Okay, this is my first contest, so if I sound like a loser, that's why.
My boyfriend is in the military, and I am constantly miss and worry about him. He's been working so much lately and never has time to talk, so I'm feeling kind of lonely/sad.
I want to hear (read, technically) about your guy/gal in the military. How do you survive day-to-day when they're not there? Etc.
No erotica.
Keep profanity to a minimum.
Try your best to use proper spelling and grammar.
"Its" does not equal "it's" just as "your" does not equal "you're" Know when to use which word.
Length doesn't matter...I just don't want to be sitting here reading a poem for 10 minutes.
Umm...did I cover everything? If you rhyme, please, for the love of all things good, make it good.
Go go go
Get to work.
My boyfriend is in the military, and I am constantly miss and worry about him. He's been working so much lately and never has time to talk, so I'm feeling kind of lonely/sad.
I want to hear (read, technically) about your guy/gal in the military. How do you survive day-to-day when they're not there? Etc.
No erotica.
Keep profanity to a minimum.
Try your best to use proper spelling and grammar.
"Its" does not equal "it's" just as "your" does not equal "you're" Know when to use which word.
Length doesn't matter...I just don't want to be sitting here reading a poem for 10 minutes.
Umm...did I cover everything? If you rhyme, please, for the love of all things good, make it good.
Go go go
Get to work.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 20, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 300, Bronze: 150
- Final notes: Wow, this was really hard to judge, especially choosing who got silver and who got bronze. All of these poems were exceptionally good and heartfelt. Thank you all for entering, but most of all, thank you for loving and supporting our troops.
Best regards,
SGS
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A little boy with my husband's eyes
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hey.. i am not entering your contest because i dont have much to write about my boyfriend being in the military because he isn't involved so im sorry if that is kind of rude to you.. but i would just like you to know that i know it hurts.. i understand that him being away and the worry about him.. my boyfriend when we grow up.. he finishes school.. he wants to leave me and go to the army.. it hurts me enough already because we live a long distance relationship and i only see him twice a month pretty much. and i know its scarey.. i'm so scared to think what may happen.. but i guess all you have to do is just be proud of him.. and support him. i wish you and your boyfriend well.. i really do.
oxoxoxo
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Would enter but for obvious reasons I can't.
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hey i am a military WIFE can i enter as well??
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aww
Don't have anyone there, but would like to have entered - can see where you're coming from though, am gonna go read the entries now
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Thank you....
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Thankyou for awarding my poem with a gold trophy!!
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