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".....Said"

Hello Everyone, I thought it was time I held another contest. I have been reading a book and in one of the short stories it refers often to 'sister said' and I thought it sounded a cool idea for a contest.

For this contest I would like poems about experiences, or thoughts, about situations where "he, she, grandma, mum, dad, sister, brother, teacher, etc etc said..."

Your poem must start, finish or include the phrase of your choice... "..(fill-in blank here).....said". eg "Mother said my hair will curl if I ate my crust"
"Sister said I was too little to go" etc
Get the idea?
Maybe you have some wise words of wisdom handed down by older relatives or friends that people quote often.
Use of poetic devices a must eg imagery, rhyme or free verse.

After a lot of bad luck within the family recently I need to focus on something else so am running this contest.

Pic above is just for show as it was cute, and isn't meant as part of contest but if it inspires you, well and good as long as it is within set guidelines above...

Now get writing and have fun.

Rules

1. No swearing or adult theme allowed
2. No prewrites allowed
3. No sticky caps etc
4. 40 lines or less
5. Spellcheck please
6. Have Fun

I reserve the right to remove unsuitable entries or those not fitting this theme. So please message me if you do not understand what is asked for here so I don't have to remove entry.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on October 19, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 6 people
  • Final notes:
    Thanks for the great entries everyone, although I was hoping for more, but it was a difficult decision on some placings, but the winners are the ones that appealed to me the most. However, I decided to increase the amount of HMs. Keep on writing and I hope to have another contest soon. Nellies Room was a delight to read and I think we can all relate to this, but all entries were well thought out and very well expressed. Thanks for entering.

Contest Winners

  1. When she didn't know where something was
    in response to my boyhood queries,
    by Bad Bill 23 lines, 12 comments, on Oct 6 3:59 AM 2008. In Personal, whimsical
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. by Periwinkle Blue 30 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 6 10:47 AM 2008. In Personal, Nature, Thoughts
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. He said,
    it is what it is
    by fortyninereasons 40 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 6 7:22 PM 2008. In Contest, Thoughts
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. My Mother always said "These things are sent to try us"
    When I was so much younger I did not understand
    by YoursTrulyJulie 17 lines, 24 comments, on Oct 6 2:49 AM 2008. In Life, Personal, Thoughts, Contest
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4657291, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  6. by SoldierOfTheCross 19 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 6 6:28 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. With the slip of my tongue
    I said, "You bastard!" out loud,
    by Poetess12 39 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 16 12:21 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. She said, "James, you will get over me in time"
    After he had been sentenced for his crime.
    by Wandering Woodchuck 24 lines, 18 comments, on Oct 6 6:10 AM 2008. In Dark, Death, Society, Crime
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  9. by Meroza 5 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 6 11:35 AM 2008. In Contest, Humor
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    October 6, 2008
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    LMAO at contest image, that's not you and John having a debate now is it?? will bookmark and see what I can come up with for you.


  • Melodies
    October 6, 2008
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    This is really fun! I'll see what I can dream up. lol It is bedtime here in Calif. USA.

    My mummy said to go to bed
    but I'll stay up and write, instead. lol


  • DolphinLass silver member
    October 19, 2008
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    Congrats all and thanks for entering


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    October 19, 2008
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    Thank You

    thank you so much for the Bronze, great contest prompt. Very enjoyable to write for. Congrats to all that entered.


  • Periwinkle Blue
    October 23, 2008
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    Dancing with my silver trophy and thanking you VERY MUCH! Happy to congratulate everyone for coming to this very smart contest.

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