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ONE NIGHT ONLY

THIS IS YOUR LAST NIGHT ON EARTH.
WHO OR WHAT WOULD YOU LIKE TO DO WITH IT?




EASY ENOUGH ?

THEN GET GOING.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on October 11, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 30, Bronze: 10
  • Final notes:
    Sorry I did not comment on any of the entries.
    Though I found them to be adequate I did not find anything differently unique,no one item really shone above the rest as all related to selfish acts about dying.
    Not one really took it out of the box.
    This is not to say that these poetic offerings are bad, Just perhaps that my own expectations where possibly aimed too high.
    I will know better next time.
    Thanks anyway for all your entries.

Contest Winners

  1. Only One More Day
    by bananasfoster42 25 lines, 9 comments, on Oct 9 9:13 PM 2008. In Personal
    Gold trophy winner
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  2. so
    I'd slap anyone who got in my face
    that guy behind me bitching--tell him his place
    by Unforgotten 13 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 9 4:43 PM 2008
    Silver trophy winner
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  3. Final Goodbyes, A Tragic End
    It's my last night,
    My chance to say a final goodbye,
    by xXtired-of-cryingXx 70 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 9 10:06 PM 2008. In Dark, Emo, Life, Personal, Sad, Pain, Love, Lost Love
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  4. Doomsday
    If the end of Earth is to come tonight,
    Let it come.
    by Syrenn 22 lines, on Oct 10 8:58 PM 2008. In Love, Angst, Sad, Personal, Thoughts
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • Biancaa
    October 9, 2008
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    The Clock Is Ticking

    Hey mom,
    this may be hard to read.
    However, I have to leave now as you can see.
    I am going to visit dad.
    He said he would take me to that one place you two used to take us to, you know the one with the birds and the seashells. =]
    He knew I loved the beach.
    He is also taking me on a hot-air balloon ride,
    for he doesnt know I am afraid of heights.
    I want to spend the last of my hours in his presence.
    Because I dont see him as often as I like.
    So thanks for all you did mom, but daddy doesnt know I have to leave forever.
    So when he finds out, can you tell him something for me?
    Can you tell him that I love him, and the clock is ticking so i must leave.


  • ShannonLea
    October 11, 2008
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    I didn't have time to write before the contest ended, but maybe you'd be interested.

    This one and only night with you
    Holds not time enough to do
    All the things I’ve dreamt, and you’ve dreamt too.

    Each second ticking breaks my heart
    Knowing that soon we’ll be apart,
    And each second ticking brings us to the start
    Of the end, so goodbye my sweetheart.

    And all the time that we’ve spent dreaming
    Of the future together that we were weaving
    Gave me a hope for life that was deceiving,
    So I’ve begun to stop believing.

    I can only dream of escaping the end
    And sadly love isn’t strong enough to mend
    This doom, impossible to fully comprehend.

    Only one hope still exists to me,
    That our souls will combine and be set free
    And leave behind all that is dying and earthly
    To float through the stars and forget man-kinds folly.

    But such thoughts never come true,
    And when the worlds gone, all good will be too
    Because never again will I share love with you.

    The worlds is falling apart
    So good luck my sweetheart.