Hey All,
I've been going through quite a lot of changes in my life at the moment and everything i do seems to be making me change my outlook on life just that little bit more.
I have a new baby brother born 22 June08, 6pnd 12oz healthy.
Moved house without warning.
Started studying at tafe
and heaps more
Different sights, food, people and lifestyle have hit me hard and fast when i least expected to have to deal with all that emotion again.
Anyways, I've had big time writers block and I've had so much to say but can"t get it onto the paper at the moment.
I've tried everything to inspire me...Not a happening thing..lol
WHAT I"M LOOKING FOR!!
1 I'm after anything inspiring to get me to write again, my favourite poems are LOVE, DARK, ANGST.
.
2 No offense to anyone but please no religous entries. sorry
3 I'm allowing prewrites and won't limit your entries but I only have 100 places open for judgement so
please be fair to everyone else and don't add more than 4
4 I promise to comment and view each entry before I make my desicion..
5 at the moment I can only offer 300 points for 1st place and 50 points each for 2nd and 3rd.
This is all the points i have.. sorry
6 Please use spell check.. as long as i can read your work i can judge it fairly and equally
7 Closes in two weeks.. Have fun xx
IM me with any questions.
thanks guys good luck
I've been going through quite a lot of changes in my life at the moment and everything i do seems to be making me change my outlook on life just that little bit more.
I have a new baby brother born 22 June08, 6pnd 12oz healthy.
Moved house without warning.
Started studying at tafe
and heaps more
Different sights, food, people and lifestyle have hit me hard and fast when i least expected to have to deal with all that emotion again.
Anyways, I've had big time writers block and I've had so much to say but can"t get it onto the paper at the moment.
I've tried everything to inspire me...Not a happening thing..lol
WHAT I"M LOOKING FOR!!
1 I'm after anything inspiring to get me to write again, my favourite poems are LOVE, DARK, ANGST.
.
2 No offense to anyone but please no religous entries. sorry
3 I'm allowing prewrites and won't limit your entries but I only have 100 places open for judgement so
please be fair to everyone else and don't add more than 4
4 I promise to comment and view each entry before I make my desicion..
5 at the moment I can only offer 300 points for 1st place and 50 points each for 2nd and 3rd.
This is all the points i have.. sorry
6 Please use spell check.. as long as i can read your work i can judge it fairly and equally
7 Closes in two weeks.. Have fun xx
IM me with any questions.
thanks guys good luck
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 24, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 50, Bronze: 50
- Final notes: Thankyou to everyone who enterd their work and shared it with me. I took ages to judge as i couldn't decide who should win there were so many great poems here..
FIRST PLACE GOES TO :
A MILLION TINY PIECES
SECOND PLACE GOES TO:
HURT ME
THIRD PLACE GOES TO:
I SAVED ME
I can't see who wrote these beautiful pieces as author identity is hidden while i'm judging.
MENTIONS TO ;
THAT'S NOT ME
ONE MORE GOODBYE
AND
WHEN YOU LOOK AT ME WHAT DO YOU SEE?
thanks again everyone here keep writing and best wishes to all
love Stacey
xx
Contest Winners
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A battered, bruised, shell of a girl,
who's too afraid to just face the world,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Hurt me,
Cut me,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4523859, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Silent tears fall,
bleeding through my veil,by SaviDropKick.Oi. 21 lines, 22 comments, on Aug 7 4:31 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4516437, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Skin flows in endless blankets,
pulses quickening with everyby Jasmine Rayne 29 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 13 9:35 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Entries [41]
1 - 41 of 41
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Was torn apart
like seams of a healing woundby orchidfalls 50 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 21 4:12 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Oh Pastel, sweet Pastel,
Thou art my muse.by Fritz O skennick 32 lines, 22 comments, on Nov 23 11:42 AM 2007. In Longing., Ode., Old English, Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When your mummy told me
She was expecting you• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Its been so long,
since i felt this way.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
There we all stood,
at 10:00 pm• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Step One: Step up.
Step Two: Look up.by subliminalj 45 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 21 2:07 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
a white '59 strat lies naked on the floor of Joe's garage,
evidence of jam sessions past,by kill the lights 25 lines, 14 comments, on Jul 23 10:18 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It's that beat of the heart, that twinkle in the eye,by Islanddreamer 7 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 13 12:01 AM 2008. In Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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No
That shallow breath was quick and falseby subliminalj 25 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 15 7:56 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When he kissed me
the very first timeby ProudMomma 28 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 7 7:36 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My mind is always racing, never slowing down...by sunflowers21573 19 lines, 26 comments, on Nov 9 2:23 PM 2007. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Remember me when I am dead...by sunflowers21573 14 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 21 8:35 PM 2008. In Sadness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The numbness brings me pain
And the pain brings numbnessby subliminalj 27 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 4 1:43 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Giving into the pain
Deafening screams take overby ley527 28 lines, 58 comments, on Dec 3 9:01 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You need to clean yourself up. She said. because when you put yourself into that illegal trance, you hold your arms out and embrace the abs• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Soul meets soul on a lovers lipsby orchidfalls 18 lines, 14 comments, on May 14 12:46 PM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Cars rumble on the
dirt roads pass byby Jasmine Rayne 29 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 19 4:23 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Open mouth hanging with
deliberate hunger; somethingby Jasmine Rayne 39 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 21 9:43 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
Mutual death...life in every breath...
Living as if dead...Seeking more than my daily bread...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I think you got it all wrong
All wrong, in this songby subliminalj 86 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 9 4:16 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I stood in a parking lot
bits of trash blew byby bluecollarlove 24 lines, 37 comments, on Sep 1 10:52 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Time is the link between the blink of an eye and the distance between
nearby and faraway, all by itself it can heal your pain, bring on t• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Majestic beauty
To my majestic beauty please know that I am forever in your debt. I beseech you wake me and guide me on my quest. Brightenby Bosiarbooger 31 lines, 19 comments, on Jul 17 2:30 PM 2008. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
If i should die before i wake,
its of the heart,by SaviDropKick.Oi. 15 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 27 4:03 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Your illusion that you are somehow,
and I am not.• Commented on by judge. -
(Is this what the cradle bears?
A poet without teeth.)• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Colour me hues like
communistic washout inby Jasmine Rayne 30 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 20 9:15 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I write not for royalty,
my quill helps keep me sane.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Very painful though it was,
It did not at all matter.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
