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Wedding Bells (a few options)

So I have been thinking alot lately about the topic of Marriage. In most "traditional" Wiccan weddings, called handfastings, the two being married write their own vows.

This is what i want from you.

Option 1:
Write a wedding vows (in the form of a poem if possible). Pretend that you are getting married and you are writing your own vows. make them short sweet and to the point, or long and romantic it is up to you.

Option 2:
Write about that special day. write what the scene will be like, or what you might feel. write about what you will be thinking or what you betrothed might be thinking.

Option 3:
Write about your honeymoon. where you want to go, what you will do (yes erotica is perfectly fine) and how you feel to finally be married. this is the most special time after the marriage and i want it celebrated in poetry as detailed as it can be.

RULES

1. no cussing (should not be necessary we are having happy thoughts about the most important day of our lives).

2. Erotica is perfectly fine and i really dont care how detailed you get.

3. Entries. you may enter more than once, but if you do please do not make them all for the same option.

$. most importantly. have fun and be imaginative.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on September 18, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    thank you all for your entries, i didnt have time to really comment, though i will go back and comment my thoughts on each one when i have a few moments.

    Thanks for Entering

    Immortale Bellezza

Contest Winners

  1. In front of the shower mirror my naked body peeked at me / Shapely full breasts hard and ripe waiting to be tasted / A curvy hip, soft and
    by Nermin Nazim 28 lines, 14 comments, on Jun 17 11:57 PM 2007. In Love, Personal, Thoughts, My own style
    Gold trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. On this day of our joining,
    I find it hard to bring words to mind,
    by Yunalonei 18 lines, on Sep 4 8:01 AM 2008. In Personal, Life, Love
    Silver trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  3. by Summer Daze 27 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 4 1:06 PM 2008. In Love, Sonnet
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4569666, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  5. A Jamaican full moon fills the
    lily bedroom with a
    by SilentMoonlight 25 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 3 10:39 PM 2008. In Love, Personal
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  6. by Bosiarbooger 39 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 1 12:26 AM 2008. In Contest, Love, Humor
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. Just you and I standing there
    I can feel you grasping my hands together in yours
    by Xx Secrets xX 41 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 7 11:10 AM 2008. In Marriage, Contest, Thoughts, Love, Life
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]

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  • Nermin Nazim
    September 18, 2008
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    Thank you so much my dear

    Immortalebellezza dear,
    Thank you so much for the Gold trophy. I did not expect it although I love this piece very much and i am so happy to have received gold for it.
    Kisses
    nermin