You need to make me FEEL.
As many lines as you want, (but you have to keep my interest...)
There is no limit on number of people who enter, so no need to reserve a space really.
You can include ANYTHING.
Sex, cutting, midnight, murder, flowers.... ANYTHING.
If you use Dirty Pretty, I'm new to it, please make sure I know what you are talking about...
I will comment, and I'm renowned by my honesty....be prepared. I'll tell you what I think.
(Artistic license aside.., Please try to use grammar and spell check!)
You have to use one of these titles. (You do not have to use the picture...but if you do..., credit it to me! It's MINE!)
1, Secret Desire.
2, Honesty.
3, Rushing.
4, On Target.
5, Family Portrait.
6, Outside My Window.
7, Dirty Laundry.
8, Just For A Coffee.
9, Do You Want Some?
10, Still Water.
11, Photograph.
12, Back To You.
13, Understand.
14, Yes, I Do.
15, Blue.
As many lines as you want, (but you have to keep my interest...)
There is no limit on number of people who enter, so no need to reserve a space really.
You can include ANYTHING.
Sex, cutting, midnight, murder, flowers.... ANYTHING.
If you use Dirty Pretty, I'm new to it, please make sure I know what you are talking about...
I will comment, and I'm renowned by my honesty....be prepared. I'll tell you what I think.
(Artistic license aside.., Please try to use grammar and spell check!)
You have to use one of these titles. (You do not have to use the picture...but if you do..., credit it to me! It's MINE!)
1, Secret Desire.
2, Honesty.
3, Rushing.
4, On Target.
5, Family Portrait.
6, Outside My Window.
7, Dirty Laundry.
8, Just For A Coffee.
9, Do You Want Some?
10, Still Water.
11, Photograph.
12, Back To You.
13, Understand.
14, Yes, I Do.
15, Blue.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 30, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 4 people
- Final notes: Well, the top three, In my opinion deserve it.
(You have NO idea how hard this was!)
The HM crew, they are in no specific order...
Some entries were amazing poems, but could not qualify, because they did not adhere to the rules. I was kicking myself here. Some were SO good!
If I'd had the points, every entrant would have got some.
This was an amazing amount of talent people.
Thank you for entering!
Another will go up soon.
Well done to the finalists, and good luck for next time!
Love to you...
Contest Winners
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Looking from the outside in
Silently watching myself dieby Peachy 23 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 29 10:42 AM 2008. In Contemporary, Weird, Life
Gold trophy winner
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The girl in the photograph
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Its hard when your so far away,
To keep the ties intact,by Econerd 24 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 17 8:56 AM 2008. In contest, friendship, the past
Bronze trophy winner
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A still frame
of this moment,• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
by Recluse Writer 55 lines, 24 comments, on Dec 22 11:22 PM 2006. In Personal, Sad
Honorable mention
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It's plain to see the wind benieth the trees. Your addicted to the drug of lust• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Looking at my family portrait
What do I see?• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Silver trophy winner
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every night i lay in bed thinking
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My heart echoes’ with grief for there are no more words of comfort; it is all a shallow hole, a thick cloud, that’s never been touched by tby Rele anmwe 9 lines, 55 comments, on Jun 22 7:02 AM 2006. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Thoughts race like bullets in this mess-• Commented on by judge. -
presently unaware if i can make you feel wut i feel
just know how i feel is nothing less than realby ceno da ghost 17 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 16 10:27 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
I feel like a broken record.
I keep on saying over and over again• Commented on by judge. -
What marks of rigid lust have left her for dead.
Her fate set in her own unbecoming hands.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Crimson tears lingered the last time
A seedless flower of evil blooms with itby Death Reaper ver. 6 25 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 24 10:08 PM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Dark, Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
To climb in to bed,
with you is my desire,• Commented on by judge. -
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i open my eyes and its hard to pretend that i'm not
thinking of you. when it all comes down to its always been you.by Vampirette1901 27 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 22 11:10 AM 2008. In Hope, Dark, Pain, Thoughts, Teenage thinking, Happiness, Personal.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
No one sits with him, he doesn't fit in
But we feel like we do when we make fun of him• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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If I felt better ...
I might try this one. It's funny though. Your title choices remind me of a poster my niece has on her wall of Chad Michael Murray. His tee shirt says "Yes, I do, but not with you."
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Can we enter more than once?
I'm feeling quite inspired, for the first time in ages
Thanks for the inspiration by the way
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Yeah you can!!!!
Many times as you like... Sorry about the late reply.... -
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Yay! Thanks!
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