as the title says...
write whatever you want, If it is over 40 lines, you WILL NOT stand a chance of collecting the points...
To all my friends that have shared their lives with me, I wish you all the very best, I hope life brings you what you want and need...
I will be back in 3 days time to judge, I will not comment on entries...
Goodbye All....
write whatever you want, If it is over 40 lines, you WILL NOT stand a chance of collecting the points...
To all my friends that have shared their lives with me, I wish you all the very best, I hope life brings you what you want and need...
I will be back in 3 days time to judge, I will not comment on entries...
Goodbye All....
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 18, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 8000, Silver: 4000, Bronze: 2089, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: Just like to thank everyone for your entries and efforts, I originally wanted fresh writes for the contest, but didnt realise I had left prewrites open, by the time I realised there were already 20 entries
Also, within my contest notes, I stated that anything over 40 lines (not including blank lines) would not stand a chance of winning... there were a couple entered that exceeded this mark, so I viewed these poems but did not read them....SEEMS RULES ARE PUT IN PLACE FOR A REASON (this happens in every contest, do some of you even read the rules? )..
Also, as poets, we are students of language, yet how can one be a student when one does not even have the courtesy to SPELLCHECK their work ?? this defeats the point of writing words ?????? Being a poets all good, but when one doesnt even respect the medium you are using, seems to defeat the purpose.
Anyways, the winning entries were the ones I most enjoyed, that caused me to stop and ponder and marvel at the words written...
So once again, thank you for entering my contest...
Peace and write on
Poppa.
Contest Winners
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by xJustifiablyMex 23 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 14 1:57 AM 2008. In Personal, Metaphor
Bronze trophy winner
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by Black Narcissus 23 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 14 10:33 AM 2008. In Contest, Thoughts
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What became of me I ask,
did colour ever paint my faceby Reptile Lady 37 lines, 29 comments, on Sep 29 5:38 PM 2008. In Lost in thought, Sadness, Longing, His Life
Honorable mention
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by Shrat 27 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 21 11:50 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Brutally beaten by a bully
Emotions scarred for lifeby Shattered Remains 31 lines, on Oct 14 11:52 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
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For Kurt and Layneby Apocalyptic Scarves 7 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 13 7:52 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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October drizzle and the mercy
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by still.she.waits 16 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 31 9:38 AM 2008. In noguest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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What do we do in this little creepy world?
Dance whenever the sun is on fireby Emilina 19 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 6 11:02 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Smoke curls through the midnight sky
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by BehindTheShadow 34 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 13 1:56 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A single spark drips from each petal
of the Electric Orchid.by lunarlunacy 17 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 13 9:45 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
dreams are the key for us to make the world ours,
run with no tire until u can get it in ur armsby WatashiEnno 15 lines, on Oct 13 9:50 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
I bid you farewell
This place has grown staleby Cosmic Musketeer 28 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 13 10:04 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
by amaranthine lover 22 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 10 11:19 PM 2008. In Contemporary, Abstract, Fantasy, Dark, noguest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I'm only Human . . .by Childofserenity 20 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 13 11:39 PM 2008. In Other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Baby I think I'm falling for youby Sortingthroughlife 37 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 12 10:18 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I look up to the sky of vines
and they hover, kind as pets;by bird at rose 12 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 25 7:32 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Do you ever cry yourself to sleep at night
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Loser is his first name
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three pins
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Upon the wall, in coloured streaks,
I lay my soul down bare.by For-da-luv-of-EL 33 lines, 16 comments, on Sep 9 2:06 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Thy gilded cage, so devoid of light,
Pains thee by day and haunts thee by night.by Sunkissed xo 31 lines, 15 comments, on Jul 20 11:15 PM 2008. In Hope, Life, Love, Thoughts, Dedication, Longing• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
People talk, People stare,by Sams Princess 15 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 13 2:41 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You were for me, a golden ocean,
My heavenly butterfly with wings,by Ebbing.X.Discreetly 34 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 16 5:04 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Pain, Angst, Contemporary, Hurt, Love, Life, Sad, Inspirational, Emotional• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Please say that you love me, / even if you don’t. / I will just leave gleefully by hearing that. / And in the distance battlefield, / when• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Now come's the time for the door to close
Strike the statues poseby Natural Disaster 28 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 4 4:24 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Soaring amidst white clouds,
My heart turns over.by Abnormal 9 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 26 5:22 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
It happened on an early September morn,
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Wonderin around lost and forsaken
thinking of whats to comeby darkenKING 17 lines, on Oct 15 12:13 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
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Calliope--Beautiful speeched poet,by xxRainbowDawnxx 73 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 5 6:13 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Where have you been?
You swore you'd come aroundby pillowjoe 38 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 9 2:26 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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The darkness draws you in,
With beauty from the night.by colie50 13 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 4 10:26 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by mbm 16 lines, on Oct 15 9:56 PM 2008. In older woman catches on• Viewed by judge.
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Thou foresaken me to torture and scrutiny, When i blindly followed theeby Rhythm Child 29 lines, 40 comments, on Oct 14 8:27 AM 2008. In noguest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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If only I could BYTE into a computer chip
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The silver, fragile, sharp. Like the life it took. She was small, sensitive. Brilliant. They cut her with her tounges. She cut with the silver. The thin strip, placed to her wrist. Solace. "Just once more" she says before sheby xXBipolarXx 2 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 16 11:58 AM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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I promise you with each beat of my heartby PureRomance 18 lines, 74 comments, on Jun 10 7:37 PM 2008. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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May I ask why???
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You lied! You said you would never host a contest! lol
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omg! why you leaving!? your such a great writer!
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Did I mention ---->
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I will miss you so much baaabbbbyyy! lol...I do thank you for all your support and all the laughter and tears. Even though you are leaving...I will keep you and yours in my heart and prayers always.
Bye Rob...
Love~
Sue -
I am very sad and I wish there was something I could say to change your mind

