real. Be you.
have fun and take your time.
"It's eating me from the inside,
It wants out,
I'm ashamed,
No one knows,
It's mine,
My deepest secret..."
LET IT OUT!
Please take your time writing. I don't want shitty poem here. No offense but the last contest... there was a lot of senseless poetry... A WASTE OF WORDS... waste of my time.
(Please only serious entries only.)
RULES:
-MUST BE TRUE.
~you can have free verse or rhyming I don't really care.
~Length...not a novel unless it's worth the read ^-^
~It can be any category. I'm not picky. erotic, funny, personal, sad, happy, love... be creative. Be real. Be you.
have fun and take your time.
"It's eating me from the inside,
It wants out,
I'm ashamed,
No one knows,
It's mine,
My deepest secret..."
LET IT OUT!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 28, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200
- Final notes: wow... This contest was a big hit.
a lot secret shared..I could defiantly relate to a lot of you. I'm not too big on the entire cutting issue..anyways.. the rest of you did amazing! Very heart felt writes. The winner caught my eye right away with the secret.. it was so real and interesting. Please If you haven't already read and comment your thoughts.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4682129
second and third were mind blowing.
I had some disagreements with #2
but the secret took courage to reveal and share and explain..
#3 Never Hit A Girl
hahaha this poem was cute. and made me chuckle. assuming you wouldn't really do that to her... but never the less strong write.
I plan to do another contest like this... when I get enough points lol. But I do have another out right now. Titled "Bang Bang, My baby shot me down" feel free to enter that one. especially the winners of this contest. (your all winners)
Contest Winners
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feels good to let it out.• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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I'm //not// as i.n.n.o.c.e.n.t as I seem.
((not.a.good.person))by WinterEssa 20 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 14 10:08 PM 2008. In Dirty Pretty• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
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Falling gracefully from your face, tears of bitter diamond taste
Dew drops of sorrow and pain, without a direction no need for a nameby Rhythm Child 16 lines, 43 comments, on Oct 10 5:59 PM 2008. In Abuse, Pain, Personal, Sad, Dark, Life, Love, Sadness, Lost love, noguest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
To be momma’s little girl was always a fantasy. Till one day a realization hit. It will stay a fantasy. Crushed by words of hurt, no ideals and no faith in me. Unwillingness to accept me for who I am.&nby purpleIronbutterfly 2 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 8 10:25 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Cerulean Sunrise 15 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 14 2:46 AM 2008. In Contest• Commented on by judge.
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Read this and make the links
Because i mean you that breaks my heartby C 25 15 21 23 1 50 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 13 10:16 AM 2008. In Personal, Sad, Pain, Dark, Abuse, Death, Depression, Lost love, Hate• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My father came home drunk once again he could barely stand
Passed out in the chair with a lighted cigarette in hand
by smonte19124 29 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 14 6:07 AM 2008. In Contest, Personal., Family, My own style, My life• Commented on by judge. -
And you shattered my heart
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My deepest darkest secret, mama if i told you would you even beleive me?by SaviDropKick.Oi. 30 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 23 10:05 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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counting back in time,
waiting to find,by Gay-Militant 50 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 14 10:02 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
The tempting vibrations of lust possess every fragment of desireby skyviewexpress 13 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 22 7:54 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Static, friction
Your touch makes my nerve endings tingleby blondevamp 78 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 26 10:22 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Thanks for making my poem the only one you didn't comment on BITCH!
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