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I am allowing prewritten poems, because I know a lot of your personal experiences have already been written, but that doesn't mean I want all prewritten poems. I'd like some fresh writes, too. Maybe about how you feel about the past, now that you're in the present.
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The title says it all. Tell me how you feel.
It can be about a love experience
or a heartbreak experience
or even something you feel ashamed to talk about
now's the time to let it all out.
There are no rules, because this is all about your personal poems.
I will comment on every entry.
Good luck to all. More points will probably be added.
Much ♥
Manduh
I am allowing prewritten poems, because I know a lot of your personal experiences have already been written, but that doesn't mean I want all prewritten poems. I'd like some fresh writes, too. Maybe about how you feel about the past, now that you're in the present.
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The title says it all. Tell me how you feel.
It can be about a love experience
or a heartbreak experience
or even something you feel ashamed to talk about
now's the time to let it all out.
There are no rules, because this is all about your personal poems.
I will comment on every entry.
Good luck to all. More points will probably be added.
Much ♥
Manduh
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 7, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: Wowww, sorry this took so long ! haha I wanted to give everyone trophies because I knew these were all personal Anyways, the winners definitely really stood out to me, and I had three honorable mentions because I seem to be running low on points...haha so I am sorry that I couldn't give all the finalists honorable mentions ! Thanks everybody for entering ♥
Contest Winners
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The acidic aftertaste of white wine and champagne, lies heavy on my stomach - I felt that I'd be sick.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 4534389, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 4503283, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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you say goodbye; I cannot hear you.
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by tanzanite dreams 45 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 16 8:53 PM 2008. In dark, anorexia, eating disorder, sad, personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 4541625, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Tired arguments like
tiny lanterns filled withby Jasmine Rayne 36 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 15 10:26 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
each night when i go to bed• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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by TheGangstress 59 lines, 23 comments, on Jul 10 11:46 PM 2008. In Romance• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [64]
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For once, her heart has been broken
It beats only halfheartedlyby Darker-star 29 lines, 12 comments, on Jul 14 2:20 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My head…I can’t think straight
Please don’t do this to me• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It is your sex that lies in your lap like candy and gold• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by robertomano24 46 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 1 8:06 PM 2008. In Friendship• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The words seep in like acid rain, Boring holes straight through my brain.by Sticks-And-Stones 7 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 21 11:18 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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dear god boy!
why cant you see??
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Giving into the pain
Deafening screams take overby ley527 28 lines, 58 comments, on Dec 3 9:01 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Never before have i felt so alive
Your love is like airby ley527 16 lines, 25 comments, on Aug 9 10:00 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Feel the world crash around me,1
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Hey, you.
It's been a while...by Bleed the truth X 37 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 18 9:41 AM 2008. In Life, Personal, Thoughts, Friendship.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
so friday's frolics and yesterday's yearns have died down
& I'm left looking at myself in a different perspectiveby xxRainbowDawnxx 25 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 27 4:35 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Walking Oxymoron 35 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 24 9:09 PM 2008. In Pain, Abuse, Personal, Sad, Angst, Society, Contemporary, Contest, Thoughts• Commented on by judge.
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I lost him today,
to rainbow bridgesby pen-inhand 44 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 6 6:55 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You told me how much you hated me..
How I was the biggest mistake you ever made..by XxSuicidal-LovexX 37 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 4 10:11 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Its been six months but I still remember. [I can't forget]1
by Writing0Freedom 66 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 24 9:53 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
You really love her.
and there is nothing I can do, nothing I will doby Live with a passion 30 lines, on Dec 14 8:27 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by Simply Simple 62 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 30 12:32 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Simply Simple 68 lines, 20 comments, on Mar 24 6:49 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You have me
In a grasp so strongby swimmeroks 35 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 21 3:45 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I want to tell you that I love you But I don't know what you'll say.by swimmeroks 18 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 19 8:56 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Remember the good times,
For they are now through.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Tell me it's all right,
That everything is fine.by swimmeroks 18 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 12 11:26 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I know I disappointed you
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Don’t judge me by what you see
Don’t judge me by what you hear• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My journey to life has just begun
so watch out universe here I come• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Dangerousparable 29 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 25 3:53 AM 2008. In Abuse, Adult, Contemporary, Hope, Life, Love, Contest• Commented on by judge.
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Unforgettable moments in time, spent with you…hours fly by
How did I get so damn lucky? The image in which you perceive me amazes me eachby Lonely Christina 18 lines, 12 comments, on Aug 18 4:33 PM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Love, Life, Happiness, Sensual, Lost in thought, My own style• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When all my hope sets in deep
I remember how you made me lose sleepby AshleyAesthetic 40 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 25 1:21 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
It was Abel's tearful eyes
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She walks into the room with just
A smile upon her faceby TortureKitty 33 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 28 10:12 PM 2008. In Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Jealousy, My life, Friendship, Longing• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I'm in a searching sort of mode
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Tender hands begin to mould
the forbidden secrets of her breast• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The morning arises and the boy jumps to his feet from his bed.
Throws on his waiters, grabs his tackle box and poleby wilburdubs13 21 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 25 1:24 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I'll try to enter something. I have so much I need to let out. You've already commented on my latest write, which was the most personal thing I've written in a while so I guess I can't enter that.
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hahaha i just changed it to more than one
so go for it, love
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does it matter if you have already seen t?
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no it does not :]
you can enter whatevah you want, dearest
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woot.
you'd best ♥
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ima enter a prewrite
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sounds like a plan stan
you rock socks<3
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...is swearing allowed...? I have a poem I wouldnt mind entering but its got swearing in the title and in the poem...can I still enter it? The word is the F word
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yeah, of course, go for it :] it's your poem, & there are no rules.
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Thank you so much for silver <333
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thanks for hosting,look forward to the next time
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Thanks so muchly for the Gold! Out of all these wonderful entries, I am surprised! x
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