Hello Everyone.
In relation to the picture, I'm feeling random
I'm getting kind of sick of my points at the moment, and though my previous contest wasn't so long ago, I've decided to have a new one.
Only BIGGER
What I want from you guys is LOTS of prewrites. Enter with the prewrites that you like best. The ones you've edited and re-edited and then edited again. Or you can just enter in one of your newer poems. Or older poems. You know... whatever. I just want prewritten gold.
Rules:
No - Erotica
- Cht spk
- StIcKy KeYs
Minimum - Cussing
Write me whatever you want. I don't mind any genre or style of writing.
Anything!
Till next time.
Swim.x
UPDATE
You can enter more than once, so long as your piece isn't already in the Preliminary Finalists.
In relation to the picture, I'm feeling random
I'm getting kind of sick of my points at the moment, and though my previous contest wasn't so long ago, I've decided to have a new one.
Only BIGGER
What I want from you guys is LOTS of prewrites. Enter with the prewrites that you like best. The ones you've edited and re-edited and then edited again. Or you can just enter in one of your newer poems. Or older poems. You know... whatever. I just want prewritten gold.
Rules:
No - Erotica
- Cht spk
- StIcKy KeYs
Minimum - Cussing
Write me whatever you want. I don't mind any genre or style of writing.
Anything!
Till next time.
Swim.x
UPDATEYou can enter more than once, so long as your piece isn't already in the Preliminary Finalists.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 6, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 900, Silver: 500, Bronze: 250, Honorable mention: 4 people
- Final notes: All of the poems in this contest totally took my breath away. No cliche intended. I speak with extreme sincerety when I say that. Congratulations to all of you, and you might want to take a look at the winners, because they're all absolutely amazing.
I'll be having another contest in a couple of weeks, so keep your eyes peeled
Chin up,
Swim.x
Contest Winners
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The living world ends every night.
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The sky broke out in crimson
Between a hostile atmosphere.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
by perfectsunset 72 lines, 31 comments, on Sep 9 12:35 AM 2008. In Love, Pain, Heartbreak, Personal, Thoughts, noguest
Honorable mention
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Two oars half kiss the river as I row you to the Moon
Past a sleeping nest of moorhens and a single diving loon.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [101]
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I saw a slit above me filled with moonlight pearly white,
And silhouetted against it was a terrifying sight!
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by PrInCeSsOfRoCk 24 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 4 11:32 PM 2008. In Life, Personal, Thoughts, noguest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by orchidfalls 30 lines, 21 comments, on Dec 9 4:06 AM 2005. In Angst• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Blissless kisses and joker’s smiles revile
in psychedelic effigy,by Georgia La Mariposa 22 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 8 2:09 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Maybe its not betrayal
Maybe its not a knife in my backby thearmsofsorrow 23 lines, 16 comments, on Aug 22 6:33 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The darkness is so deep,
In a city without sleep.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The summer nite air greets me as I stand on the balcony.
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Dedicated to Existentialists everywhere!
An ardent individual they must be,by Kazytc 43 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 28 9:11 PM 2008. In Contest, Humour, Philosophy, Observations, Thoughts, Society, Existentialism
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"One block too far", Dad said,
"There's Noah Eyefolk's queer?"• Viewed by judge. -
My sweet child
so tiny and smallby Midnight Rose14 29 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 16 7:45 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I don't see, What anyone can see,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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When I was but a few days old
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by peridotPixi 10 lines, 12 comments, on Aug 20 8:42 PM 2008. In Contest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The small lizard will creep,madly, into its hole:
Abyss without dreams, and a den of mysteries,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Passionate Phoenix 19 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 27 9:29 AM 2007. In Sad, Spiritual, Nature, Weird, Melting Autumn• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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clenching your sticky
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THE STORY OF GINGER
In our family• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
He is flawless
He is perfectby jalissa 19 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 11 8:44 AM 2008. In Hope, Friendship, Fantasy, Lost in thought• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I let my body take control,
everything around me
disappears, evaporates• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Beat.
