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If You Are A Child Of Today Tell Me What You Feel

any style poetry
just write from the heart dont worry about the form
I will read it how ever you wish to write it and will comment on each one
If you have something inside you that you feel you need to let out then join us Im here and will give you the best comment I can to help you out you never know we just might become friends and wouldnt that be great

no line limit just talk to me and get that weight off of your chest give it all to me today and see how much better you will feel

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on October 14, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 75, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    gold Our World
    silver In My Heart
    bronze You'll Never Know

Contest Winners

  1. Our World
    Hiding behind the shadows of others
    But these "role models" won't do
    by Painted Nails 13 lines, 17 comments, on Oct 10 3:56 PM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Society
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. You'll Never Know
    You'll never know
    how much it hurts her
    by Ira 45 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 30 8:54 PM 2008. In Personal, Pain, Sad, Love, Life
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. hidden behind lies.
    her guilt consumes her,
    as she tells them she is fine,
    by xbeautifulxdisasterx 12 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 30 6:17 PM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Depression, Teen issues, Guilt.
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Untold
    Who am I?
    I’m not even sure,
    by AnAverageGirl 12 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 30 5:33 PM 2008. In Angst, Sad, Contest, Life, Thoughts, Personal
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Pressures of a child
    The Burden that comes,
    With the children of today,
    by Karlie67 51 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 30 5:32 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4644287, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  7. Breathe OUT.
    Sometimes I wanna scream
    at the sheer complacency
    by jessifer1792 41 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 11 11:04 PM 2008. In Life, Thoughts, Other, Society
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. The World
    The World
    is bad and always sad
    by nikkidevil91 7 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 2 1:01 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  9. That's all they can see
    Lonely in a world that’s full of scratching noises
    I’ve looked everywhere for options and choices
    by Hikari Lady 35 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 1 4:40 AM 2008. In Life, Sad, Pain, Loneliness, Personal, Thoughts, other
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  10. Loneliness On The Death Walk
    Loneliness On The Death Walk
    by Yunalonei 20 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 2 6:20 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    October 14, 2008
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    To all in the contest

    If you find yourself feeling lost or afraid and need someone to talk to just message me I will answer all messages with love and compassion .And I want to thank everyone for entering in my contest and wish I could give everyone a gold for in my reading of each I think they were all gold winners for sure