have you ever lost something so important to your survival in life.....apart of yourself that you know once gone it would affect you whole outlook and life itself.....(it feels like someone played a cruel trick on you) that faith and even god betrayed you.....have you ever wanted to just give up.....been so terrified and scared of waking up every morning (and having nothing changed)or going to sleep at night (fearing that it would be all gone once you opened your eyes) people have survived thousands of years with out all five senses.....some even without the aid of the most important of then senses.....(they say hearing is the most important (ears).....second seeing (eyes) you can live without tasted,smell and even touch but with out hearing and sight we are trapped in a world no-one should have to experiences.......
if you lost one of your senses tomorrow.....without warning how would you go on.....how would you get by.....and could you do it alone......without ending up bitter and resentful at the world......
i want 10 poets to pen me something beautiful (WITH A LOSE OF ONE SENSES (SIGHT,HEARING ETC)
limit of 30 lines (but i will take in to exceptions longer if they are good)
10 places and 3 days
give me something to think about......help me to understand why.....show me beauty
take away your sight
take away your hearing
and give me your soul
winner will take all in this contest......if i can i will add awards and points at the end of contest
usual rules apply
follow them:
no erotic
no swearing
no stupid typing
this is all age contest
label poems
not a fan of rhyme but all forms of poetry excepted
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 16, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: well the contest didnt go as planed.....but thank you to the ones that read all the rules and followed the guide lines i set....congrads to the winner.....amazing poem
Contest Winners
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Blind can see,
deaf can hear,by Pisces rainbow 32 lines, 10 comments, on Sep 11 9:32 AM 2008. In Contest, Spiritual
Silver trophy winner
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Gold trophy winner
Entries [7]
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Traumatic Brain Injury almost took my life,
day to day drug induced I clung;
not knowing what the next day would bringby Kathleen a Nazarene 33 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 12 10:39 AM 2008. In Contest, Life, Hope, Personal, Spiritual, Inspirational, Message• Viewed by judge. -
Walk with me and take my hand,
Feel my soul torn from my chest,by SchizoChic 46 lines, on Sep 12 11:16 AM 2008. In Contest• Viewed by judge. -
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take away your sight
take away your hearing
and give me your soul
wow -
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hope thats a positive wow
and means your gonna enter ?
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Hi. would you accept a prewrite? many thanks, DI
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i'll open for
pre-writes for 1 day.....
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