I am having a hard time believing in love,
or that I have ever really, really been loved.
I have always loved this song, it has always touched me.
It is in a sense my ideal of what true love is,
how to treat her, the kind of connection needed.
I have been told more times then I care to count
how in love this or that man is, the true test of time,
understanding, and where I am at in my life has just
proved to me this kind of love I am looking for has not
been placed at me feet.
So I want to know, have you ever really loved a woman.
If so how? make me feel it, make me believe in love again.
I was beginning too and was brought back to the same place I was before.
Help me believe, show me your emotions.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3pJoMeEg8cM&feature=related
No rule, just write and emotion.
or that I have ever really, really been loved.
I have always loved this song, it has always touched me.
It is in a sense my ideal of what true love is,
how to treat her, the kind of connection needed.
I have been told more times then I care to count
how in love this or that man is, the true test of time,
understanding, and where I am at in my life has just
proved to me this kind of love I am looking for has not
been placed at me feet.
So I want to know, have you ever really loved a woman.
If so how? make me feel it, make me believe in love again.
I was beginning too and was brought back to the same place I was before.
Help me believe, show me your emotions.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3pJoMeEg8cM&feature=related
No rule, just write and emotion.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 1, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 1000, Silver: 500, Bronze: 250, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: Thank you all for the entrys.
It was hard for I got so many different thoughts, ideas, and kinds of love.
I do not believe it really helped me, but it was good to read and see that love is out there, good and bad.
Hope to see you all again in another contest.
Many blessings.
Contest Winners
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I have known what it is to love
It is pleasure and pain combined,• Commented on by judge. [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4594167, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
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Like the song which springs from the white doves wings,
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Once, upon a million stars
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Your deep blue eyes,
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The weather is displaying my inner torments…
The sky is arguing with dark clouds- why they are making the sun to cry so often.by aldebaran 21 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 3 1:57 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
No matter what I do or say I know, “ I love you too,” you just won’t say. For 6 years long we’ve been together, side-by-side we stood toge• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Sometimes when I think about her,
I wonder if she knows.by Greson De Winter 56 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 12 11:40 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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deep graphic... good luck with this contest
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I LOVE that song!
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Oh, forget about love...
If you look for love it's hard to come by. Love just happens when you least expect it. So yeah... And men love women who take over where their mothers left off doing things for them. Mother Nature's best whammy on the human race.
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I never look for it, it always comes to me. But in the end it is never what it seems. I am the perfect house wife, I am the perfect mother, but men are selfish and jealous creatures and it will take a speical one, not just I love you. Show me, Prove to me, Then maybe my heart will fall after my head and mind are at ease.
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Hi, i just want to justify why i posted this poem...
When i am down and feel alone, I think of the best and worst moments I have spent with my "Pink J". Then, there's some kind of mixing of emotions operating inside, which drives me nuts! I mean, you can self-motivate yourself, if you really want to be happy, so move if you don't want to suffer for nothing! -
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lol I do move, trust me all the time. My life is made up of me moving around others, and I am ready for someone to move around me. Thank you for the message, it means a lot to me. I totally understand what it is you say about mixed emotions and things driving you nuts. It does me too. My happiness comes in many forms, I love my friends....my family, but the love factor, real love factor is what is driving me crazy. I think to find that form only to be caged, only to be tried, and controlled. I am fighting back, and hard and the men in my world do not like it and treat me very unfairly for it. Thanks again.
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You truly are the tree.
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I am not just the tree, I am the river, the sky, the earth, the sun, the plants and the wind that whipers in your ear. A woman of nature, that begs to have her belly filled, yet fights to keep her freedom and life of her own. Need of love, but not need of mans control. It does not matter the love expressed, in the end all that is wanted is the jar with the butterfly to rest of the shelf of a mans heart, and I will never be that woman. So I fight for the true meaning of love within my world and need. The freedom to just be me.
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Once I had a bad chainsaw cut in my arm. I was able to drive to the doctor, and my wife met me there. I fainted on the table, and woke to her singing, "When you find yourself lying helpless in her arms..."
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