I am not going to lie, I am probably in the worst mood right now, and I don't think its going to change anytime soon. So I want whatever you have to give me.
My story is, I was mollested by a teacher a few years back. I didn't really realize it when he did it until after a few months after when I couldn't stand the feeling of guilt and just disgust of what I let this man do to me. He was put on leave of absense from the school until i graduated out of it. Well the school board has now chosen to let him finally teach again and the disappointing thing is he hasn't learned his lesson and he's back to his old games.
So if you have ever been hurt by someone, write about it. But I want pain, not break up pain like pain that stays with you.
I want happiness and words to fill my heart with joy until I find myself out of this hard time..
Give me any feeling you wish to write about but please capture it through imagery and however you as a person processes it as an emotion..
I want anything you really feel you have to give me. I just want pure emotion because I am so confused that I don't know what to feel anymore..
Or be inspired by this quote
How do I not dance in
the fires rage
and take back control.
(ears2hearyou)
My story is, I was mollested by a teacher a few years back. I didn't really realize it when he did it until after a few months after when I couldn't stand the feeling of guilt and just disgust of what I let this man do to me. He was put on leave of absense from the school until i graduated out of it. Well the school board has now chosen to let him finally teach again and the disappointing thing is he hasn't learned his lesson and he's back to his old games.
So if you have ever been hurt by someone, write about it. But I want pain, not break up pain like pain that stays with you.
I want happiness and words to fill my heart with joy until I find myself out of this hard time..
Give me any feeling you wish to write about but please capture it through imagery and however you as a person processes it as an emotion..
I want anything you really feel you have to give me. I just want pure emotion because I am so confused that I don't know what to feel anymore..
Or be inspired by this quote
How do I not dance in
the fires rage
and take back control.
(ears2hearyou)
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 21, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 700, Silver: 350, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: I would like to say this contest was a huge success. I am really glad for all the entries I was able to READ. all of you did such a fantastic job. It was so hard for me to judge this, but I am satisfied with the winners. Keep writing and i hope to see all of you soon..
Rose
Contest Winners
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They promised my it would stop hurting• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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ethonal thoughts
and alcohol dreams, hold me inby Rose Darkest Night 198 lines, 24 comments, on Dec 3 7:56 PM 2006. In Dark, sad, abortion, lullaby twisting
Bronze trophy winner
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- Error: Unable to find finalist item 4528837, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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It's too late for me to tell you
everything that I wanted to say.by hopes of sorrow 68 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 11 1:47 AM 2008. In Life, Personal, Goodbyes
Honorable mention
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4565399, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
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My eyes, filled with guilt,
my heart filled with sharp pain,by LunaAmara 37 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 30 12:08 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
by Age of Rain 29 lines, 33 comments, on Feb 12 11:50 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Cut me and let me bleed
Let the emotions fall where they mayby strangerforeigner 15 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 15 10:30 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
To Whom It Concerns,
I write this to tell you all,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
life and luxury,
whats it all for.• Commented on by judge. -
Walking through in the rain,
He wanders alone and crying.by LovesMandaBear 28 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 22 8:19 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
in a pool of
dead newspaper clippingsby Apocalyptic Scarves 20 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 13 8:07 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Alone and waiting, afraid and angry I conceal myself in this shell mutilatingby Luciferian Aeon 37 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 21 2:20 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by night-eyed demon 40 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 4 2:38 PM 2006. In contemporary• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by foreverxnow 17 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 22 9:57 AM 2008. In Sad, Personal, Pain, Depressed, Anger, Teenage thinking, Message, My life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I feel pain all over me
And exhausted screams just wanting to escapeby Ebbing.X.Discreetly 37 lines, 18 comments, on Aug 16 4:45 PM 2008. In Angst, Contemporary, Thoughts, Sad, Pain, Depression, Shame, Abuse• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Any more sleep comes when the tears stain my pillow.
All I want is for the pain to go awayby Yesterdays Memory 26 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 25 3:52 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The darkness spreads and hidden shadows creep
Claws of darkness reach back through endless time• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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We said "just friends", We played pretend
Were happy, you and meby the masked one 40 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 7 8:49 AM 2008. In Personal, Contest, Thoughts, Lost Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A Love Dream There once was a love that I did dream• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Fuck all the life
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I wrote this about the one person in my life i love with all my heart &it wont ever change• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You try to make yourself look pure you say that you are innocentby tortured-heart 15 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 29 2:22 PM 2008. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Bleeding insanity
Drunkin Disception• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Kia Tenshi 32 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 12 7:44 PM 2008. In disfunctional, displaced, sad, dark, depressing, angst, teen, moved, personal, alone• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Shut up when I'm talking to you!
(Tears are pouring!)by King Nothing 58 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 13 12:14 AM 2008. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
Drilled a hole / now it won't stop / from everywhere / atacked / Thinking, Thinking / Cant stop the memories / the thoughts / my dam broke down / flooded with / Everything / Thinking, Thinking /by Childofserenity 35 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 26 10:50 PM 2007. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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As you pull me close
Not knowing what your going to do• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I was 13 and you 16
I was virgin and you not• Commented on by judge. -
Just because I had one drink too many
Doesn't mean that you could rape me.by brittany.geeze 27 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 18 8:58 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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God you are astounding
You keep me breathing• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Happiness. Pure bliss. Overwhelmin Joy.
It has always been there,by hotpinkpenguin 28 lines, 21 comments, on Sep 15 9:40 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I close my eyes and think back,
The air was humid the sky was pitch black.by HopelessPoet1087 12 lines, 16 comments, on Aug 13 12:55 PM 2007. In personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
What did the heart say to the soul? "They all can say they love me but only you could let me know"-heartby RomeoPierson 16 lines, 2 comments, on May 6 11:25 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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very proud of you poetess
the way to healing and taking back your power
is to learning how to leave the
fires of rage... I know this takes much courauge,
may the poets feast your heart boldly!
and may you continue to write courageously!
ears -
"These eyes are open"
I entered it just coz it sounded like you needed uplifting, hope it works.
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I'm really sorry for entering a poem about an experience that I've never been through. I have removed the poem from your contest and submitted a better, well-written one that IS true about my struggles of being fat in school. Hope you like this one better because I put my heart into it.
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hope you enjoy my poem. It is seemingly one of the best i have ever written, an di hope you can feel the feelings that i interlaced into each line
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aaww...i hope u feel better..
hope u like my poem too!!!
~HUGS~
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