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Enlightenment

thoughts in conflict
do not travel far
frictionless,
light moves fastest

pen me 6 beautiful lines

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on September 13, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    when you are happy you are not aware of happiness, enlightenment is a state, you are not aware. This is so subtly told in this poem, so deep and enlivening..congrats to Gold trophy winner

    I took very long time going too and fro for choosing gold with this marvellous poem. The poet wants to learn, that in itself enlightened state..If there are twoo golds this definitely deserve..Congrats Silver winner

    Bronze winner penned some beautiful thoughts

    All entries are so deep. All deserved to be placed on first..congrats to all contestants, wish you all the best

    Venugopal

Contest Winners

  1. Returning Home
    by maa 18 lines, 22 comments, on Sep 12 8:12 AM 2008. In Spiritual
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Maya
    There is the illusion that time
    is a separate chain of events
    by kareneisenlord 20 lines, 10 comments, on Sep 12 7:10 AM 2008. In Contemporary, Contest, Life, Spiritual, Thoughts, Philosophy
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Beloved Thought
    Oh, Beloved Thought !
    by jean-marc 14 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 12 9:03 AM 2008. In Spiritual
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • FallingSideways silver member
    September 12, 2008
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    bookmarked


  • jimmy20johns gold member
    September 12, 2008
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    Hi. My entry "Enlightenment" (the last poem entered) seems to have lost its link. Any chance it can be restored? i.e. re-entered? Cheers, jimmy
    P.S. It's still on my page


  • maa gold member
    September 13, 2008
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    dear venu,
    thank you so very much for this unexpected reward ... your contest-prompts are always so inspiring and help us focus on the road when driving through life, while the windscreen-whipers of our ever restless minds challenge us with distraction ... I have just discovered a wonderful video by a contemporary advaita vedanta teacher called mooji on youtube that illustrates the theme of your contest so well :
    "the logical mind is also an illusion"
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sLOe1pKz3lM

    enjoy ...

    marion