try if you can
give me something
Onerios13 style
now this will be difficult for the most talented writers
I have had the pleasure of collaborating with this poetic genius several times
we call them our love chilluns
so
this is no easy task
at least 40 lines
and you best do some reading
peace Muddy
http://allpoetry.com/onerios13
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 1, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 2000, Silver: 2000, Bronze: 6001
- Final notes: I have to say, I hated seeing this one end.
Each poem stood on its own, and each voice was truly remarkable.
I'm not sure Darcy will agree with my picks, but I know she loved them all from her comments.
I wish I could give you all something, yet I feel I did in a way, as you stretched yourselves as poets to pay tribute to a wonderful lady.
I plan on doing more of this type of contest, so look out people, you never know with me.
Gold-Mel
Silver-JP
Bronze-the original herself
Nicole...she knows what I'm speaking of...lol
read each others work
some good stuff here
Darcy, you know how I feel
till we do another chylde
peace Muddy
Contest Winners
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by the atlantic 100 lines, 38 comments, on Sep 5 12:41 PM 2008. In Personal, Love
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the air is full
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I AM SO ON LIKE DONKEY KONG!
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And how do you make that cute little thing?
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* dancer * m'love
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You did it! LOL Great!
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seriously though, i will blow your mind. and lol for 5001 bronze points?
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try 6001...lol
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lol how does that make sense! i love it though
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one more comment; DARCY MAKES MY LIFE LIVABLE.
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don't blow ya waddddd before ya write something boy...lol
it's all good
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hahahah not even going to lie, i almost did. she's just that amazing and you know what i mean mud......spectacular woman.
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That is... almost... sad.
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LOL, you are so in denial about how great she is. it's ok, there's help for that. www.allpoetry.com/onerios13
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oh and i am hugely sarcastic. and funny.
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Holy shit, Richard. 
You do enjoy throwing down the most daunting gauntlets, don'tcha??? Darcy's gonna love ya even more for this one, Sweetie. 
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with a lil' help from my friends
hugeazzhugs girlie
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Now, this will be a challenge. Darcy has a very distinctive voice - you sure know how to challenge us.
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Scott you started this addiction
we are friends
I love this gal
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I'll have to muster up somethin' for her to throw rocks at.
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so that's a nature write...shield yourself with Walt
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Is this a joke? You know it isn't possible, right? I don't mean to be pessimistic but are you saying that the winner will be the one that sucks at achieving the goal the least.
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I'm saying, as was the case in Scott's contest...it's not about points or trophies, just the love of the poet and the inspiration they give us on a regular basis...to be honest if an entry sucks...it won't win anything...lol
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I didn't mean the entries would suck, just the ability to write like her, cuz nobody really can. Just my opinion but she does have a very distinct voice. Cool contest though. Fun thing to try. Just don't laugh.
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it's like me and guitars....I play a strat...I can try a Flying V and it still sounds like me
you pulled off the Scott thing....now do ya homework girl
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so i lyk wunna win the brunzzzee sew baayddee!
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I'm shootin' for not getting thrown out of the contest.
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I love her to death as I'm sure everyone here knows, but no way am I attempting this. lol. Smacks too much of... blah... EMULATIONS, which she knows I so despise. Besides, all this praise for her makes me... itchy and self-conscious. LOL. My ego can't take it. One more gold trophy for her and I'm gonna repeatedly stab myself with plastic sporks.
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but if I remember correctly, you were the first true bronze trophy whore...this is tailor made for you girl
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Tis true, this thing you speak of.
Still... emulations. Ick. I feel so unoriginal pilfering someone elses style. lol. Or... MORE unoriginal anyway
Maybe I'll just string a bunch of nonsensical metaphors together in one-word-per-line strings, and then I'd be a shoe-in!
HAhahahah! You have no idea how happy I am to simply have the opportunity to totally giver her a hard time. -
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this was my favorite passage from that stanza
nonsensical metaphors together in one-word-per-line strings, and then I'd be a shoe-in
hell I don't get points for comments here...nevermind
lmao
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I read her page recently, the penetration poems...and I will give this some deep thought, like the thoughts before climbing a big mountain...PK
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wanna borrow an ice pick
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no way i can do this.
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Impossible Dream
you betta bee here
won't take no for an answer
hell no one can do it
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Oh my...
Mud, dearest darlin'....how you have outdone yourself right now. I am quite...speechless...but thoroughly humbled, floored and rolled in such gratitude. (and no, I promise I won't cry...at least not a lot. lol)
You have my heart.
PS. I can't WAIT to read how others view my works!
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gotta take care of momma
what would the chilluns think
you have mine too
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Impossible! No one can write like Darcy!
BOOKMARKED!
Renee
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I never said anyone could
but there are 10001 reasons
why one should try
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Impossible Task...
to write or attempt to write like a poetic genius.
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get in here D
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Nothing like asking the impossible; for me, at least. I have read her poetry many times, I can't even comment on it, I am so awed, after wards it's like having an ice cream headache (brain freeze), I walk around licking my lips and holding my head saying, "Damn! That was good."
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I definitely want to enter.
I will try!
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6001 for bronze?
that adds up to 10001
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So I'm guessing you're never going to tell us why you decided to give bronze so many more points than gold and silver? lol. Well, this should be quiet a challenge, one I'm not sure I'm up to, especially finding this contest so late. But I might just give it a go. Great idea, btw.
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actually, it's not about trophies or points...rather paying tribute to a wonderful poet and a beautiful person and friend
be inspired by her writing and you may walk away with the bronze
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Oh I'm not worried about points or trophies, just too curious as usual. I only wondered if there was a specific motive behind it, or maybe you just wanted to be controversial, or, well, make curious people like me itch and squirm. haha.
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I'm very fond of her ...
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Thank you for honoring my sister and my friend. She deserves every beautiful word that was written on each of these pages. You are such a charm Richard. I love you and Darcy more than you will ever know, and pray to someday meet you both.
CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL THE WINNERS HERE AND KUDOS TO ALL FOR PARTICIPATING IN THIS TRIBUTE!
Much Love Always ♥
Renee
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Congratulations to the winners - another fine Muddy King Production - and some great work by all.
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Thank you so much hon, this was the boost I needed.
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Sniff. This is so emotional for me.
LOL.
I've been deleting my trophies lately, but this might be one I have to keep on my page... that glorious bronze. My sweet bronze children still call to me. lol.
Thanks so much, and congrats to the other winners and finalists and everyone who gave this a shot. Darcy is worth emulating
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Awesome! Yup. Keep 'em coming. They really do inspire a good write.
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Congratulations to the trophy winners. A pleasure to participate in this contest inspired to write like Darcy, she is certainly an inspiration. Great choices Muddy!
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