It will not be the same without you...
You are very special and I wish that whatever the reason, you would reconsider...So many will miss your support and friendship
Biggest hugs

Lynda
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I cannot enter this contest
because I don't want your points, I just want you to stay, please!!!!
If you stay, I will enter any contest you host , I promise!
Lynda
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aw man, say it aint so
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I do say Rob,this is a sad day and you will be missed.You bring sunshine to our days.
Des
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And I thought the day couldn't get worse. My friend. I am lost for words because there are none. You will be sorely missed from my reading list and from my heart.
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Best wishes to you Robert
Your words have been an inspiration to us all
as is you humor
Never say never..
Take care
Julie
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you're leaving?
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rob....what in the world is going on??
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You're leaving, Unk?
I will miss you, but we'll keep in touch, I hope
I will be back to write for you 
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I am so vey sorry to not be able to get to know you better dear Poppa .. all of my best and special wishes to you
s
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Well, this was a very sad thing to find out..

I will sure miss our chats 'gemini twin'...they meant more than you can know....
I wish you the very best in whatever path you are now on, or are planning to take. I hope you will check back in on us once in awhile.
Will miss you Rob!

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Come now Poppa
Take a deep breath and consider all of what you have read in the last several days. Maybe a short leave, not a departure, not leaving us all to be alone without you.
I hope you will not let this have the ring of a clangless bell, maybe the clatter of a little discord, but not the empty space you will create by leaving us.
All of this is our selfishness trying to find a way to persuade you to re-consider. Less you are unaware, a whole big bunch of us count on you day in and day out!
Whatever you decide, you will remain in spirit and you will not be forgotten nor will your absence fade!
Your friend and admirer!
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Goddamn ... do you think there are enough entries!


Hope you enjoy them all hun!
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so, does 97 entries convince you we want you to stay?

please?
huh huh?
Or maybe I'll just keep you here by going and entering every single one of my writes your writing inspired in me
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That's good for a few days at least.
Question? How the hell are you gonna judge all these entries?
Huh?
I'd do it for you, but it's gonna cost
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Wow, thank you so much for the gold
I am sorry to see you go hunni, but I wish you well in everything you do, and don't stop writing! Take care hun, and thanks again
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Thankyou for the bronze award.
Just Me
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I originally wanted fresh writes for the contest, but didnt realise I had left prewrites open, by the time I realised there were already 20 entries
You wanted fresh writes so a prewrite won Gold and Silver? Hypocrite
KIDDING
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Thank you for the honor of Silver...you really shall be missed...congrat's to all...
mystic
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