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The true pain...(options)

Alright, so here is my third contest, and to those of you who are huge "emo" writers, I want to give you a chance. See...I am sort of bored by the tedious cutting poems, and they all sound the same. So, turn my thoughts around, and show me what you've got. As promised, there are options!

Option 1: So, I have noticed that there are alot of abuse victims on this site. I want to hear what you went through. I want to feel it, I want it to move me. Doesn't have to Rhyme, but if it does, it has to be good.

Option 2: Nursery Rhymes are the most well known songs of all time. So here, I want to to re-write your favorite Nursery Rhyme. The catch? I want it to be dark, and want it to chill the marrow in my bones. I want to be afraid. I want it to Rhyme, though, as all Nursery Rhymes usually do.

Option 3: Lost love. How did you lose him/her? Was it your behavior? Was he an ass? Let it out, I want to hear you!

Option 4: Beautiful lie: What is the longest told lie that you were a victim to? Why did they lie, how did you find out? what did you do? I want emotion in this, people.

Option 5: Alright, also as promised, this option is for all cutters/ex-cutters. Why did you cut? Why did you start, and how did you stop? (Being an ex-cutter myself, I will be judging heavily on this one)

Option 6: Falls apart: Alright, so I know people who think that everything they get a hold of falls apart. So, do you feel that way? Why do you feel that way? I want to feel futility on this one.

Option 7: Alright, for this one, I want you to tell me how your depression has changed you. Has it made you a better or worse person. Do you take meds? I want to feel raw emotion on this one as well.


Alright so, as always, I have rules...

-No TyPiNg LiKe ThIs. AfTeR A WhIlE It GeTs AnNoYiNg.

-If you have major material that should not be read by certain viewers, then label appropriately.

-No major Lust either, I don't want to know what your love was like before. I want to know how it changed, and sex shouldn't be a part of that.

-Put the option number in your AN

-Put a short backround story in your AN as well. I want to be able to understand you fully.

-No grotesque images, if it is really disgusting, I will DQ you. That is my right, so be careful.

-Rhyme where the option says to, otherwise, I don't care what form you use.

-Cussing is okay, but don't put a cuss word in every other sentence.

Alright, so...I am hoping that you have fun doing this, and put all your effort into it.

Ready....
Set...



Write!!!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on September 20, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 150, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    Alright...another hard contest to judge, but I know I made the right choice. These were all amazing poems. If you didn't win, don't give up! Write write write! Anyway...great job to the winners.

Contest Winners

  1. Fingers of fear grasp her heart
    as the steps draw nearer, she quakes.
    by miabella 17 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 6 4:27 PM 2008. In Abuse, Pain
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Truculence trooper with no next-of-kin
    The veins path blue on your transparent skin
    by Rachel Kruger 38 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 6 3:44 PM 2008. In Life, Thoughts, Personal, Pain, Contest
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. by November-Dani 117 lines, 11 comments, on Sep 19 8:39 PM 2008. In Pain, Dark
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Left to live my life
    with a mother who is metal
    by Coloured Skies 22 lines, 13 comments, on Sep 7 3:34 AM 2008. In Pain, Sad, Abuse, Dark, Life, Contest, Personal, Other
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4608383, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

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