Contest [Thin.As.Air] by Dead Star--x at All poetry

Contest is Over

Contest was judged on October 21, 2008
Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 1 people
Final notes:
Sorry it took so long to judge, volleyball has thrown me into panic lately and with school drama ect. I had forgotten the contest had ended.

Thanks to all who entered♥
Congrats to the winners

xoxo

Dead Star--x

Contest Winners

The Window Laughed and Music Played

The shine of the window laughed, and
I became a model of madness as music played.

by PerfectTonight 20 lines, 33 comments, on Oct 18 4:40 AM 2008. In Life, Pain, Personal, Thoughts, Depression, Eating Disorder
Gold trophy winner

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Obsessive Distortion

A pretty girl,
wrapped in razor bones

by Bean Sidhe 44 lines, 9 comments, on Oct 5 6:49 PM 2008. In Contest, Word Bank
Silver trophy winner

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gorgeous yet[?]

Pretty doll eyes shine so bright
Your model statues all because you didn’t eat tonight,

by erbby 23 lines, 9 comments, on Oct 7 12:22 PM 2008. In noguest
Bronze trophy winner

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being not me and honest

by lowercase prelude 31 lines, 20 comments, on Oct 6 8:14 PM 2008. In Contest, Society, Life, Teen issues
Honorable mention

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__Skeleton Carnival

Teen Phantom, barely even there
Crawls on webs of lies

by Shesatragedy--x 24 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 9 8:03 PM 2008

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Emergency

running several miles
to take off the extra pounds

by Disturbedmess 34 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 10 10:27 PM 2008. In Contest, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad

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Entries [11]

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Notes Upon Ribs

I stand out,
like a misplaced note

by CandyCoatedRaZors 14 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 5 4:38 PM 2008. In Contest, Eating Disorder, Dark, Love

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♥With-Beauty&Pain♥

My skin is so -flawed-
but everyone knows

by Disturbedmess 28 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 9 3:43 PM 2008

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Perfect Image

by Phoenix Karkadann 24 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 5 9:27 PM 2008

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Don't tell me what to do [option 1]

Love my curves
the accentuated spheres

by Nymph 37 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 7 4:22 PM 2008. In Pain

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Snow-White's Film

Mirror Mirror on the wall
Who is the fairest of them all?

by Sle3p 43 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 18 2:31 PM 2008. In Other, Pain, Freewrite, Message, Sadness, Contest, Life, Thoughts

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luna-midnight
October 5, 2008
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pro ana? anti ana?
- just weak hands
  October 5, 2008
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  if your for anorexia or against it.
- - luna-midnight
    October 5, 2008
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    oh.lol. thanks
    though i dont see how you can be for it, i can see how you end up in it, but nt for it, cause well...its harmful and so dangerous 0.o
    *hides*
  - - just weak hands
      October 5, 2008
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      yeah i know lol but y'know there are people out there :/
    - - luna-midnight
        October 5, 2008
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        thats very sad..i mean ive got caught up in all that eating issues
        but i cant believe some support it *sigh*
      - just weak hands
        October 5, 2008
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        so have i. but not major, sometimes just a skip of the meal and a lot of water. :/ whoever actually would support it... >.>
        
        luna-midnight
        October 5, 2008
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        i know that is kinda sick to support it..its like supporting suicide... :/
        
        *hugs*
        
        just weak hands
        October 5, 2008
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        yes ! that's exactly what it's like ! one of the main causes of teenage deaths...
        
        if you enter, good luck :]
        
        luna-midnight
        October 5, 2008
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        yes, its a pitty, gosh i felt i gained 30pounds looking at those pics. for this contest 0.o
        
        aw thanks, and the same to you
        
        Dead Star--x
        October 5, 2008
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        i know but there are a lot of girls who support ana
        i mean google it-
        pro-ana websites are easy to find, sadly
        
        luna-midnight
        October 6, 2008
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        i dont think i want to look something like that up, its like opening a can of worms.
        
        Dead Star--x
        October 6, 2008
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        Im just stating, it is out there.. you didnt understand
        why or how, but its out there, normally people who suffer from anorexia are pro-ana---for obvious reasons
        and those who dont normally are anti-ana
Butterfly.Wingz
October 5, 2008
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will enter
Bruised.Roses
October 5, 2008
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will enter
amaranthine lover
October 6, 2008
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actually, I have been bulimic and kinda starving myself at the same time in the past.
PerfectTonight
October 18, 2008
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As far as the words...as long as we use 15, is it ok if we use different tenses, etc of them???
PerfectTonight
October 22, 2008
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OMG! I cannot believe I won Gold....!

I mean, I put so much into this piece, and I have a lot of personal references...I just and so happy!

THANK YOU! I had WONDERFUL competition!