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Rewrite this poem with very descriptive words

I know I stay up to late
You probably think I drink all night
Well I used too.
But the keyboard and the pen
Are my best friends other than my girl.
Jammed a million thoughts together
So I can never remember just one.

I sleep because I have to
That is when I collapse.

I wonder what it would be like
If I was driving the wheel
And not my inner self?

Does anyone else
Have this drive that you gotta?

Sometimes my dark side prevails.
Most of the time, I am cheerful with a twist.

Take these words oh people of magic
And swirl them about.
Let them captivate you,
And fiddle about.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on September 5, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 50, Bronze: 30
  • Final notes:
    Thank you. I will see you again soon.
    Hopefully in one of your contests.
    It was such a hard judge. That's the worst part.
  • To judge this contest, you need to have at least as many finalists as you have rewards. You have 3 awards but only 2 finalists.

Contest Winners

  1. My Hung-Over Insomniac Pen
    My insouciant insomniac
    inebriated eyes unshuttering the night
    by Justplainwaynethen 34 lines, 13 comments, on Sep 5 4:21 AM 2008
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Coming Light
    Midnight moon, my old friend,
    shines away another night,
    by Karl Weiss - Topaz 31 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 5 3:30 AM 2008. In Contest, Lyrics, Love, Life, Thoughts
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [6]

1 - 6 of 6
  • Obsession
    I stay up far too late at night,
    because I am a driven man.
    by Bad Bill 19 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 5 4:33 AM 2008. In Contest
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Late Nights
    I dwindle all the nights away
    And I bet you think I drink it pass
    by rebelsavior 37 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 5 7:18 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Delight
    by Shenton 24 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 5 7:23 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Nightcap
    Climbing out of my whiskey glass,
    I stumble to my bed.
    by Judith Chandler 16 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 5 9:18 AM 2008. In Contest
    • Commented on by judge.

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Comments


  • Dangerousparable silver member
    September 5, 2008
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    You got me guys and gals

    Some of you understood exactly where I am coming from, and in fact probably are there.
    Thank you Thank you Thank you all
    You were so wonderful.
    If you need to write me go ahead.
    There were still too many good works.
    See ya soon
    G


  • Riftkin gold member
    September 5, 2008
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    Thank you for the honor of bronze.

    Congrats to the Gold and Silver winners.

    Riftkin


  • Justplainwaynethen gold member
    September 5, 2008
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    thanks from me, too... maybe I've found an angle here... I'll have to try a few more...