i want poetry that makes me feel. either Dark, Love, Pain, Sad. make tears come to my eye, make me feel joy, make me want to curl up. i want poetry that makes you feel. oh & i'll be adding more points as i get them.
Here are the rules:
1) No stupid capitol things it’s really annoying
2) Try to make it grammatically correct unless it works in you entry
3) pre-writes are allowed
4) 1-2 Entries per-person if doing pre-writes one must be a new poem the other can be a pre-write
5) Nothing abusive
please check back every few days for any updates also please put this ~*~ in your comments so i know you've read the rules & understand them
--Blessed be--
Shacadia Shay
*~*~*~*~* Update *~*~*~*~*~*
please do not stress & remove poems if there not put into the finalists list as i will be, rereading your poems several times before i pick the winners. also please add more fresh writes.
~*~*~*~*~ Update ~*~*~*~*~
i will no longer be accepting pre-writes sorry but i've only been getting a few fresh writes.
Here are the rules:
1) No stupid capitol things it’s really annoying
2) Try to make it grammatically correct unless it works in you entry
3) pre-writes are allowed
4) 1-2 Entries per-person if doing pre-writes one must be a new poem the other can be a pre-write
5) Nothing abusive
please check back every few days for any updates also please put this ~*~ in your comments so i know you've read the rules & understand them
--Blessed be--
Shacadia Shay
*~*~*~*~* Update *~*~*~*~*~*
please do not stress & remove poems if there not put into the finalists list as i will be, rereading your poems several times before i pick the winners. also please add more fresh writes.
~*~*~*~*~ Update ~*~*~*~*~
i will no longer be accepting pre-writes sorry but i've only been getting a few fresh writes.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 10, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 60, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: thank you to all who have entered i'm sorry i didn't get around to comment all the wonderful entries. also congratulations to all who won awards to all who did i did enjoy reading them all & i hope you all continue writing.
Best of luck in future contests.
--Blessed be--
Shacadia Shay
Contest Winners
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As life grows tougher,
You take a turn that I never thought youd take…by Lord Belial 31 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 29 1:22 AM 2008. In Love, Personal, Thoughts, Life, Sad, Hope, My own style, Friendship
Silver trophy winner
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Lighting strikes reality slows down for a mere second and your wishes & dreams stumble upon the floorby stargazer. 29 lines, 11 comments, on Dec 12 11:43 PM 2008. In Love, Sad, Pain, Hope, Longing, Lost love, Emo, Loss, Teen issues, Teenage thinking, Escape• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I note something in your eyes
You say it’s not true at all
Yet I know the reason whyby Freak-in-BlackJeans 42 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 28 10:22 AM 2008. In Angst, Life, Love, Other, Thoughts, Sad, Personal, Pain, Lost in thought, Friendship• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
She sits patiently on the cold hard concrete floor. This spot has been her domain throughout the night.by princess-bubblegum 29 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 6 6:22 AM 2007. In Abuse, Life, Other, Pain, Personal, Sad, Society, Thoughts, Lost in thought, Sadness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Twirling like a ballerina
But falling from the sky.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
A boy in the Hospital,
I don’t even know his name.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [45]
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only me could dance with the beat, in the beat and still keep my broken sanity...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Hello My Love
I just needed to tell youby Karl Weiss - Topaz 45 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 14 1:32 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
His music, / floats by my ears / in a stream of tears / like the battered violin / I have a song inside / yet today I cry at its bankby Carly Pop 35 lines, 21 comments, on May 13 7:37 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Do you hear that?
a baby cryingby fumes 108 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 18 2:03 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I went to bed last night with a tear in my eye.
I thought I’d lost you darlin’ and was not quite sure why.by BillyClyde 41 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 24 8:58 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I sit here remembering happier times
When together we sang some nursery rhymes• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Have you ever seen
the flowers in the field• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
(just say it
this place is hel -)• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When day's gone by,
and night's drawn in;by anaisnais 12 lines, 16 comments, on Aug 27 7:45 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Little Cinderella, marked at birth with a cleft lip / Delivered by a Dr. that killed his two sons, / My father fainted when he saw my newbo• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Raven De Winter 31 lines, 18 comments, on Sep 28 6:59 PM 2005. In Hope• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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i run around / looking for you / i wanna make it right again / i know i was stupid / and i know your were gone / but i tired to do nothing and all the fun was gone / so baby please try me again / those sweet inby Chuck Johnson a kid 10 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 18 11:13 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Mummy, please don’t shout like that,
I get scared at the sound.by xMissHollie 28 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 29 8:49 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Warrior of white who stands upon the lonely hill,
sword poised to take on the army before her• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
If I could tell you
Just one thingby Minorchar 41 lines, on Aug 29 12:54 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
look at me
my brown hair and eyes• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
There are bars on the window that I’m looking through.
I put them there.by Still Anonymous 53 lines, 15 comments, on May 29 10:56 AM 2008. In Angst, Life, Personal, Shyness• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
As I think of you tonight,I realize it's almost 5 years.It's been 5 years of sadness,And 5 years of tears.Time has flow• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The rage is burning deep inside, the fire within just will not die.
Against the chains I struggle and try, and scream to the world "I defy!"by I am Infamy 16 lines, on Aug 28 6:17 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
These words were inspired by a girl in my Philosophy class, whose name I still do not know.by I am Infamy 15 lines, 21 comments, on Jan 16 10:32 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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For once, her heart has been broken
It beats only halfheartedlyby Darker-star 29 lines, 12 comments, on Jul 14 2:20 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The oak tree
the tree of wasted knowledge -by Hadji Murad 43 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 2 4:22 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
as these drugs begin to peak, the thoughts surround me
as i become full of grief and agony, i take another hit trying to relieve myself• Viewed by judge.
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I just entered a prewrite but im going to enter a fresh one in a little while
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