I want a poem about the apocalyptic things that you see going on in the world right now
This is my first contest if it goes well there will be more
I am the simon of all poetry, if you enter in this contest be aware that you just gave me the right to VERY HARSHLY critic your poem on EVERY ASPECT including title, color composition, and content. This doesn't mean I will, just don't get defensive when I do.
This is my first contest if it goes well there will be more
I am the simon of all poetry, if you enter in this contest be aware that you just gave me the right to VERY HARSHLY critic your poem on EVERY ASPECT including title, color composition, and content. This doesn't mean I will, just don't get defensive when I do.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 28, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 321, Silver: 73, Bronze: 42
- Final notes: There were A LOT of really good entries in this contest, I enjoyed reading most of them.
some poems were amazingly well written, but just not quite what I was looking for on the subject
Contest Winners
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Destruction takes its hold
Forgetting what's right and what's wrongby VerminVomit 6 lines, 6 comments, on May 6 8:33 PM 2008. In apocalypse, this, is, the, end, murderous, melody
Gold trophy winner
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Golden streetlights hit the black, pulsating night in small short circles,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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DEATH OF A BROKEN PLANETby robert davidson 46 lines, 47 comments, on Sep 13 8:43 PM 2008. In Contemporary, Life, environment, Nature
Bronze trophy winner
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• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Did you see the red of fire, the flames atop the trees
The lust within all mans desires that keeps him on his kneesby Sugoi Panda 21 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 25 9:12 PM 2008. In Panda• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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No trees to make a forest,
no rainfall that is pure.by Sunshine Always 28 lines, 10 comments, on Sep 25 4:45 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
To walk along a lake of blood, beneath the skies lit ablaze. By the fire found in those who let hate guide their way. They go to sleep withby Dark passenger 11 lines, 16 comments, on Jun 10 6:55 PM 2008. In APOCALYPSE, Dark, Pain, Spiritual, Death, Emo, Hate, War• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Shall the strong control the earth?
Shall we learn from our mistakes?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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thanks for the gold

