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PICTURE IS NOT PROMPT!

 

Ok after being hounded you know who you are! I have given in and decided to run a contest and of course roped in kiwigirljacks to help, we all know how well she scares

 

The idea of this contest is a very simple one. We, the judges, are the bar keeps and you, the poets, are our customers. Now everything you tell us here will remain within this contest....so time to reveal all the evil, and macabre deeds you've done. Tales of murder, assassination, or even contract killings is what we are looking for. Deep dark bloodshed, backstabbing, buried alive...you get the idea...

 

Nothing else!

 

They must be in poetic form, not story or prose.

 

 

 

Rules, yes, even murderers have rules!

 

~ Poetic tales of murder only

~ Play nice

~ No line limit, but don't be silly!

~ Any pictures you may use are to be fully credited

~ Reserve welcome, but return before contest closes.

 

Thats it!

 

Enjoy! And lets see if we can get Kiwi's hair to curl

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on October 22, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 400, Bronze: 300, Honorable mention: 4 people
  • Final notes:
    Well Jacks doesn't need a perm any time soon..lol. All were excellent write, we enjoyed the gritty imagery you brought forth! Congrats to the winners, I just wish we could have given all trophies as you each deserved one.
    Sorry for the long delay in juding!
    Till next time, stay safe!
    Pink & Jacks

Contest Winners

  1. by Black Narcissus 35 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 5 2:23 AM 2008. In Dark, Fantasy, Thoughts
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. by Fritz O skennick 47 lines, 26 comments, on Oct 9 7:28 PM 2008. In Contest, Adult, Dark, Weird, Pain, Death
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Mercury in the vial to rise
    To the clinking of his Sais
    by andywontdie 39 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 9 10:31 AM 2008. In Contest, Dark, Fantasy, Other, Thoughts
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. by Disturbed Prodigy 104 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 4 7:18 PM 2008. In Adult, Dark, My own style, Freewrite, Other
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4653329, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  6. The end of the bar I sit
    Dark glasses, hat lowered and a cigerette hanging loose from my lip
    by blackrosesteph 59 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 4 12:49 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. Behold, the pale moonlight
    As it flickers across my face
    by Zarokk666 140 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 15 8:15 PM 2008. In Dark
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 4, 2008
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    YEAH!!!!!!! IT'S ABOUT DARN TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Acidanthra
    October 4, 2008
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    Ahh, you know I am in... LOL


  • Xianaria gold member
    October 4, 2008
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    i kill off too many people in my writes kids are getting worried...


    • LadyDementia gold member
      October 4, 2008
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      So long as you don't run out of places to dump the bodies its fine


      • Xianaria gold member
        October 4, 2008
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        i live in the hills of WV ~ plenty of places


        • LadyDementia gold member
          October 4, 2008
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          Lucky thing! I'm left with desolving and drains

          • Xianaria gold member
            October 4, 2008
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            well, that's fine, too...but ya gotta grind the bones into small shards or dust ~ skull & pelvic bones are hardest to minimalize ~ and ya gotta be careful, CSIs can find the smallest traces of blood & DNA...oh, and wear latex gloves!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 4, 2008
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    Oh a great contest

  • Acidanthra
    October 4, 2008
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    I can't believe us killers have rules!! LMAO!


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 4, 2008
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    but, but .. I write in story form...

    rats. okay guess I must bow out on this one


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 4, 2008
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    Me thinks my hair will be curling alight!!


  • notorious
    October 4, 2008
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    I'm not evil anymore.


    I will bookmark this contest though.
    !


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 4, 2008
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    okay here you all go, the quiet rogue Riftkin has return...

    http://allpoetry.com/poem/4654115


  • notorious
    October 15, 2008
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    Damn, just one more day left.


    • LadyDementia gold member
      October 15, 2008
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      Yep, you best get killin'


      • notorious
        October 15, 2008
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        HAHA!
        But but...if I post another poem, nobody will read the one I just posted.


        • LadyDementia gold member
          October 15, 2008
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          Eh? Why? Do they go veiw one skip one?

          • notorious
            October 15, 2008
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            Well, not all the time,
            but I try to prevent that from happening
            by not writing too many poems.

            You usually read 2 of mine in a row once in a while though.

            • LadyDementia gold member
              October 15, 2008
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              Hehe I get there, or try to..all the damn judging I do..was up till 3am this morning doing it!
              I know some write so many I have no chance of keeping up

              • notorious
                October 15, 2008
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                Wow, LoL.

                If I get lazy
                or all the entries suck,
                I just delay the contest.

                I don't write that much, do I!!

                • LadyDementia gold member
                  October 15, 2008
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                  I put mine off If needed But the others aren't mine to delay, and most run on a tight time table Keeps me outta trouble Then of course I help jacks with almost all hers

                  Nah you don't write as much as some I know, I'm just lame at keeping up

                  • notorious
                    October 15, 2008
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                    All the pretty pic contests ^^



                    I only try to read every poem for certain people, and maybe two for others.


                    • LadyDementia gold member
                      October 15, 2008
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                      Me to, and if they don't RTF I don't read anymore, not got the time or inclination

                      • notorious
                        October 15, 2008
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                        I never click the "Return the Favor" button--when people click it for me, it leads to some poem I wrote a week ago that SUCKS ASS!!!

                        But...in terms of returning the favor, some poets don't do it, but they're so good I don't care. I mean, I read poems for enjoyment, right? (Sometimes I have to cringe during a poem by a favorite...shhhh )

                        Poets who suck...well, they should bloody return the favor!

                        • LadyDementia gold member
                          October 15, 2008
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                          LMAO Nah I don't use the RTF usually either, I go to their page and read the latest. Or they link me when they post

                          • notorious
                            October 15, 2008
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                            People send you links of their poems?


                            I never do that, unless it's a dedication poem...or I'm bothering Jacks.

                            Hmm, maybe I should do that to you.

                            See if I get e-slapped!

                            • LadyDementia gold member
                              October 15, 2008
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                              A couple do....like I say I can be lame keeping up and they keep up with me So tis all good I only link tags or BG's I've made, then only to the person they're for.

                              • notorious
                                October 15, 2008
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                                god, I don't think I'll have time to enter this.

                                Have another one similar.

                                Makes me feel like a comment whore to send out links puahahaha

                                • LadyDementia gold member
                                  October 15, 2008
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                                  Not enter Will miss your entry

                                  Hehe, me to, plus I forget so don't do it now..unless its like I said.

                                  Well off to town, the joys of kids hey, why do they need to eat anyway!? Laters

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