This is a verse prompt, I'm looking for your feelings.
Looking for poems between 8 and 12 lines if you want to place.
Be kind to others and comment if you can.
Most of all have fun and enjoy.
Here is the verse: Bob Dylan Song
There's beauty in that silver singing river
There's beauty in that rainbow in the sky
But none of these, and nothing else can match the beauty
That I remember in my own true loves eyes
Yes and only if my own true love was waiting
If I could hear her heart a softly pounding
Yes and only if she was lying by me
The I'd lie in my bed, once again
Looking for poems between 8 and 12 lines if you want to place.
Be kind to others and comment if you can.
Most of all have fun and enjoy.
Here is the verse: Bob Dylan Song
There's beauty in that silver singing river
There's beauty in that rainbow in the sky
But none of these, and nothing else can match the beauty
That I remember in my own true loves eyes
Yes and only if my own true love was waiting
If I could hear her heart a softly pounding
Yes and only if she was lying by me
The I'd lie in my bed, once again
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 6, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 1000, Silver: 500, Bronze: 250, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: Thank you for all your wonderful entries, I struggled with this one as your writes were all so amazing, such beauty for the soul to bare. You are all wonderful and have touched me with your words. My best wishes always Karl
Contest Winners
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The silver singing river now is quiet
And the rainbow from the sky has disappeared• Viewed by judge. [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4539755, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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by AliceinPoetryLand 15 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 3 6:36 AM 2008. In Contest, Lyrics Inspired, Rhyme
Honorable mention
• Commented on by judge. [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4539157, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Entries [10]
1 - 10 of 10
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As I listen to the River
Singing ever so softly to me• Commented on by judge. -
As I walk the lonely rails
I see the magnificence of the landby Wandering Woodchuck 8 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 23 8:12 PM 2008. In Lost love• Commented on by judge. -
From the very day we met love took the reigns and from that moment on I new I would never love another till the end of my days for within• Commented on by judge.
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stars wink on sky
lone earh below• Commented on by judge. -
I die daily wanting her..• Commented on by judge.
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Oh man, a fine verse! I think Bob Dylan was my dream man.... ~
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Congratulations to the winners and thank you for the HM and for hosting
Gaylene
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Congratulations everyone, and all the writings were fantastic! Thanks so much for the silver, and for hosting this contest. Take Care,
Dena -
Wonderful Contest
Thank you for honoring my poem with Gold. It is appreciated. Thank you for hosting the contest. You take care. Sandy
CONGRATULATIONS TO THE OTHER WINERS!!!!!!!!
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