Beat.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Cigarette in hand, lighter flashes in the night
Pack of Camels in my lapby Lonely Christina 24 lines, 21 comments, on Aug 27 2:14 PM 2008. In Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Weird, Life, Goodbyes, Lost in thought, My own style• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I'll tell you a tale of our own Devil's Island• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Love it or leave it baby, the best days are behind us && I can see through your guilt. Paint my pain with a chalk outline on the sidewalk. I never mattered in the first place, just a replacement for the ones who couldn't be tby Manorexic 1 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 19 7:15 PM 2008. In angst, love, anger, rage, broken hearts, thoughts, pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Unable to pinpoint
that step...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The rose of red like blood filled veins, / Lay still and innocent with it's own pain. / Lying on top this book of words, the rose has it'sby VirginiaDarling 36 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 8 4:51 PM 2007. In Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Zephyr:
Oh colorful butterflies, where do you go?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
this is a redo on an old oneby Dark Prince Chaos 22 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 11 2:20 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The angel held me close rocking me back and forthby lunagirl15 43 lines, 14 comments, on May 8 2:56 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I'll try and do something beautiful for yu, btw Heather in the pic? Nice, she's very photogenicby Little Miss Mental 28 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 16 1:52 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Emotional, frustrated and angry all in one
Wishing I had a gun to point and blow the brains out of the one they call love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Doubled over with anguish. Drowning in self pity,by Play Pretend. 26 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 22 11:14 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Visible imprints
wander carelessly withoutby Salt Therapy 14 lines, 11 comments, on Aug 14 4:49 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
We lay here together,
Holding hands,by Ebbing.X.Discreetly 15 lines, 11 comments, on Aug 17 5:38 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
look at me
my brown hair and eyes• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I drink a glass of beer,
as i'm writing this piece.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by after-silence 54 lines, 12 comments, on Sep 11 12:16 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My head exploded into the sky,
Blew to blue, fade to contrast white.by subliminalj 34 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 2 9:20 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I wake up in the morning and I think I'm 25.
I am so glad I chain smoke and don't excerize.by lisapoet 20 lines, 16 comments, on Sep 11 10:09 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The pale moon light shinning down on her
Shadows dance around the lake sideby AlyshiaRenee.x 48 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 11 9:52 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by stargazer. 3 lines, 16 comments, on Jan 11 8:41 PM. In Sad, Dark, Pain, Longing, My own style, Anger, Teen issues, Teenage thinking, Depressed, Hope• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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When, in some abandoned alleyway of time,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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See the other side reverse the same
left is right in this wild tameby Darkwell 40 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 31 2:16 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Lovely rainbow in the sky
such wondrous beauty to my eyeby Serpentine 9 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 7 1:38 PM 2008. In Nature• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Her life now
Piano, so oldby Tom The Invader 30 lines, 12 comments, on Aug 14 12:55 PM 2006. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I looked at you the other day
And then I turned awayby Banana Slug Zombie 106 lines, on Sep 9 11:43 PM 2008. In Love, Friendship, Longing, Sadness, Angst, Personal, Dedication, Loss, Happiness• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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by Doll Faise 37 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 16 11:43 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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DEATH OF A BROKEN PLANETby robert davidson 46 lines, 47 comments, on Sep 13 8:43 PM 2008. In Contemporary, Life, environment, Nature• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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hey, so it says on my 'contests you've entered' page that I entered this, but my poem isn't showing up on this page and I didn't get a notification that it was removed. So I was just wondering if you did in fact remove it, or if it was a bug, or something else?
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I definately didn't remove it, and I definately did read it. Maybe it has something to do with being one of the last poems entered? I did see it, don't worry
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Alright, I was just wondering if it was an error with Allpoetry or there was something wrong with my poem. Thanks.
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thanks so much for the HM
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Congrats to the winners and thanks very much for the HM.
Shaz xx
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