Vodka intimate, an affair with isolation in a black-heath cell
Extinguishing the fires in a private hell
Provoking the heartache to renew the licence
of a bleeding heart poet in a fragile capsule
propping up the crust in the glitter conscience
wrapped in the christening shawl of a hangover
and baptized in tears from the real
lyrics are by Fish from the song Fugazi by the band Marillion...that's ur prompt.
A witness to a slumping economy, I am. A gadget slave to Republican rule as I work two jobs to earn my occasional amusements. No time to pen friends but I would love to read your entries and judge. God bless you all and don't forget to vote for the black man.
Extinguishing the fires in a private hell
Provoking the heartache to renew the licence
of a bleeding heart poet in a fragile capsule
propping up the crust in the glitter conscience
wrapped in the christening shawl of a hangover
and baptized in tears from the real
lyrics are by Fish from the song Fugazi by the band Marillion...that's ur prompt.
A witness to a slumping economy, I am. A gadget slave to Republican rule as I work two jobs to earn my occasional amusements. No time to pen friends but I would love to read your entries and judge. God bless you all and don't forget to vote for the black man.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 3, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 300, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: muchas gracias...felicidades a los ganadores...que Dios los bendiga
Contest Winners
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Raw ragged-edged perplexity
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to do more self talk,
and its not at all a smooth societal walk.
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the burning never stops,
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I have this as a quote on my author page .. Marillion are one of the best bands EVER .. well before Fish left that is.
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yes...i really only like them with Fish...saw them in new york city after he left the band around 1988...left after the third song...Fish solo is good but those first 4 Marillion albums are among my all-time faves
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miss ya...think about ya when i listen to the buena vista social club
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miss u 2...ur a beautiful soul...canta y no llores, poque cantanda se allegran, cielito mo los corazones
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mi corazón canta cuando pienso en usted, alma hermosa. no lo deje ser así que mucho antes oigo de usted.
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I understood that fine...gracias, que Dios te bendiga
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Thanks Iggy, this was a challenging contest as all of your contests are, trust me, one day I'm going to carry away the Gold for one of your contests, hahaha, just watch and see...lol and congrats to all of the winners
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thankyou
thankyou very much for the HM it is greatly appreciated...and thank you for hosting this contest. Best of luck to you in the future and with your writing...'
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Thanks - it was an interesting contest
Congrats to all ... may each of you continue to move within your own voice unique
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Thanks so much. Great inspiration. You're the best, Iggy
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Thank you so much for the HM in your contest. What a great contest. Congratulations to all. ~Pamela
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