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puzzle pieces from the clay



I am thinking it's a sign that the freckles
In our eyes are mirror images and when
We kiss they're perfectly aligned
And I have to speculate that God himself
Did make us into corresponding shapes like
Puzzle pieces from the clay


-"Such Great Heights", Postal Service






love poems
free verse
no epics

no mushy mush
no break ups
sensual is ok

do not have to be inspired by ^
do not have to be personal

stay out of the box
or at least close to the edges
it doesn't need to 'click together'
most of the time love doesn't make
much sense anyways


-cassidy

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on October 18, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    i've never had such a difficult contest to judge.
    i think ALL of the five finalists are among my top 10 favorite poets on this site.

    unfortunately i couldn't give them all gold.
    i eventually decided which would be 1st because, although the gold winner's is a bit rough, the overall ideas and presentation were better.


    THANK YOU.
    i'll probably make a new contest soon, hope to see all of you there
    -cassidy

Contest Winners

  1. by Aesthete 110 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 25 3:13 AM 2008
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4640157, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4631051, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  4. by Envelope 42 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 1 3:23 AM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • iverbthenoun
    September 25, 2008
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    that's a cute picture

    • unraveled
      September 26, 2008
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      it's meeee if you didnt guess that already... but i look a little bit younger there


      • Danny Beatty gold member
        September 26, 2008
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        so how'd yer pic taker get that cool coloring in the pic? ... that's not a mushy mush kiss, that's an actual kiss ... **) ... seriously, was it the color in the room, or a setting on the camera or what ...

        cool pic

        • unraveled
          September 26, 2008
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          hmm i'm not really sure what happened to the coloring my camera has mood swings >.<

          haha thanks though


      • iverbthenoun
        September 27, 2008
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        lol... you always look younger... since YOU ARE younger and i noticed...

  • Danny Beatty gold member
    September 25, 2008
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    no mushymush ... and and sensual okay?¡¡¡¡ fer cryin out loud ... i only write mushymush and i never write anything even remotely sensual or anything like that ... ... i am a not nawti person ... oO

    but I shall try to not use any words about parts and stuff , ya know?

    ;)

    • unraveled
      September 26, 2008
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      lol
      mushymush is for people who don't see the real side of things
      not like you


  • Envelope
    September 25, 2008
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    I'm with my pal moqui, mushy mush all the way, what kind of contest is this anyway!!

    oh wait, a good one...duh, I'll make sure to pen you a damn good headache girl

    • Danny Beatty gold member
      September 26, 2008
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      yep this is out of control ... why just the other day my lover was walking by when I was going out of the shower and she said ... what are you doin' jest hangin' around .... tellin' ya ... there's no end to the lack of mushymushy lovers ... none whatsoever ... ya know? hey! you did a rhyme in public up there in yer comment

      • Envelope
        September 27, 2008
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        HEy, don't be pointing that crap out in public, if people realized I knew how to rhyme i'd get a million messages such as

        "envelope you herculean devil, of un-matched providence, however may we get our hair as silky smooth as yours??"

        No replying to that

        I get it...hanging around, No pun

        • Danny Beatty gold member
          September 27, 2008
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          lol



          envelope, the, full of hope
          he is the one
          who will have fun
          to try and out write
          what moquispeare's spun


          • Envelope
            September 29, 2008
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            you've already crushed me with your spindling, damn you, damn you now!

            • Danny Beatty gold member
              September 29, 2008
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              i thinketh not, thy knots are less frayed than mine,
              though of greater harshness and less gentle refrain,
              for I find thy imagination tis worthy of immulation

              a word i can spell no more than I can upon thy poem dwindle
              with any confidence of my having crushed thy spindle!!!

              LOL


  • Never Fall in Love
    September 25, 2008
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    love?
    ewww


  • divebar
    September 25, 2008
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    bookmarked


  • Age of Rain
    September 25, 2008
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    love?

    ewwww

    ...


    Okay!


  • Xombii
    September 26, 2008
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    I just wrote a poem that would have worked beautifully with this >.<
    I'll see what I can come up with.

  • Danny Beatty gold member
    October 18, 2008
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    ty for honoring me with the bronze

    whaddyamean ya couldn't giveus all a gold



    why heck, jes the othur day I fergawt to feed the cat an it anit .. ... ate my sisturhs chiwawa doggi ...

    anyhow, you rok!!!

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