Simple for a change:
Enter that poem you feel you could have done a little more with, that poem with that stubborn line, that you needed but didn't quite gel. In author's notes give line and verse number.
That's it.
Enter that poem you feel you could have done a little more with, that poem with that stubborn line, that you needed but didn't quite gel. In author's notes give line and verse number.
That's it.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 26, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: A veritable panoply of talent hoped you got what you needed,
Hugs The True Asp
Contest Winners
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crying a river levy walls breaking
searching for the exact dayby nevadapoet 80 lines, 30 comments, on Oct 17 7:12 PM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Pain, Contest, My own style, Lost in thought, Sadness, Depressed
Gold trophy winner
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It stood tall like a dead tree,
ancient axes buried in its faces...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
The earliest flute known to man
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This marks the end of toys
The puppets are almost out of cotton• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
MonkeyMind wakes in the morning• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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just what i'm feeling, i'm not gonna tell you who.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [7]
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Anyone who was willing to be critiqued
is a brave soul. I hope I was able to help all of you.
It was very hard to make a judgment, but I read each out loud and tried to place them in the order of my ability to reread them. I would say there were no bad ones, and the first four listed gave me great pleasure, the fifth made me LMAO, and the 6th made me work. The seventh was almost a copy of someone else's work, but it could become the port's own with work.
thank you all for entering, it was pleasure seeing the brave and hardworking talent in this field.
Hugs, Ann the True Asp -
Thank you for the bronze; I guess I may try to expand this into a longer poem sometime -- will let you know if I do. Thanks again.
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